【正文】 il, both your dream and your parents’ wish won’t be able to be realized. That’s the worse thing nobody wants to see. Simply put, keep your dream! Communicate more with you parents, and ask your teacher for help if necessary!【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如in my opinion，have to do，take a long talk with，on the one/other hand，enough to do，connect with，care about，want you to be better，both …and，be able to，ask for help等。而并列結構Communicate more with you parents, and ask your teacher for help if necessary!和You should let them know that you’re serious about learning art and you’re clever enough to plan the future for yourself./ So this is the best chance for you to achieve your dream, though it’s just the very beginning to enter an art school./ If you fail, both your dream and your parents’ wish won’t be able to be ，豐富了短文內容，使表達多樣化，是本文的亮點。在學習中注意總結牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章表達更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！军c睛】書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內容經整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結構以便得到較高的分數(shù)。7．假如你是李華，請你根據(jù)以下提示用英語寫一封保護大象的倡議書。 提示：陸地上最大的哺乳動物，可以活到80歲。目前數(shù)量在減少，因為：1）人們砍伐森林，大象漸漸失去家園；2）人們捕殺大象，獲取象牙。3）應如何保護它們(不少于三條)。要求：1）恰當運用比較級和最高級；2）80詞左右。倡議書的結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：哺乳動物mammal。 象牙ivoryDear classmates_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I believe everyone39。s contribution (貢獻) can make a big difference. Yours,Lihua【答案】Dear classmates,Elephants are the largest mammals on the land and they can live up to be eighty years. But now the number of the elephants is decreasing because of the following reasons. Firstly, people cut down trees in the forest, so elephants are losing their homes. Secondly, people also kill elephants for their ivory.As a result, we need to do something to help them. First, we should plant more trees to build the homes for elephants. Second, we can put up post on the street to tell people that it is against the law to kill elephants. Or we can also hold some activities in some public places to spread the idea of protecting the elephants. I believe everyone39。s contribution (貢獻) can make a big difference. Yours,Lihua【解析】【詳解】本文是一封倡議書,倡議大家保護大象。文章共分為三個方面的內容，首先描述大象想在所處的現(xiàn)狀，然后說明出現(xiàn)這種狀況的原因，最后為了保護的大象我們應該如何去做。時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時。提出倡議時可以使用We can/ We should/ Let’s/We’d better的表示建議的句子。寫作時注意不要使用太復雜的句型，以免出現(xiàn)語法錯誤，為使句子具有連貫性，可以適當使用連詞。本篇文章內容完整，符合材料要求，Elephants are the largest mammals …,及First, we should plant more trees 也使用到了比較級和最高級；Firstly,…. Secondly,…等詞的使用使文章具有層次性，條理清晰。并且一些連詞的使用，比如so, or, but等也使文章具有連貫性，是一篇不錯的文章。8．題目①假如你是李華，你們學校的英國友好校下周將要來訪。學校國際部正在招募接待英國學生的志愿者，陪伴他們度過周末。你想成為志愿者。請用英語寫一封申請信，在信中說明你申請的理由，以及你打算拿給英國學生安排哪些周末活動。提示詞語：get along with, friendly, places of interest, Chinese dishes提示問題：1. Why would you like to be a volunteer?2. What do you plan to do during the weekend?Dear Sir/Madam，I would like to be a volunteer to receive the British students. I39。m looking forward to your early reply.Yours，Li Hiua【答案】Dear SiraMadam.I would like to be a volunteer to receive the British students I like making friends andI am outgoing，so it39。s easy for me to get along well with them.I have some plans for the of all，there are a lot of places of interest in Beijing，so I plan to take them to some places like the Great Wall，the Forbidden City and so on.I39。ll also cook some Chinese dishes for am sure they will have a great and unforgettable time in Beijing.I39。m looking forward to your early reply.Yours，Li lHua【解析】【分析】本篇是材料作文，以書信格式，根據(jù)所給材料寫申請信；書寫時材料要用全，注意緊扣主題，結構嚴謹?！驹斀狻浚缘谝蝗朔Q向學校國際部申請當志愿者；根據(jù)材料提示，介紹自己的情況用一般現(xiàn)在時，計劃如何安排周末活動用一般將來時。，第一層闡述自己申請的理由，介紹自己開朗的性格適合志愿者的工作；第二層詳細介紹給英國學生安排哪些周末活動；最后表明自己的期待。文體正確，文句通順，內容完整。，是文章文句精彩。如：用不定式would like to be a volunteer to receive the British students闡述自己的愿望，make friends、It39。s easy for me to get along well with等介紹自己合適志愿者的工作；用動詞短語have some plans for、 介詞短語like the Great Wall，the Forbidden City and so on.、賓語從句I am sure they will have a great and unforgettable time in ，短語豐富，句型多樣。9．書面表達A small thing提示：請根據(jù)所給題目“A small thing”寫一篇英語短文，記敘一件你經歷過的小事。要求：，書寫規(guī)范，卷面整潔，詞數(shù)100左右；2. 文中不得使用你的真實姓名，校名，否則以零分計。 【答案】A small thingIt was a sunny and warm day. My father told me he would teach me how to ride a bike. I was so happy at first. However, I fell down on the ground. I cried loudly and wanted to gives up. My father smiled and said we should be a person who never give up. He encouraged me to stand up and continue. After one hour, I could ride the bike without the help of my father. This is one small thing that I will never forget. It tells me that although we will have all kinds of difficulties in our life, we should never give up. 【解析】【詳解】本文要記述自己經歷過的一件小事, 在時態(tài)上用一般過去時。本篇文章,首先開篇點題,指出事情發(fā)生的時間及所經歷的事件。It was a sunny and warm day. My father told me he would teach me how to ride a ，詞語at first，However,…. After one hour,的使用使整篇文章渾然一體。最后一段是從這件小事中得出的感悟，It tells me that although we will have all kinds of difficulties in our life, we should never give up. 對這件小事進行了總結，更使文章在思想上得到了升華。文章時態(tài)使用正確，表達準確，事件本身思路清晰，是一篇不錯的文章。【點睛】認真審題，看清題目要求，在描述事件時，要注意清晰表達事情發(fā)生的開端，內容及結尾。必要時要適當使用連詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢，文章最后注意對整個故事進行總結，最好能夠從故事中得出自己的感悟，在敘述故事的同時使文章具有思想性。寫完文章后注意檢查有誤單詞拼寫錯誤，語法使用錯誤，字數(shù)是否達到要求。