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l, let us manage our lucky money properly. We should use our money in a meaningful way.【解析】【詳解】每年春節(jié),每個孩子都能收到來自長輩的壓歲錢(luckymoney)。隨著生活水平的提高,大部分孩子得到越來越多的壓歲錢,有些甚至通過微信(WeChat)或支付寶(Alipay)收壓歲錢。同學(xué)們該如何管理自己的錢,讓自己的錢用得更有意義?這是一篇給材料作文,本題所給材料比較詳細(xì),寫作中注意將所給內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來,不能逐字翻譯。通過閱讀材料可知這篇短文主要使用的人稱就是第一人稱,時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài),注意謂語動詞的變化。動筆前可以按照材料內(nèi)容列出簡單提綱,寫作中注意語義通順,符合邏輯關(guān)系。上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞。【點睛】文章使用了很好的短語和句子:In order to make good use of the lucky money, I think we can do the following things. First, we should save part of the money for our study instead of wasting it on video 。8.書面表達(dá)在本周班會課上,同學(xué)們對“初中生什么時候放學(xué)比較合適?”這一問題進(jìn)行了熱烈的討論。大部分同學(xué)認(rèn)為初中生應(yīng)該在5點左右放學(xué),下表所列里大家的發(fā)言記錄。請你寫一篇短文介紹大家的想法并闡述你的觀點。Time to leave schoolActivities to do after schoolat 5 o’clockat 4:45at 5 o’clock...exercise to keep healthy and read booksdo what we want, such as listening to musictake a parttime job...注意:(1)短文必須包括表格中所有要點,并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;(2)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名和校名;(3)詞數(shù):80100;(4)短文開頭僅供參考,不計入總詞數(shù)。短文開頭:“What time should junior high school students leave school?” This week we have held a class meeting to talk about it. Here is the result of the discussion.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】“What time should junior high school students leave school?”This week we have held a class meeting to talk about it. Here is the result of the discussion.Most students think that students should leave school at about 5 o 39。clock. They can exercise to keep healthy and read more interesting books after school.Some think that students should leave school at 4:45, because they can have more time to do what they want to do, such as listening to music.A few think 5 o 39。clock is the best time to finish school. After school, they can do parttime jobs, such as collecting discarded plastic bottles to sell for money.I am in favor of leaving school at five o39。clock. Besides having time to play tennis, I can also draw some pictures I like.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語,為文章增色不少,如hold a class meeting,talk about,the result of,keep healthy,after school,have more time to do,want to do,such as,listen to music,in favor of,clean the room,play tennis等。而復(fù)雜并列結(jié)構(gòu)They can exercise to keep healthy and read more interesting books after students think that students should leave school at about 5 o 39。clock./ Some think that students should leave school at 4:45, because they can have more time to do what they want to do, such as listening to ,豐富了短文內(nèi)容,使表達(dá)多樣化;同時Most students think…/ Some think…/ A few think…使敘述條理,層次分明,是本文的亮點。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性,也更富有條理?!军c睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維,考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以,考生不能遺漏要點,要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式,盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。9.書面表達(dá)近日,你校迎來一批來自英國的交流生,學(xué)校組織學(xué)生向他們介紹中國的傳統(tǒng)文化。請你根據(jù)表格信息寫一篇題為Chinese Tea的英語短文,向英國交流生介紹中國的茶文化。歷史歷史悠久,享譽世界。種類種類多樣,各具特色。習(xí)俗以茶會友,饋贈親朋。功效有益健康,提神醒腦。影響……(自擬兩點)。注意:,適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息。Chinese TeaTea is an important part of Chinese culture. 【答案】Tea is an important part of Chinese culture. It has a long history and it is famous all over the world. There’re many kinds of tea in China. Each of them has its own characteristics. Most Chinese like drinking often treat friends with often buy tea for their friends and relatives as a tea is good for people’s cup of tea can make relaxed and energetic.Tea not only helps foreigners know about China but also builds a bridge between the East and the West.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇話題作文,題目是Chinese Tea。本文人稱主要是第三人稱,時態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時。認(rèn)為閱讀材料,認(rèn)真審題,確定主題,表格信息提示就是本文的提綱要點,根據(jù)要點適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,列出提綱。短文必須包含提示內(nèi)容,條理清楚,字?jǐn)?shù)90詞左右。要運用合適的連接詞或過渡詞,使文章具有連貫性。寫完以后,注意再讀一遍,看看有無單詞拼寫、標(biāo)點、語法錯誤(時態(tài)、主謂一致等)。本文提綱:茶是中國文化的重要組成部分。它歷史悠久,享譽世界。中國有很多種茶。它們中的每一個都有自己的特點。大多數(shù)中國人喜歡喝茶。人們經(jīng)常用茶來招待朋友。他們經(jīng)常給朋友和親戚買茶作為禮物。喝茶有益于人們的健康。一杯茶可以使人放松和精力充沛。茶不僅有助于外國人了解中國,而且能在東西方之間架起一座橋梁。【點睛】書面表達(dá)要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維,考查運用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力??忌荒苓z漏要點,要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式,盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。語言要規(guī)范,時態(tài)運用要正確,敘述清楚條里,學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。注意書寫的規(guī)范:大小寫、標(biāo)點符號等的正確運用。注意檢查:單詞拼寫、語法、動詞時態(tài)、語序、主謂一致等。寫作六步法::文體,時態(tài),人稱。:要點是否齊全,適當(dāng)補充。:通過增加狀語,定語,連詞,使句子意思飽滿充實。,合理使用連詞。:拼寫是否錯誤,語法時態(tài)是否正確,連詞是否恰當(dāng)?shù)?。:注意書寫工整美觀整潔。