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ings and no good thing ever dies.”The Shawshank Kedemption 中文譯名:《肖申克的救贖》“We are all running very hard. We are all dream chasers(追夢人).”President Xi Jingping以上材料告訴我們:生活是豐富多彩的,有快樂幸福也有傷心失落。但既然選擇了遠(yuǎn)方,便只顧風(fēng)雨兼程。所以在學(xué)習(xí)和生活中,我們要滿懷希望、努力奔跑、追逐夢想。請以Dream Chaser為題,談?wù)勀阕约旱挠^點(diǎn)。要點(diǎn)提示:,并努力讓它成為現(xiàn)實(shí);,使自己不斷強(qiáng)大;,積極參加社會(huì)活動(dòng);。寫作要求:,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮使行文連貫; ,字跡工整,詞數(shù)不少于80;,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);。Dream ChaserAs we know, life is not always smooth. Sometimes we may feel satisfied and sometimes we may feel ______________________________________________________________________________【答案】As we know, life is not always smooth. Sometimes we may feel satisfied and sometimes we may feel upset. In order to make our dream e true, firstly we should set a practical goal. But just having a goal is not enough. More importantly, we need to study hard to make ourselves stronger. Besides, as teenagers, it is necessary for us to take part in more social activities. We can learn a lot from each other by joining in those social activities. However, there will be many difficulties in both our daily life and study, so please keep patient and be brave to face these challenges. Finally, all our efforts are meaningful and one day our dream will be achieved.【解析】【詳解】:這是一篇材料作文。主要說明要有自己的目標(biāo),努力實(shí)現(xiàn)目標(biāo)應(yīng)做到勤奮學(xué)習(xí),使自己不斷強(qiáng)大;正確面對困難,積極參加社會(huì)活動(dòng)。:例文用第一人稱來敘述主要內(nèi)容;時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主,主要講述如何實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的目標(biāo)(Firstly,…More importantly,…Besides,…Finally,…)。承接文章開頭,句意完整,避免漢語式英語,敘述條理清晰。:高分短語:feel satisfied;feel upset;e true;set a practical goal;both…and…;keep patient。高分句型:It is +adj. + for sb. +to do sth.;there be句型;祈使句;need to do sth.。10. 朋友是我們生活的組成部分,他們總是在我們最需要幫助的時(shí)候陪伴我們。你最好的朋友是誰?你是怎么看待你們的友誼的?請以“My Best Friend ”為題,根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇英語短文。1. 簡要介紹你最好的朋友的外貌和性格。2. 介紹和你朋友之間發(fā)生的一件令人難忘的事;3. 你是怎樣看待你們之間的友誼的要求:1. 語句連貫通順,文章銜接緊密2. 詞數(shù)801003. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)校名及姓名Friends are very important in our life. They always help us when we are in need.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My best friendFriends are very important in our life. They always help us when we are in need. Everyone needs friends to talk with and get confidence from.My best friend is Jenny. She is a quiet girl. She is always friendly and helpful. She is a tall girl with long hair. She does well in all the subjects and gets on well with others at school.I was weak in maths. One day, I failed in maths exam. I was so sad that I couldn’t help crying. Jenny encouraged me a lot. From then on, she helped me with my maths, With her help, I got an A in the next maths exam. I was really thankful to her.I think friendship is a necessary part of our lives. I want to keep our friendship forever.【解析】【詳解】試題分析:這是一個(gè)提綱作文。題目給出了標(biāo)題及寫作要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)題目要求可知,人稱以第三人稱為主。時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)。我們要做的就是用正確的英語句子來組織這些材料,在描寫外貌和性格時(shí),會(huì)用到系表結(jié)構(gòu),注意主謂一致關(guān)系。介紹發(fā)生的一件難忘的事情,要用到一般過去時(shí)態(tài)。另外在寫作時(shí)可以適當(dāng)使用一些連詞,使之上下連貫,合乎邏輯。【點(diǎn)睛】人物介紹是記敘文中常見的一種寫作類型。內(nèi)容可以是介紹自己也可以介紹他人,包括姓名、年齡、外貌特征、興趣愛好,有時(shí)也可以包括日?;顒?dòng)。時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。在介紹長相時(shí)用“be+形容詞”來描述人物的身高、體重、身材等;用“have/has + (straight/curly) hair / (big/small) eyes/nose/mouth”來描述頭發(fā)或五官。用“wear + 某種衣服”來介紹某人的穿戴。用be good at doing ,用like sth./doing “My/His/her favorite + 名詞+ is …”來介紹某人的最愛。當(dāng)主語是第三人稱單數(shù)時(shí),注意主謂一致關(guān)系。