【正文】 lp others.高考英語作文范文背誦：假設(shè)你是李華，你的英國筆友Bob將于九月到你所在城市的建新華文學(xué)中文，來信請你在學(xué)校附近為他找一套住房。請按照圖畫提供的信息，寫信介紹住房的情況，并告知住房面積為25平方米，月租500元。留意：：100左右：：房租—Tent(n.).I’m very happy to receive your letter, and I’m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 squaremetres small fiat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.Hope you will e here soon!All the best!Yours, Li Hua總分值理由本文格式正確，意思表述完好，行文流暢自然。作者在寫作過程中留意長短句并用，還使用了以which，’引導(dǎo)的非限定性定語從句，從而使文章層次明晰，富于變化，不愧為考場佳作。Dear Bob,Wele to China! You wrote to me to find a place for you.I have found an apartment on Fangcao Street near Jianxin Chinese School. It is on the third floor and there’re three rooms in it: a bedroom, a kitchen, and a bathroom. There is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair in the bedroom. The house is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan per month.Also from this house you can get to your school easily. Just take the bus at the busstop in front of thebuilding. It is only one stop. At last, will you please tell me the time you arrive? Then I’U be able to meet you at the airport, see you.Best wishes !Yours, Li Hua總分值理由本文格式正確，內(nèi)容完好，表述明晰，銜接嚴(yán)密流暢，時態(tài)語態(tài)使用精確，特別是結(jié)尾末段適度的發(fā)揮，既充實(shí)了內(nèi)容，又符合邏輯，成為本文與眾不同的亮點(diǎn)。Dear Bob,How are you these days?I’m so glad to know that you’ll e to our city to learn Chinese. You asked me to find a place for you. Now I’ve found one which I think is pretty good. The place is on Fang Cao Street which is near the bus stop. It’s just one stop away from Jianxin Chinese School.There are three rooms, a kitchen, a bathroom and a bedroom. Though it is not very big, only 25 square metres, I think it is suitable. By the way, the rent is 500 yuan per month. I hope you’ll like it. If not, I’ll try to find another place for you.Yours,Li Hua總分值理由本文內(nèi)在邏輯性特別強(qiáng)，由遠(yuǎn)及近。由外及內(nèi)，層次明晰，參差有致。同時讓步狀語從句運(yùn)用得恰到好處，特別出彩，再那么構(gòu)造完好，從開頭的征詢候語到結(jié)尾都特別完備。Dear Bob,I’m so glad that you are ing to learn Chinese here. I’ve already found you a house near our school. I’d like to tell you something about it.You may get on bus at Fang Cao Street and the next stop is just Jian Xin Chinese School. The house is near the school. It is about 25 square metres. In the bedroom, there is a bed, a sofa standing against the wall and a table near the window. You may find a light on the table and a chair next to it. There are two other rooms connecting the bedroom. The left one is a bathroom and the right one is a kitchen. So you may cook by yourself. The rent for the house is 500 yuan per month. Hope you’ll enjoy staying here!Yours,Li Hua總分值理由本文內(nèi)容詳細(xì)，詳略得當(dāng)，表述方式特別有制造力和新意，長短句并用，語言構(gòu)造富于變化，參差有致，順暢圓潤，尤其是情態(tài)動詞和分詞的運(yùn)用特別獨(dú)到，為文章增色不少。Dear Bob,I’m glad to hear from you.Wele to our city in september. I’ve found a suitable house for you. The house is on Fang Cao Street, not far from the Jianxin Chinese School. If you take the bus, it is just one stop.It is a flat on the third floor of a building. It has three rooms, a livingroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. You can cook yourself. The mirror, the basin and the bathtub are very convenient for you. In the livingroom, there is a bed, a sofa and a desk with chair. The desk is next to the window. It will be good for study. The total size is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan a month.Yours,Li Hua