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【正文】 words can no longer express my feelings. how kind and responsible can a teacher be? you just gave me the perfect answer. i can clearly remember how much i hated learning new english words at first. to be honest, i really wanted to give up. as soon as you noticed this, you offered to help me by telling me some shortcuts to learn them. you never failed to encourage me even when i made only a little progress. little by little, my interest in english grew and now i’m a top student in english. i want to say thanks to you. i will work harder in the future to live up to your expectations. i hope you can be happy and healthy forever. yours xiaoming 點(diǎn)評(píng)： 這篇修正后的作文不管在語言表達(dá)以及文章內(nèi)涵方面都是相當(dāng)優(yōu)秀的?！ ∈紫?，開頭at this moment, words can no longer express my feelings. 短短的一句話便把作者如今的激動(dòng)和對(duì)教師的感激之情表達(dá)得特別充分。第二段首句的設(shè)征詢句how kind and responsible can a teacher be? 更是精彩。在描寫本人起初對(duì)英語單詞的厭煩時(shí)，作者用了一個(gè)how 所引導(dǎo)的賓語從句替代原文的一般句式?！ ∥恼碌膸讉€(gè)過渡語也是恰到好處: to be honest, little by little等，均在一定程度上加強(qiáng)了文章的連接性。此外，幾個(gè)表達(dá)法也相當(dāng)?shù)氐?、出彩，比方?live up to one’s expectations (不辜負(fù)某人的期望)表示本人的決心，使得整篇文章的感情更加飽滿、真誠(chéng)，給人留下了深化的印象。
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