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吸引HR求職信就是需要寫(xiě)一首好字。有些求職信雖然文筆通順、字跡工整,但對(duì)方看起來(lái)內(nèi)心總有些不悅,甚至反感。最常見(jiàn)的問(wèn)題:一是給對(duì)方限定答復(fù)時(shí)間,如“敬請(qǐng)某月某日前復(fù)信為勝等,表面上看相當(dāng)客氣,可是客氣之中卻給對(duì)方限定了時(shí)間,容易引起反感;二是給對(duì)方規(guī)定義務(wù),如”盼望獲得貴單位的尊重和考慮“等,好像對(duì)方如果不接收你就是不尊重你,這當(dāng)然是對(duì)方難以接受的;三是以上壓下的口氣,如”貴單位總經(jīng)理(或某級(jí)領(lǐng)導(dǎo))某先生要我直接寫(xiě)信給你“或”某長(zhǎng)很關(guān)心我的求職問(wèn)題,特讓我寫(xiě)信找你“等,會(huì)給人一種”既然如此,何必多此一舉“的感覺(jué),你的求職信很可能就馬上進(jìn)了廢紙簍;四?quot。吊起來(lái)賣(mài)”,如“現(xiàn)有幾家公司欲聘我,所以請(qǐng)你們從速答復(fù)”,這樣往往可能會(huì)激怒對(duì)方而將求職信直接扔進(jìn)垃圾箱。第五篇:寫(xiě)英文求職信應(yīng)注意的細(xì)節(jié)問(wèn)題求職信 的第一段說(shuō)明寫(xiě)信的目的,有些專(zhuān)家認(rèn)為不宜用分詞子句。如用下面的句子做開(kāi)頭,因?yàn)檫@樣的句子被人用得大多,顯得陳腐,失去特點(diǎn)。Replying to your advertisement …… Answering your advertisement …… Believing that there is an opportunity …… Thinking that there is a vacancy in your pany …… Having read your ad ……再比較下列三句。(1)句較差,經(jīng)過(guò)修改后(2)句顯得較恰當(dāng)。A:(1)Replying to your recent advertisement in the Boston Evening Globe, I wish to apply for the position of sales manager……(2)In applying for the position of sales manager I offer my qualifications, which I believe will meet your exacting :(1)I believe after reading your advertisement in this mornings Journal that you have just the opportunity I am looking for.(2)your advertisement in this mornings Journal for an adjustment manager prompts me to offer you my qualifications for this positionC:(1)Having read your advertisement in the New York Times for an accountant, I thought you might be interested in my application.(2)In your advertisement for an accountant, you indicated that you require the services of a petent person, with thorough training in the field of cost consider me an applicant for the are my reasons for believing I am qualified for this ,可用類(lèi)似的句子:A:I hesitate to state a definite salary, but, as long as you have requested me to , I should consider 6,500 a month ,但既然您要我說(shuō)明,我認(rèn)為月薪六千五百元就滿意了。B: Although it is difficult for me to say what pensation I should deserve, I should consider******a month a fair initial ,我認(rèn)為每月******起薪合適。C:I feel it is presumptuous of me to state what my salary should first consideration is to satisfy you , while I am serving my apprenticeship, I should consider*