【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 aby is one year old, there is a ceremony of OneYearOld to Chinese traditional custom, nobody will give any instruction or cue to the baby so that it is left free to choose by the baby catch the articles it likes, the family can then make prediction about its potential interest, future career and development.第三篇：最新大學(xué)英語四級真題作文2012年6月四級作文On Excessive PackagingNowadays the phenomena of excessive packaging of goods are prevailing in our society: clothes swathed in tissue paper, placed in cardboard box and finally wrapped in welldesigned plastic bags, imported bottles of grape wine packed in wooden boxes, fruits put in handwoven baskets, to name but a are several causes of excessive first reason is that a large number of panies believe that they can attract customers’ attention and stimulate their purchasing desire by overpackaging their goods, thus gaining more the other hand, quite a number of consumers mistakenly hold that the more delicate the package is, the better the quality will be, thus encouraging excessive my point of view, excessive packaging has disastrous consequences, including the loss of precious resources, excessive consumption of water and energy, and unnecessary extraction of scarce land for solve the problem, it’s necessary to take the following , laws and regulations must be made to restrict excessive packaging of addition, we need to raise consumer’s awareness that excessive packaging doesn’t equal to high quality and advocate packaging recycling.【解析】本次作文的話題是“過度包裝”，話題不斷新，考生應(yīng)該都比較熟悉。寫好本篇作文的關(guān)鍵在于緊跟題目所列提綱：現(xiàn)象——原因——看法和建議，確定相應(yīng)的寫作結(jié)構(gòu)。重點分析產(chǎn)生此現(xiàn)象的原因有哪些，把最重要的兩三點羅列下來。最后，根據(jù)分析出的原因提供相應(yīng)的建議。范文首段開門見山，首先一句話總結(jié)如今社會上過度包裝現(xiàn)象盛行，而后舉出一些實例補充說明。第二段重點從公司和消費者兩方面論述產(chǎn)生過度包裝的原因。公司方面是為了吸引顧客，刺激消費，贏取更多的利潤；消費者方面是認(rèn)為包裝越精美，質(zhì)量越好這種錯誤的消費意識。接下來作者表明自己的看法，認(rèn)為過度包裝會導(dǎo)致很多問題：稀缺資源的流失；水，能源的過度消耗以及產(chǎn)生不必要的垃圾場等。2011年12月四級作文Directions: You39。re allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will by menting on the humorous saying, “Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the ’ve done it hundreds of time.”You39。d write at least 120 words but no more than 180 :。，不刻苦學(xué)習(xí)，終究不會成為有用之才Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong WillWith the ing of a brand new era full of opportunities and innovations, the issue of how to succeed has aroused growing concern in the there are thousands of ways to success, in my opinion, a strong will is the important guarantee of success, just as a proverb says, “Where there is a will there is a way”.The long history of human being has proved that only those who have a strong will can fulfill great mission and achieve success at succeeds without a strong Mao Zedong, one of the great founders of the People’s Republic of China, as an without the strong will to save Chinese people from heavy disaster and build a prosperous, democratic and civilized new country, how could he drive Japanese out of China and bee such a famous leader in the world?If we as a student want to be successful in the future, the strong will on hardworking is the most , we have been entering an information age with rapid update of firstly seizes and keeps up with the development of advanced information can succeeds at , studying hard to get more knowledge and improve our ability to handle plicated problems as possible is the only way to lay the solid foundation of future Succeeds Without a Strong Will“Where there is a will, there is way” is an old proverb which almost everyone knows, but not all understand it so , it means that if you are really resolved to do something, no matter how difficult it might be, never give fact, strong will is a kind of good quality which successful people should great man is always one who has a firm resolution and an inflexible will never succeed all his life without a firm will to get the final a rule, great tasks are acplished by men of strong example, Yatsen, the founder of the Republic of China, set the Chinese people free from the Manchurian rule through a long period of hard of his attempts failed and many of his followers were killed, but he had an inflexible spirit and stuck to his , he made the revolution of 1911 a same is true of men in all walks of is quite obvious that there is nothing difficult in the world, if you make up your mind to do it, you will certainly acplish your stands to as for students like us, we should have a good attitude towards with difficulties and failures, keep heads up and never give , we should make full preparation, though strong will help us overe the difficulties, it is not for person who has no 標(biāo)準(zhǔn)版Doing Shopping OnlineWith the development of the Internet, shopping is no longer a tiring click your mouse to choose the articles you like, and the purchase is don39。t even have to step out of the seems all easy and , people39。s opinions vary on this believe that on line shopping is time and money plentiful selection options, they can buy whatever they like at any time others insist that mispurchasing alone is annoying enough, not to mention the credibility of the sellers and the safety of their my opinion, the convenience and excitement of on line shopping is beyond all the meantime, we must always bear in mind that certain traps do exist, so we39。d better make sure the sellers are trustworthy before addition, we should also guard ourselves from the potential hackers who might steal our account ：這是一篇“中等偏上”的學(xué)生作文。本文先對網(wǎng)購熱潮進行簡介，引出全篇；接著對網(wǎng)絡(luò)購物的正反兩方面進行對比；最后提出自己的看法結(jié)束全篇。整體看思路清晰，邏輯嚴(yán)密，行文流暢，用語較為地道。下面說一下這篇文章的有待提高之處：，能看得出該同學(xué)試圖采用議論文的“三段式”（提出問題、分析問題、解決問題）。但是，以“With the development of the Internet”為開首語，有些落入俗套，有硬套模板的嫌疑。稍加注意，應(yīng)該能寫出更好的句子。，有些語句稍顯啰嗦，比如With plentiful selection options? 簡化成With plentiful selections? 更好，意思沒有絲毫減損，表達力反而增強許多。高分版With the help of the ever rapid development of internet technology, online shopping is ing into fashion in most of shopping is weled by most people due to various the perspective of consumer, it can save some time for people who don39。t have much spare c