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入語的寫作手法 our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. 用了非常精彩的被動 Additionally 替換 In addition / Besides Deliver 替換 send There is no denying that , however, puters can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence ,***, porn pictures, AVfilms emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few citizens to copying. 這個句子有三個精彩之處, 首先 There is no denying that這個句型,還有 however作為插入語 function in the disservice of 替換 do harm to Emerging 代替 appearing ( fading 代替 disappearing ) Net citizen 網(wǎng)民,屬于精彩用詞 As a classic proverb goes, no garden has no weeds. Computers do play a positive role in the development of people39。 lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet. We should, therefore, take advantage of … 使用插入語 Fruits (而且 fruits 用的非常形象, merits/ virtues) 替換 advantage ( defects 替換 disadvantage ) Every coin has two sides important / good 等 a part of bad effects / influences aspect 各位同學,上面的作文里有這么