【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 hem, dieting [5]not only is useless but also might damage their health. [3]For another, some people lack enough knowledge on how to diet scientifically. [3]As a result, they are likely to suffer from malnutrition. 　　[6]Considering the serious damage of unhealthy dieting, we should be cautious in dieting. [3]In my opinion, dieting,[7]for whatever reasons, needs professional guidance. [8]Only with right guidance can dieting work [9]as we expect. 　　關(guān)于節(jié)食減肥的英語作文【亮點點評】 　　[1]“尤其”，表示強調(diào)。 　　[2]“成為主力軍”。 　　[3]過渡銜接詞語，使文章條理清晰、銜接緊密。 　　[4]用于引出對危害或負面影響的闡述。 　　[5]“not only… but also”用于連接并列成分。 　　[6]“考慮到，鑒于”，介詞。 　　[7]“不管因為什么原因”，whatever意為“無論什么”。 　　[8]“only+狀語”位于句首，引起句子部分倒裝。 　　[9]“像我們期望的那樣”。 　　關(guān)于節(jié)食減肥的英語作文佳句臨摹 　?。篎or them, dieting not only is useless but also might damage their health. 　　臨?。夯蚣夹g(shù)不僅使動植物受益而且還有助于提高人類的生活質(zhì)量。 　　___________________________________________________________ 　?。篒n my opinion, dieting, for whatever reasons, needs professional guidance. 　　臨?。?無論你的目標(biāo)是什么，你都必須通過誠實的勞動來實現(xiàn)它。 　　___________________________________________________________ 　?。篛nly with right guidance can dieting work as we expect. 　　臨?。褐挥行逎M足夠的學(xué)分，學(xué)生才能夠獲準畢業(yè)。 　　___________________________________________________________ 　　【KEY】 　　1. Genetic technology helps not only the plant and animals but also human beings to live a higher quality 　　2. Whatever your aim is, you must worked honestly to attain it. 　　3. Only when adequate credits have been achieved can students gain the qualification for graduation.關(guān)于交通事故的英語作文Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a position on the topic Road Accidents. You should write at least 150 words, and base your position on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 　　1)交通事故會給人們的生命和財產(chǎn)帶來很大的損失 　　2)分析交通事故發(fā)生的主要原因 　　3)如何降低交通事故發(fā)生率Road Accidents ___________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ 　　關(guān)于交通事故的英語作文行文思路 　　本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點提出一個問題，提綱第2點要求分析造成該問題的原因，提綱第3點要求說明解決該問題的方法，由此可判斷本文應(yīng)為問題解決型作文。 　　根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應(yīng)包含如下內(nèi)容：指出道路事故的嚴重性及主要危害。分析導(dǎo)致道路事故的主要原因。說明應(yīng)該如何降低道路事故的發(fā)生率。 　　關(guān)于交通事故的英語作文高分范文 　　Road Accidents 　　Road accidents, [1]as one of the important social problems, have always been paid great concern. In most of the big cities, every day, there happen quite a few road accidents. In these accidents, many people suffer great property losses [2]and some of them even lose their lives. 　　[3]The following reasons contribute to road accidents. [4]Above all, traffic is being heavier and heavier, especially in big cities. More and more vehicles on road [5]increase the chances of accidents. [4]In addition, many drivers lack safety awareness and even don’t ply with the traffic regulations. For example, some drivers run the red light or drive after being drunk. [4]Besides, the [6]weak supervision and management of traffic control sectors is a noticeable reason. 　　[7]Considering the seriousness of the traffic problem, [8]it is high time for us to take more effective measures to solve it. [4]Firstly, the government should invest more money to improve public transportation and provide more transportation ways for people to choose. [4]Secondly, stricter laws and regulations should be made to punish those who break traffic regulations. [4]Finally, drivers should enhance safety awareness and develop good driving manners. [9]Only in this way could road accidents be avoided successfully. 　　關(guān)于交通事故的英語作文【亮點點評】 　　[1]插入語，as意為“作為”。 　　[2]表遞進。 　　[3]用于引出原因。 　　[4]過渡銜接詞語，使文章條理清晰、銜接緊密。 　　[5]“增加了…的機會或可能性”。 　　[6]“監(jiān)管不力”，weak的使用準確地道。 　　[7]“考慮到，鑒于”，介詞。 　　[8]用于引出解決辦法，表示解決問題的緊迫性,常譯為“早該是…的時候了”。 　　[9]“only+狀語”位于句首，引起句子部分倒裝。 　　關(guān)于交通事故的英語作文佳句臨摹 　?。篒n these accidents, many people suffer great property losses and some of them even lose their lives. 　　臨?。阂恍┤耸『罂赡軙兊没倚膯蕷?，甚至?xí)艞壋晒Φ南Ｍ?　　___________________________________________________________ 　?。篗ore and more vehicles on road increase the chances of accidents. 　　臨?。涸S多學(xué)生認為考取更多的證書可以增加他們找工作的機會。 　　___________________________________________________________ 　?。篒t is high time for us to take more effective measures to solve it. 　　臨?。阂虼?，我們早該關(guān)注一下人口過剩問題了。 　　___________________________________________________________ 　　【KEY】 　　1. Some people, after a failure, may bee discouraged and even give up their hope for success. 　　2. Many students believe that more certificates may increase the chances of their being employed. 　　3. Therefore, it is high time we paid special attention to the problem of overpopulation.(關(guān)于大學(xué)生就業(yè)難的英語作文 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a position on the topic College Students’ Job Hunting. You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:　　1)近年來出現(xiàn)大學(xué)生就業(yè)難的現(xiàn)象　　2)產(chǎn)生這一現(xiàn)象的原因　　3)如何解決這一問題　　關(guān)于大學(xué)生就業(yè)難的英語作文【思路點撥】　　本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點要求指出目前大學(xué)生就業(yè)難的現(xiàn)象，提綱第2點要求分析這種現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的原因，提綱第3點則要求闡述應(yīng)該如何解決這一問題，由此可判斷本文應(yīng)為問題解決型作文。　　根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應(yīng)包含以下內(nèi)容：提出大學(xué)生就業(yè)難的現(xiàn)象，指出現(xiàn)象的表現(xiàn)；說明現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的原因，如大學(xué)生追求目標(biāo)過高等；從幾個方面提出解決方法?！　￡P(guān)于大學(xué)生就業(yè)難的英語作文【參考范文】　　College Students’ Job Hunting　　Nowadays, the employment of college students is being more and more of a problem. About a decade ago, university students could find satisfactory and enviable jobs after graduation, while the things are quite different at present. In addition, according to statistics, about 30% of graduate students can’t find a job but stay at home after graduation?！　mployment difficulty of college students is due to the following reasons. Among these, the increasing recruitment of colleges and universities plays a vital role. In addition, many colleges and universities fail to adapt their courses to the development of economy?！　onsidering the seriousness of unemployment of college students, I think it is high time that we took effective measures to solve the problem. Above all, college students should realize their own defects and further improve themselves