【文章內容簡介】 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【教師評分與修改意見】______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【范文賞析】Our school holds Career Day once a year in March, offering us a chance to get familiar with different business and career options.Last Saturday, we arrived at the library punctually at 9am where the wholeday activities were to be held. Gathering at the gate , some of the students watched the arrangement on the poster hanging on the wall, trying to figure out the schedule of the day, The content seemed so attracting that we could hardly wait to step into the conference hall.Coming first was a lecture given by a wellknown professor with the theme titled “Career Introduction”. Impressed by not only the experienced analysis on the information of occupations of various kinds, but also, we got captured by the professors’ humorous tone. Thus, none of us were absentminded and took down useful tips on the note book.Next came the consulting meeting which offered us an awesome opportunity to work out our questions on jobchoosing. Seeking advice from the skillful consultant, we had a deeper knowledge of the vocations that we took great interests in.Last but not the least, we were given a chance to experience the work under the consultant’s guidance, which was really meaningful for it helped us have a better picture of our future as well as having a clearer goal.The time elapsed while we were enjoying the Career Day. Needless to say, the life road ahead will be long, our climb will be step, but with the great passion and strong determination, I felt sure that we will earn the valuable career through our industrious effort.【他山之石】請總結范文中對情節(jié)進行擴充的手法，并總結對你有啟發(fā)的語言點，然后仿寫句子。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________四、情景作文寫作技巧：注意起承轉合、場景轉換情景作文的四幅圖往往在時間、地點上存在大量的轉換。因此我們一定要運用恰當的過渡語，將時間和場景的轉換交代清楚?！纠摹考僭O你是紅星中學高二（1）班的班長李華，去年冬天你們班開展了“為西藏希望小學獻愛心”的活動。請根據以下四幅圖的先后順序，寫一篇英文短文向某中學生英語報投稿，介紹你們本次獻愛心活動的全過程。注意：詞數不少于60。Last winter, we carried out an activity themed “Helping the Children in the Hope PrimarySchoolinTibet”.【寫作點撥】這四幅圖，每一幅圖都發(fā)生在不同的地點。而且每一幅圖里，人物的心情都有著微妙的區(qū)別。所以我們在場景轉換時，也要注意區(qū)分人物心理的變化。同時，這篇作文存在著很大的抒情、議論的空間，有利于我們最大限度的發(fā)揮水平?！緦懽鞒醺濉縚________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【教師評分與修改意見】______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【范文賞析】Last week, we carried out an activity themed “helping the Children in the Hope Primary Scho