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es. 它帶給我許多美好的回憶。 單元專題聚焦 五 步 妙 解 審 單元專題聚焦 體裁 記敘文 話題 介紹你最喜歡的玩具 時態(tài) 一般現(xiàn)在時和現(xiàn)在完成時 人稱 第一人稱 段落 布局 開頭:開門見山,指出你最喜歡的玩具是什么。 主體:具體介紹你擁有它多長時間了,是誰給你的,你為 什么喜歡這個玩具等。 結(jié)尾: 描述感情??梢栽诮Y(jié)尾處描述你對這件玩具的喜 愛之情或點明它對于你的特殊意義。 單元專題聚焦 譴 ①我擁有了它。 _______________________________________ ②我六歲。 _______________________________________ (2)借助于 since將以上兩個簡單句合并成一個含有時間狀語從句的 復(fù)合句: ___________________________________________________ 單元專題聚焦 I have had it. I was six years old. I have had it since I was six years old. 模 開篇點題 具體介紹 My favorite toy is a toy panda. 單元專題聚焦 I have had it since I was six years old. My mother gave it to me. I like the toy panda because… It has given me many sweet memories. I’m lucky to have the toy panda. 表達感受 單元專題聚焦 My favorite toy is a toy panda. I have had it since I was six years old. My mother gave it tome. I like the toy panda because it’s very lovely. It’s special to me because it’s a birthday gift my mother gave me. I think it’s the best gift I have received so far. When I feel lonely, I always hug it in my arms. It always reminds me of my happy childhood. It has given me many sweet memories. I’m lucky to have the toy panda. 潤 單元專題聚焦 點 該篇作文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰,層次分明,感情真摯,行文流暢,是一篇標準的滿分作文。 1. 作者開篇點明了她最喜歡的玩具是玩具熊貓 (toy panda);然后詳細介紹了與玩具熊貓有關(guān)的信息,如“它是我媽媽送給我的生日禮物”,即“ ...it’s a birthday gift my mother gave me.”;最后表達了她對這個玩具的喜愛之情。 單元專題聚焦 2. 作者在字里行間表達了她對這個玩具的喜愛之情,感情真摯,如 “ It has given me many sweet memories.”等。 3. 作者在結(jié)