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es. 它帶給我許多美好的回憶。 單元專題聚焦 五 步 妙 解 審 單元專題聚焦 體裁 記敘文 話題 介紹你最喜歡的玩具 時(shí)態(tài) 一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和現(xiàn)在完成時(shí) 人稱 第一人稱 段落 布局 開頭:開門見山,指出你最喜歡的玩具是什么。 主體:具體介紹你擁有它多長(zhǎng)時(shí)間了,是誰給你的,你為 什么喜歡這個(gè)玩具等。 結(jié)尾: 描述感情。可以在結(jié)尾處描述你對(duì)這件玩具的喜 愛之情或點(diǎn)明它對(duì)于你的特殊意義。 單元專題聚焦 譴 ①我擁有了它。 _______________________________________ ②我六歲。 _______________________________________ (2)借助于 since將以上兩個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句合并成一個(gè)含有時(shí)間狀語從句的 復(fù)合句: ___________________________________________________ 單元專題聚焦 I have had it. I was six years old. I have had it since I was six years old. 模 開篇點(diǎn)題 具體介紹 My favorite toy is a toy panda. 單元專題聚焦 I have had it since I was six years old. My mother gave it to me. I like the toy panda because… It has given me many sweet memories. I’m lucky to have the toy panda. 表達(dá)感受 單元專題聚焦 My favorite toy is a toy panda. I have had it since I was six years old. My mother gave it tome. I like the toy panda because it’s very lovely. It’s special to me because it’s a birthday gift my mother gave me. I think it’s the best gift I have received so far. When I feel lonely, I always hug it in my arms. It always reminds me of my happy childhood. It has given me many sweet memories. I’m lucky to have the toy panda. 潤(rùn) 單元專題聚焦 點(diǎn) 該篇作文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰,層次分明,感情真摯,行文流暢,是一篇標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的滿分作文。 1. 作者開篇點(diǎn)明了她最喜歡的玩具是玩具熊貓 (toy panda);然后詳細(xì)介紹了與玩具熊貓有關(guān)的信息,如“它是我媽媽送給我的生日禮物”,即“ ...it’s a birthday gift my mother gave me.”;最后表達(dá)了她對(duì)這個(gè)玩具的喜愛之情。 單元專題聚焦 2. 作者在字里行間表達(dá)了她對(duì)這個(gè)玩具的喜愛之情,感情真摯,如 “ It has given me many sweet memories.”等。 3. 作者在結(jié)