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技巧:第一段開頭句:Today is my birthday and I39。m so excited about it.第二段開頭句:When it was time to leave school I couldn39。t wait to go home.第三段開頭句:And then,things changed pletely.Today is my birthday and I39。m so excited about the morning I put a note on the table for my mum and it said,Today is my birthday,don39。t forget it!At school,I got many gifts and cards for my classmates and had a lot of I was still expecting the birthday party after school.When it was time to leave school I couldn39。t wait to go I open the door,there wasn39。t anybody in the was only a note that said,Coming home late tonight,mum and dad.I try to call them but there was no was so shocked,do they forget my birthday?How could this be!I was so sad that I couldn39。t eat just did my homework and waited for them.And then,things changed was about time for dinner,my mother called and told me to go to the restanrant near our I got there I couldn39。t believed my was there:my parents,my relatives,my friends and even my was so many gifts and a big a surprising birthday party!We had a good time and it was the best birthday party ever. Tips寫作技巧:第一段開頭句:I remember last summer vacation I went to a beach to spend my holiday.第二段開頭句:I remember one day I went to the beach with some other kids in thehotel.第三段開頭句:On the day we will leaving we took a lot of picturs in the hotel and outside the hotel,too.I remember last summer vacation I went to a beach to spend my is a beach in the north TaiWan I stay there for a week with my family in a high class hotel near the happened that my father39。s friend was the manager of a hotel so we could have better seen as expensive and big in the hotel bathtub was big and could bed was big and window was big and I can see the beautiful beach through the glass.I r