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ch trouble to our life. (for example) 11 Greener Life, Cleaner Air 三、謀篇 3。 Body: So in order to stop/reduce the heavy smog, we should live a green life. We may go out by bus. We should save water, electricity and paper. 12 Greener Life, Cleaner Air 三、謀篇 4。 Ending: I hope everyone gets used to a green life… 13 Greener Life, Cleaner Air 四、潤(rùn)色。 ①潤(rùn)色的目的:行文連貫、邏輯性強(qiáng)。 ②潤(rùn)色的方法:盡量使用高中語(yǔ)法、句型、詞匯。 如:定語(yǔ)從句(尤其非限制性定從) 非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞 介詞短語(yǔ)(尤其 with結(jié)構(gòu) 14 Mr. Fish’s position(1) Beginning: Dear friends, I’m Li Hua, ing from Class 16, Drade 1. Do you remember those days when we suffer a heavy smog? (22 words) 15