如何給教官寫感謝信三篇(編輯修改稿)
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【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 ent, words can no longer express my feelings. how kind and responsible can a teacher be? you just gave me the perfect answer. i can clearly remember how much i hated learning new english words at first. to be honest, i really wanted to give up. as soon as you noticed this, you offered to help me by telling me some shortcuts to learn them. you never failed to encourage me even when i made only a little progress. little by little, my interest in english grew and now i’m a top student in english.i want to say thanks to you. i(will work harder in the future to live up to your expectations. i hope you can be happy and healthy forever.這篇修改后的作文無(wú)論在語(yǔ)言表達(dá)以及文章內(nèi)涵方面都是相當(dāng)優(yōu)秀的。首先，開(kāi)頭at this moment, words can no longer express myfeelings. 短短的一句話便把作者此時(shí)的激動(dòng)和對(duì)老師的感激之情表達(dá)得很充分。第二段首句的設(shè)問(wèn)句how kind and responsible can a teacher be? 更是精彩。在描寫自己起初對(duì)英語(yǔ)單詞的厭煩時(shí)，作者用了一個(gè)how 所引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句替代原文的普通句式。文章的幾個(gè)過(guò)渡語(yǔ)也是恰到好處: to be honest, little by little等，均在一定
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