week-3-備戰(zhàn)20xx年高考英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)周周背范文(編輯修改稿)
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【文章內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)介】 d way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. 運(yùn)用了非限定性定語(yǔ)從句。全文中沒有中國(guó)式英語(yǔ)的句式, 顯示了很高的駕馭英語(yǔ)的能力。另外, 文章思路清晰、層次分明, 上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然, 為文章增色添彩。2．Dear Amy, I am a student from Xinhua Middle School. I am very sorry to have heard of your present situation that you are so bitter after having a lung cancer. At present, ACS decides that it will give you three cents when you receive a letter. That will offer you so much courage. I hope you will make efforts to overe all kinds of difficulty, no matter how hard it is. You are sure to make it. I will try my best to ask all my friends, schoolmates and relatives to write letters to you, which may help you. It will give more courage to live on. May you recover soon. Yours,Li Hua【解析】試題分析：考查應(yīng)用文中的書信的寫作。要求用英文給Amy寫一封慰問信。要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給出，信件要點(diǎn)包括：自我介紹，得知的情況，表示鼓勵(lì)，打算為她做什么，祝她早日康復(fù)，審題時(shí)注意時(shí)態(tài)的選擇，描述要盡量選擇簡(jiǎn)潔的語(yǔ)言，運(yùn)用合適的語(yǔ)法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點(diǎn)都準(zhǔn)確表述出。難點(diǎn)在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和固定短語(yǔ)準(zhǔn)確表述。還要用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞被句子連接起來(lái)，這樣文章顯得更連貫。【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文是一篇書信，格式正確，要點(diǎn)全面包括，沒有有遺漏和省略。同時(shí)謀篇布局合理，運(yùn)用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時(shí)選擇高級(jí)的詞匯和語(yǔ)法項(xiàng)目讓文章更有文采。象范文的I hope you will make efforts to overe all kinds of difficulty, no matter how hard it matter how引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語(yǔ)從句，還有I will try my best to ask all my friends, schoolmates and relatives to write letters to you, which may help 。另外，make it（成功做成某事）的運(yùn)用更是錦上添花。3．Dear Li Ming,I39。m sorry to hear that you didn39。t do well in your exam and that you are very worried about your study. I quite understand how you feel now.There is no doubt that we should keep a good state of mind. As we know, failure is the mother of success. We should spare no efforts to analyze the cause of failure, which can help us find out the mistakes we made and try to make up for the lack of knowledge and skills in those areas. Only in this way can we make progress in our study.I hope that by the time this letter reaches you, you39。ll be feeling much better. Let’s work hard together and turn our dream into reality.Yours,Li Hua【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生給李明寫一封安慰信?！驹斀狻康谝徊剑簩忣}體裁：應(yīng)用文時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和少量一般過去時(shí)。結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法總分法指把主題句作為總說(shuō)，把支持句作為分說(shuō)，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。要求：表示遺憾和理解。找出問題并及時(shí)改正。表示鼓勵(lì)。第二步:列提綱 （重點(diǎn)詞組）do well in；be worried about ；keep a good state of ；spare no efforts to； find out；try to；make up for ； make progress； turn …into…第三步：連詞成句39。m sorry to hear that you didn39。t do well in your exam and that you are very worried about your study. quite understand how you feel now. is no doub
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