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_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文:The smartphone is being more and more popular nowadays .I also have a smartphone .I usually use it to send text messages, play games,watch videos, listen to music and learn English .It is very useful and convenient. In fact,the smartphone makes my life colorful. However ,every coin has two I spend too much time playing games on the smartphone and get bad results in exams. So I think we students should use our smartphones properly and don’t use them too much .We should pay more attention to our studies.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文,要求根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示,寫一篇英語短文,談一談你對(duì)智能手機(jī)的看法。文章時(shí)態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),人稱主要用第一、第三人稱。首先認(rèn)真審題,看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn);然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá);然后緊扣要點(diǎn),動(dòng)筆寫作。在寫作時(shí),注意連句成篇,保持文章的連貫性,要層次清楚,要點(diǎn)分明,中心突出。同時(shí)要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣;盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句;盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞,確保正確率;詞匯、句式要豐富多樣,可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查,確保正確無誤。4.(2017年浙江紹興)書面表達(dá)?!癏ow can a teenager have a successful life?”的討論,為此你采訪了一些同學(xué)(結(jié)果見下表)。請(qǐng)據(jù)上經(jīng)用英語寫一篇短文參與討論,并闡述你的觀點(diǎn)。同學(xué)主要觀點(diǎn)你的觀點(diǎn)努力學(xué)習(xí)尊重父母服務(wù)社會(huì)計(jì)劃未來……(至少兩條)注意:(1)短文必須包括表中所有內(nèi)容,可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié);(2)你的觀點(diǎn)至少兩條;(3)詞數(shù):80—100;(4)短文首句僅供選擇使用,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯:尊重respect短文首句:I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life.【答案】I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life.Most students believe it’s necessary to study hard. After all, study plays a key role in their life. They also agree they should respect their parents, who look after them every day. Besides, they’re ready to serve the society and in their opinion it’s really meaningful. What’s more, they think each teenager is supposed to make a good plan for future.From my point of view, we need to make some good friends so that we can learn from each other. Also, we must be active and exercise more to keep healthy because it’s important to a successful life.【解析】試題分析:英語教育網(wǎng)站開展主題為“How can a teenager have a successful life?”的討論,采訪了一些同學(xué)參與討論,寫出他們的觀點(diǎn)及自己的觀點(diǎn)。因?yàn)槭菙⑹鐾瑢W(xué)的現(xiàn)在的觀點(diǎn),所以句子應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),敘述同學(xué)的觀點(diǎn)用第三人稱,敘述自己的觀點(diǎn)用第一人稱。注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn),所寫的句子應(yīng)該符合英語語法,不能是漢語式的句子,要使用一些高級(jí)詞匯及句式。寫作亮點(diǎn):短文用了一些短語和句式,如:do a survey about sth關(guān)于某事做調(diào)查;respect their parents,尊敬他們的父母;look after照顧;make a good plan for sth為某事做一個(gè)好的計(jì)劃;make some good friends交一些好朋友;keep healthy保持健康。用了賓語從句,如:Most students believe it’s necessary to study hard. What’s more, they think each teenager is supposed to make a good plan for ,如:Also, we must be active and exercise more to keep healthy because it’s important to a successful ,也是提分的經(jīng)典句子??键c(diǎn):材料作文。5.假如你是李雷,你的英國筆友David發(fā)郵件向你咨詢?nèi)绾螌W(xué)好漢語。請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示和要求用英語給David回復(fù)郵件。要求:,再寫出兩條如何學(xué)好漢語的建議;;。郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear David,I’m glad to receive your . Here’s some advice on how to learn Chinese well. Best wishes. Yours, Li Lei【答案】Dear David,I’m glad to receive your . Here’s some advice on how to learn Chinese well.It’s a good idea to watch movies. You’ll find it helpful to improve your listening skills. Reading always plays a key role in language learning, so do more reading in your spare time.In my opinion, you’d better make more Chinese friends. They’ll be glad to lend you a hand and it provides a good chance for you to learn about Chinese culture. It’s a wise choice to use your cell phone, which allows you to use apps, or WeChat to learn Chinese. Practice makes perfect, so do remember to keep practicing every day!Follow the advice, and I’m sure you can learn Chinese well!Best wishes.Yours,Li Lei【解析】這是一篇提綱作文,讓考生給英國筆友David寫封回信,就如何才能學(xué)好中文給出建議。這需要我們發(fā)揮英語思維,將提供的信息用英語完整流暢的表達(dá)出來。寫作需要用第二人稱,時(shí)態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括:觀看中文電影;閱讀;另外至少再寫出兩條建議,可自由發(fā)揮,如:學(xué)唱中文歌曲,交中國朋友,利用手機(jī),應(yīng)用程序,或微信來學(xué)習(xí)中文等等。建議信要寫出寫信的原因、建議的內(nèi)容及提出建議的理由和根據(jù),理由要合情合理,語氣一定要緩和,因此建議信要寫得簡明扼要、目的明確、具有合理性和說服力。 6. 假如你叫李華, 三年的初中生活即將結(jié)束, 你將迎來漫長的暑假,