【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in our school this summer holiday.The Chinese Summer Camp will be held in our school from July 10th to July 30th this summer. The activities of this Chinese Summer Camp are as follows:First, you will attend Chinese classes, learning the meaning of Chinese characters. Second, you will take part in different parties, knowing the history of China and Chinese culture, especially Chinese holidays, which will impress you deeply.What’s more, you will have chances to visit some museums and the Great Wall. What you should prepare is a pair of shoes for the visit. If you have any questions, please tell me. I am looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua【解析】【詳解】：這是一篇提綱類書面表達(dá)，只給了一些要點(diǎn)提示，但都不很明確。學(xué)生除了要把所給要點(diǎn)提示都表達(dá)出來外，還要進(jìn)行適當(dāng)拓展，使文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)。：該題要求寫作體裁為書信格式，所以例文用第一人稱I進(jìn)行寫作，在文章結(jié)尾也按照標(biāo)準(zhǔn)書信格式進(jìn)行了收尾。文章時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)。文章條理分明，三個(gè)要點(diǎn)提示都已表達(dá)清楚，并進(jìn)行了適當(dāng)拓展，所給單詞也都全部用上。：短語：as follows，take part in，What’s more，look forward to。句型：被動(dòng)句型，現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語，主語從句。3．李華的英國筆友Jessica來信說, 她想了解中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日中秋節(jié)。假如你是李華, 請你給Jessica寫一封信, 介紹該節(jié)日。內(nèi)容須包含以下所有要點(diǎn)：1. 中秋節(jié)的時(shí)間；2. 中秋節(jié)的傳統(tǒng)習(xí)俗及慶祝方式：全家人一起吃飯, 賞月, 吃月餅等；3, 我最期待的活動(dòng)。要求：〔開頭和結(jié)尾已給出, 不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；, 意思連貫, 書寫工整。Dear Jessica, I39。m glad to hear from you. Now let me introduce the MidAutumn Festival to Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jessica,I39。m glad to hear from you. Now let me introduce the MidAutumn Festival to you. The MidAutumn Festival falls on the 15th of the 8th lunar month. It’s a big day for us Chinese people. All the family members get together to celebrate the festival. In the evening, we usually have a big dinner. And then we go outside and enjoy the full moon. The moon that night looks the brightest. With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together to eat mooncakes, and share our stories.For me, the best part is to enjoy the moon and eat mooncakes. Mooncakes taste very delicious. They look like the moon, big and round.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【詳解】本篇寫作是以書信的方式向筆友介紹中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日中秋節(jié)，要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)來寫。全文可分兩大部分，第一部分寫中秋節(jié)的時(shí)間、傳統(tǒng)習(xí)俗及慶祝方式，第二部分寫我最期待的活動(dòng)。亮點(diǎn)說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好地完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如get together，enjoy the full moon， share our stories等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，句子通順，行文連貫。4．假如你是班長李華，今天你們班對即將到來的暑假計(jì)劃進(jìn)行了討論。你們班的外教David對此很感興趣。請你根據(jù)以下信息，給 David寫一封電子郵件，告訴他討論的情況及你自己本人的計(jì)劃及原因。比例計(jì)劃原因50% 去國內(nèi)外旅游。30% 多讀一些書；20% 參加社會(huì)實(shí)踐。你的計(jì)劃? (至少一個(gè))？（請你補(bǔ)充）注意：(1)郵件應(yīng)包含所有要點(diǎn)(2)詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右(開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù))；(3)不得透露學(xué)校、姓名等任何個(gè)人信息，否則不予評分注：社會(huì)實(shí)踐 social practice activitiesDear DavidI39。m writing to tell you something about our discussion today.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes!YoursLi Hua【答案】Dear DavidI39。m writing to tell you something about our discussion today.The students have their own plans about how to spend a meaningful summer vacation. Half of the students plan to travel at home and abroad. They want to relax and enjoy the beautiful scenery. Thirty percent of students plan to read more books. They believe that reading can increase knowledge. Reading books can make people smart and develop interests. 20% of them plan to take part in social practice activities. They want to exercise themselves and make new friends. I39。m going to take part in social practice activities, too. I want to learn something new and get good experience from these activities.Best wishes!YoursLi Hua【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如how to do，spend a meaningful summer vacation，half of，plan to do，travel at home and abroad，enjoy the beautiful scenery，take part in，social practice activities，make new friends 等。而非謂語動(dòng)詞結(jié)構(gòu)The students have their own plans about how to spend a meaningful summer vacation./ Reading books can make people smart and develop believe that reading can increase ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理?！军c(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。5．旅行是學(xué)習(xí)的最好方式之一。請以“Travelling”為題，根據(jù)以下思維導(dǎo)圖的提示，寫一篇短文，并發(fā)表你的看法。注意：1. 要點(diǎn)齊全，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮； 2. 從思維導(dǎo)圖Sayings部分，選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)母窈侠砝迷诙涛闹校?3. 詞數(shù)：100詞左右；