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___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Li Hua【答案】例文Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job. Teaching is my dream job because I would like to share my knowledge with my students and help them solve problems. I am outgoing and helpful. I get on well with children. Besides, the school39。s environment appeals to me and staying with students helps to keep me young and alive. To realize my dream, I have to make full use of spare time to acquire the essential knowledge and enter a good university. What efforts are you making for your dream?Tell me about your ideal job!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本題通過(guò)描寫夢(mèng)想中的職業(yè),讓學(xué)生對(duì)未來(lái)有憧憬,給一部分提示詞,讓學(xué)生有話可說(shuō)?!驹斀狻渴紫然卮鹇殬I(yè)是教師。然后解釋為什么喜歡該工作,因?yàn)榭梢园炎约旱闹R(shí)分享給孩子們,并且喜歡學(xué)校的環(huán)境。為了實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的夢(mèng)想,正在為此作出努力。最后向Bill提出問題,結(jié)束全文?!军c(diǎn)睛】本文首先開篇功能句Thank you for your ,運(yùn)用多種連接詞,比如because,Besides,To realize my dream, 等使文章連貫性強(qiáng),長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合,讀起來(lái)朗朗上口,不失為一篇佳作。3. 書面表達(dá)暑假即將來(lái)臨,對(duì)于如何安排孩子初中畢業(yè)后的第一個(gè)假期,家長(zhǎng)們和孩子自己有著各自的想法。根據(jù)下表提示,寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文,描述他們的不同看法,同時(shí)發(fā)表你自己對(duì)暑假安排的觀點(diǎn)。Parents39。 opinionsGet ready for high school. Do some housework…Kid39。s opinionsHave a good rest. Do some sightseeing…Your opinion…注意](1)表格中的觀點(diǎn)僅供參考,允許適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。(2)開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。(3)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名等信息。(4)詞數(shù):不少于80。How will you spend the ing summer vacation? Parents and kids have their own opinions. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】How will you spend the ing summer vacation? Parents and kids have their own opinions.Some parents think kids should get ready for high school in the sum?mer so it39。s important to take summer courses. They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think it39。s time to take a good rest. They need to hang out with their friends to go sightseeing.In my opinion we can have a talk with our parents. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. We need to relax ourselves after working so hard at school. It39。s good for us to do some sports.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文,本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點(diǎn),動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn),然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮.寫作中,應(yīng)注意描述的全面性,盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上;結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容,可知本文主要是第三人稱,一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述.語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣.適當(dāng)使用連詞,做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密,符合邏輯關(guān)系.【點(diǎn)睛】這篇短文用到了一些好的句型:They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think it39。s time to take a good rest. They need to hang out with their friends to go 。4.近年來(lái),各大城市霧霾(haze)情況越來(lái)越嚴(yán)重,整個(gè)國(guó)家的空氣污染狀況令人擔(dān)憂。請(qǐng)分析空氣污染的現(xiàn)象,原因,應(yīng)對(duì)措施,寫一份英文的倡議書,呼吁大家保護(hù)環(huán)境,減少對(duì)空氣的污染。要點(diǎn)提示:(1)我國(guó)空氣污染的現(xiàn)象。(至少寫2點(diǎn))(2) 空氣污染產(chǎn)生的原因。(至少寫2點(diǎn))(3)減少空氣污染的措施。(至少寫2點(diǎn))要求:(1) 80詞左右,開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。(2) 文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱。Dear students , As we all know , hazy days have been influencing our lives a lot in recent years . That warns us of the serious airpollution____________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear students,As we all know, hazy days have been influencing our lives a lot in recent years. That warns us of the serious air pollution. Big factories, power plants and cars all can cause air pollution. For example, chemicals in the smoke from power stations cause a lot of damage. Besides, the people39。s activities are also the sources of air pollution such as throwing the rubbish and smoking. What39。s more, the more trees are cut down, the less polluted air can absorb. Air pollution is being more and more serious, so we should take some measures such as planting more trees and stop factories from sending out waste air, what39。s more, we had better walk or take a bus. Protecting the environment is our duty. Everyone should play a part in saving the earth.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇材料作文,根據(jù)材料中的相關(guān)信息介紹一下整個(gè)國(guó)家的空氣污染狀況。所提供的材料中列舉了近年來(lái),各大城市霧霾(haze)情況越來(lái)越嚴(yán)重,主要從空氣污染的現(xiàn)象,原因,應(yīng)對(duì)措施三個(gè)方面去介紹。時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。注意作文中必須包含材料上的所有信息,并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作時(shí),避免使用漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ),盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語(yǔ)。語(yǔ)法要正確,表達(dá)要符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣,注意時(shí)態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞,注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密,符合邏輯關(guān)系,表達(dá)具有條理性。【高分句型一】We had better