【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 析】這篇作文要求我們按照表格里的內(nèi)容介紹一下Tommy的情況，為Tommy寫一篇綜合素質(zhì)的評價報告。在表格中有非常詳細的關(guān)于Tommy各方面的內(nèi)容，我們需要用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容有條理的表達出來。表格中涉及的內(nèi)容較多，寫作時要注意表達的條理性。這篇作文應(yīng)主要使用第三人稱來寫。在最后要給Tommy提一些建議，這一部分應(yīng)該用第一人稱。同時注意表達的準確性，尤其是表格中的第五項和第六項內(nèi)容?！玖咙c說明】這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的范文。這篇作文內(nèi)容完整，包含了表格中的所有內(nèi)容，沒有遺漏要點。表達準確，注意了被動形式的使用，如He was rewarded by our school this year.。寫作時注意了條理性，使文章具有層次感，條理清楚。短文注意到了長短句的結(jié)合，并恰當?shù)氖褂昧艘恍┻B詞，使文章表達的連貫。如He is always ready to help others.、He not only likes reading detective novels but also likes watching programs about sports news.、He is good at running. He won the first place in our school sports meeting this 。 5．書面表達假如你是華,你的英國筆友對中國文化很感興趣,想到中國旅行感受中國文化。你想請他來你的家鄉(xiāng)一安徴一游,請你根據(jù)以下提示用英文給他寫一封電子郵件。1位置:中國東部,安做省南部: :春暖花開,秋季涼爽:山和古村落: :茶、黃梅戲提示詞:黃梅戲 Huangmei Opera注意:,使行文連貫。,不計入總詞數(shù)Dear DaveI know that you are interested in Chinese culture and Im glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not e to Anhui, my home town, to have fun?【答案】Dear Dave，I know you are interested in Chinese culture and I’m glad you are planning a trip to China. Why not e to Anhui, my hometown, to have some fun.Anhui Province lies in the east of China. The best time to e here is in autumn, because it’s really cool and you can just take some light coats. There are many famous places to see. For example, Mt. Huangshan, where you will see wonderful plants and special rocks. Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on. As a fan of Chinese culture, don’t forget to try green tea in Anhui which smells good and tastes better. What’s more, e and watch Huangmei Opera. It’s easy to understand and won’t let you down!Wele to Anhui! I’m looking forward to seeing you here!Yours, Li Hua【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以李華的身份給自己的筆友Dave寫信，邀請他來你的家鄉(xiāng)—安徽一游，題目中列出了文章的提綱，審題可知，短文應(yīng)從以下幾個內(nèi)容敘述：首先介紹家鄉(xiāng)的位置；然后介紹來這里最好的時候；接下來是介紹家鄉(xiāng)的景點和文化，并給出建議。短文應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時，注意謂語動詞的正確形式。寫作時應(yīng)合理安排幾個內(nèi)容，分清主次，并注意上下文的連貫。另外，英語的表達習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的，因此寫作時不能按照漢語思維逐詞翻譯，應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，寫完整的句子。如可以使用簡單句結(jié)構(gòu)，易于掌握，不容易出錯。但為提升文章檔次，也應(yīng)穿插一些并列句結(jié)構(gòu)或復(fù)合句，以及使用一些復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)，如非謂語動詞、被動語態(tài)等。【點睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求邀請Dave來自己的家鄉(xiāng)旅游，并介紹了家鄉(xiāng)的景點和文化。短文有如下幾個特點：首先文章內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目中要求的所有內(nèi)容，并對細節(jié)進行補充和修飾，使內(nèi)容更加充實、豐富。短文先對Dave發(fā)出邀請，然后具體介紹了家鄉(xiāng)的位置、景點、文化等，并提出了建議。全文敘述清晰，層次清楚，主次分明。第二，短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，語法規(guī)范，用詞準確，句式結(jié)構(gòu)完整，符合英語的表達習(xí)慣。短文以一般現(xiàn)在時來敘述，注意了謂語動詞第三人稱單數(shù)形式的變化。句式結(jié)構(gòu)以簡單句為主，也使用了并列句、賓語從句、狀語從句等復(fù)合句，還有一些好的句型，如The best time to e here is in autumn, because it’s really cool and you can just take some light coats、Besides, Anhui is also famous for ancient villages such as Xidi, Hongcun and so on.、What’s more, e and watch Huangmei Opera. It’s easy to understand and won’t let you down!、I’m looking forward to seeing you here!等。6．環(huán)保話題是人們最關(guān)心的話題之一，請以Change for a better China為主題，結(jié)合自己家鄉(xiāng)的變化寫一篇英語短文。注意事項：，條理清楚，作適當發(fā)揮。,詞數(shù)不少于80。 狀況水污染，大氣污染...... 應(yīng)對措施立即阻止此類活動,治理環(huán)境（至少兩條）...... 感想建議環(huán)境能夠變得更好......Change for a better China________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】We all know it is being more and more important to protect our environment well. But some people don’t care about it .They throw litter into the river and even worse factories also put waste into the river, the river is full of rubbish. The air is badly polluted because there are more cars on the road these days. Factories that burn coal also pollute the air with a lot of black smoke. We hardly ever see blue skies anymore.I think everyone in our hometown should play a part in cleaning it up. We should write to the government ,they should close down the factories. Trees are very helpful and important for the environment .We can plant more trees and more trees in order to live better and more healthy .Now, Our hometow