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0。77. because78. understand79. noise80. sentences82. able83. well84. but85. what67. Suddenly68. caught69. unusual / unmon70. attacker 72. safety73. robbery / risk(s)74. like 75. dangerous76. together二、英語書面表達(dá)專項訓(xùn)練2.假如你是李華,你們學(xué)校準(zhǔn)備組織學(xué)生本周五去北京世園會參觀。你打算邀請外教 Peter參加。請用英語寫一封電子郵件,告訴他集合的時間和地點(diǎn),在那里可以做什么,以及參觀時需要準(zhǔn)備什么。提示詞語: school gate, nature, culture, food and drink提示問題: ●When and where are you going to meet?●What are you going to do there?●What do you advise Peter to prepare for the visit?Dear Pete,How is it going?I am writing to invite you to visit Beijing International Horticulture Exposition in I39。m looking forward to your early reply.Yours, Li Hua【答案】Dear Peter,How is it going?I am writing to invite you to visit Beijing International Horticulture Exposition. We will meet at the school gate at 7:00 . this Friday. Then we will go to Beijing International Horticulture Exposition together. We can do a lot of things there. We can not only enjoy the special and beautiful plants but also learn different cultures in various indoor or outdoor shows. We plan to stay there for a whole day. You39。d better wear a pair of fortable sports shoes and take some food and drinks with you.I39。m looking forward to your early reply.Yours, Li Hua【解析】【詳解】1. 題干解讀:這是一篇給材料作文,屬于應(yīng)用文寫作。本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點(diǎn),動筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn),寫作中,應(yīng)注意描述的全面性,盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上;提示的問題就是寫作的基本方向,然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮即可。2. 例文點(diǎn)評:文章采取郵件格式,時態(tài)以一般將來時態(tài)為主。語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu),語言準(zhǔn)確,語意連貫,表達(dá)清楚,具有邏輯性。3. 高分亮點(diǎn):短語:school gate;invite sb. to do;a lot of;plan to do。句型:not only…but also;You39。d better …;I39。m looking forward to…。3.請你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示,為學(xué)校廣播站英語專欄寫一篇短文,介紹發(fā)生在你好朋友王強(qiáng)Wang Qiang身上的一件事。 Qiang騎車回家,在十字路口,看到一位老太太正要過馬路。,所有車輛都一個接一個通過十字路口。,不敢獨(dú)自穿過十字路口。,主動上前攔住了車輛領(lǐng)著老人安全過了路口。......要求: 。,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。:80100。開頭部分已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯:十字路口 crossroads 在……猶豫不決 hesitate inLast Monday Wang Qiang rode his bike back 【答案】Last Monday Wang Qiang rode his bike back home. On his way home, at a crossroads he saw an old lady going across the road. Because the traffic lights didn’t work at that time, all the traffic crossed the road without stopping one by one. The lady hesitated in whether she should cross it, but she was afraid to do that When Wang Qiang saw that, he offered to stop the traffic with his bike in order to lead her to cross the road safely.In my opinion, Wang Qiang is such a good example that we should learn from him. At the same time we also suggest that all the drivers should let people cross first and then traffic when this situation happens.【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文,介紹發(fā)生在我的好朋友王強(qiáng)身上的一件事。【詳解】結(jié)合所給材料,可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時,人稱為第三人稱,注意主謂一致問題,句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu),注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用,比如:The lady hesitated……,but she was afraid……,he offered to……,Wang Qiang is…..等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞,注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關(guān)系?!军c(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,語言簡練。開頭介紹了王強(qiáng)騎車回家的路上看見一位老太太不敢過馬路,接下來介紹他主動上前攔住了車輛領(lǐng)著老人安全過了路口,最后我就這件事談?wù)勎业南敕?。此處on one’s way, see sb doing sth, at that time, without doing sth, offer to do sth, learn from等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。4. 誠信是中華民族的傳統(tǒng)美德,也是社會主義核心價值觀內(nèi)容之一。而你的朋友Daming最近卻被誠信危機(jī)所困擾。上周末,他本來和Lingling相約一起去電影院看電影,但是他卻因為在家復(fù)習(xí)考試,把這件事忘了,直到第二天才想起來。因此,Lingling很生氣,并且不愿接受Daming的道歉。請你就此事給校報投稿,以“The Importance of Promise”為題,內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下:簡述事件;談?wù)勛约旱目捶ǎ⒔oDaming一些建議。注意:詞數(shù)80—100;行文連貫,邏輯合理;文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的校名和人名; 文章的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好,不計入總詞數(shù)。The Importance of PromiseDear editor,People always emphasize(強(qiáng)調(diào)) the importance of the promise, and they hate people who break their promise. Promise is very important. Everyone should keep it. Yours,Tony【答案】The Importance of PromiseDear editor,People always emphasize(強(qiáng)調(diào))the importance of the promise, and they hate people who break their promise.Recently, a thing happened to my friend, and I think it was really his fault. Last weekend, my friend Daming had a date with his friend Lingling to watch a movie. But he totally forgot it that day because of his review for his exam. So Lingling got too angry to forgive him. In my opinion, it was really his fault. Forgetting the date not only led to Lingling’s anger, but also made her lose trust in him. Keeping promises is always the traditional virtue of the Chinese nation. What Daming should do now is to ask for forgiveness and promise that he will never do that again.Promise is very important. Everyone should keep it. Yours,Tony【解析】【分析】本文為一篇稿件,需要學(xué)生通過大明和玲玲之間,大明沒有信守承諾的事情,談自己的看法。信守承諾是中華民族的傳統(tǒng)美德,在寫作過程中,注意文章結(jié)構(gòu),先寫出大明和玲玲之間的事情,然后再說自己對此的看法?!驹斀狻渴紫?,第一句話直接點(diǎn)明作者的觀點(diǎn),大明是犯錯了的。然后仔細(xì)闡述了事情發(fā)生的經(jīng)過。接下來說出自己對此事件的看法,不信守承諾會導(dǎo)致失去別人的信任,對大明的建議是除了認(rèn)錯之外,還需要再次保證永不再犯。【點(diǎn)睛】文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰,符合邏輯,先表明自己觀點(diǎn),然后闡述事情,提出自己的觀點(diǎn)和建議。整篇文章在謀篇布局上,比較嚴(yán)密。除此之外,中間也使用了一些連接詞,例如but,so,because of等,使文章更加通順。5.回首三年,相信你有滿滿的回憶。在你將踏上新的旅