【文章內(nèi)容簡介】 F 5. T二、英語書面表達專項訓練2．假設(shè)你是Beth,前段時間曾向英語校刊投送一篇題為My English Teacher Miss Zhang的短詩。近日，又至畢業(yè)季，師生們忙著互致臨別贈言。為此，編輯部策劃開“A Letter to My Teacher”專欄，邀請你以信件的形式重新投稿。短詩如下：My English Teacher Miss ZhangThere is a teacher, Miss Zhang,Who is friendly, patient and helpful.Always encouraging us to try,She leads us to a world of why.We all respect and admire her. 注意事項：，不得抄寫短詩原文：、意思連貫、符合情境。，稿件的首尾已在答題卡上給出，不計入總詞數(shù)：。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dear Editorial Office,I am writing to remend as The Most Popular Teacher．She is Miss Zhang.She is my English teacher． She is in her forties． Her small round glasses make her look smart． She often works to high standards and is willing to work extra hours． She is kind and helpful， too． She always helps us with our study． She loves jogging， so she looks healthy． To my surprise， she has donated blood many times since 2001． She has also decided to donate her body for medical research after her death． I really love her and I want to be a teacher like her in the future． I think Miss Zhang is the most suitable person to be the Most Popular Teacher．I hope that you agree with me． Yours sincerely，Beth,【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇給材料作文。根據(jù)編輯部策劃開“A Letter to My Teacher”專欄，邀請你以信件的形式重新投稿。文章時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱主要為第一人稱。本文所給材料比較詳細，考生要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達出來。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并可適當發(fā)揮。在寫作時，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，要層次清楚，要點分明，中心突出。同時要注意語言的表述應該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細心復核檢查，確保正確無誤?！军c睛】點睛：首先認真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作，在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，必要時可適當運用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細檢查有無單詞拼寫錯誤、標點符號誤用等，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。3．書面表達“How to keep a good relationship with parents”的征文活動。請你根據(jù)以下要點提示，寫一篇英語短文參加此次活動。（1）父母規(guī)矩太多，不允許晚上出去，過于強調(diào)學習成績，不理解自己。（2）你應該理解父母，他們是愛孩子的，希望孩子前程似錦。（3）你與父母保持良好關(guān)系的做法：努力學習，聽父母話。（4）……（至少一條）。要求：（1）要點齊全，行文連貫，可適當發(fā)揮。（2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名與校名。（3）詞數(shù)：80～100個。（4）短文的開頭己給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。How to keep a good relationship with parentsIn my opinion, I have too many rules at home. My parents never allow me... 【答案】How to keep a good relationship with parents　　In my opinion, I have too many rules at home. My parents never allow me to go out with my friends at night. They don’t allow me to choose my own clothes, either. And they pay too much attention to my exam results. I think my parents don’t quite understand me.　　However, I try my best to understand them. Although they don’t allow me to make my own decisions and give me too much pressure, I know that it is because they really love me and want me to have a bright future.　　In order to keep a good relationship with my parents, I study hard, listen to them, talk to them as friends, tell them my troubles, and help them do more housework.【解析】【詳解】某英文報社正就青少年與父母關(guān)系這一話題開展題為“How to keep a good relationship with parents”的征文活動。請你根據(jù)以下要點提示，寫一篇英語短文參加此次活動。注意文中用第一人稱書寫；；，可稍加評論；，發(fā)表你對壓力的看法；。意思連貫；【點睛】本文語句通順，段落分明。文中用到了一些好的句型：However, I try my best to understand them. Although they don’t allow me to make my own decisions and give me too much pressure,這里給文章增色不少。4．書面表達（本題15分）根據(jù)要求完成短文寫作，請將作文寫在答題卡指定的位置上。為了使生活更美好，社會需要正能量（positive energy）。生活中，我們需要他人的幫助，也要學會幫助他人。請你在網(wǎng)上給What would you do?本期節(jié)目留言，內(nèi)容包括：1. 你對節(jié)目中挺身而出的顧客的看法；2. 說說你幫助別人或別人幫助你的一件事例；3. 呼吁大家互幫互助，彼此感恩，讓社會充滿正能量。作文要求：1．不得照抄原文；不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學校的真實名稱和學生的真實姓名。2．語句連貫，詞數(shù)80個左右。 作文的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不必抄寫在試卷上，也不計入總詞數(shù)。In the program, a customer stood up when a blind woman was cheated badly in a cake shop. _______【答案】In the program, a customer stood up when a blind woman was cheated badly in a cake shop. I really admire her because she was brave enough to help the woman in need.The other day I saw a little girl crying at a street corner on my way home. I tried my best to make her stop crying. When I knew she was lost, I helped her make a call to her dad and stayed with her until he arrived. I found it pleasant to give others a hand.In my opinion, we are supposed to help each other and be thankful for others’ help. I strongly believe helping others will fill our society with positive energy. As the saying goes, “The rose’s in her hand, the flavor in mine.”（113w）【解析】【詳解】本文屬于話題作文，描述對節(jié)目中挺身而出的顧客的看法、發(fā)生在你身上正能量的事件以及鼓勵大家相互幫助，并讓世界充滿正