20xx如何給教官寫感謝信三篇精選(編輯修改稿)
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【文章內容簡介】 ad to write to you. at this moment, words can no longer express my feelings. how kind and responsible can a teacher be? you just gave me the perfect answer. i can clearly remember how much i hated learning new english words at first. to be honest, i really wanted to give up. as soon as you noticed this, you offered to help me by telling me some shortcuts to learn them. you never failed to encourage me even when i made only a little progress. little by little, my interest in english grew and now i’m a top student in english. i want to say thanks to you. i(will work harder in the future to live up to your expectations. i hope you can be happy and healthy forever. yours xiaoming 點評： 這篇修正后的作文不管在語言表達以及文章內涵方面都是相當優(yōu)秀的。首先，開頭at this moment, words can no longer express my feelings. 短短的一句話便把作者如今的激動和對教師的感激之情表達得特別充分。第二段首句的設征詢句how kind and responsible can a teacher be? 更是精彩。在描寫本人起初對英語單詞的厭煩時，作者用了一個how 所引導的賓語從句替代原文的一般句式。 文章的幾個過渡語也是恰到好處: to be hon
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