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nt much. I learned the values of teamwork and mitment, how to win, how to work hard, how to concentrate and focus on goals, and how to balance my time and priorities. Additional experience in other fields such as graduation practice in factory and mercial negotiation also reinforces my value to your pany. I enjoy thinking, enjoy learning, enjoy working, (and I am )able to bear work pressure. In my free time, I often participate (in) activities such as table tennis (and) badminton. I am expecting to bee your colleague on some day. (More tactful to say ’I would love to bee you colleague/join the pany) Because being offhand in advance, let’s leave it at that. (This sentence makes no sense. ’Being offhand’ means to be rude, inconsiderate, illmannered so I don’t think that is whay you mean! In advance of what? ’Let’s leave it at that’ is a mand, it sounds rather abrupt and illmannered to me, again I don’t think this is what you meant. How about ’I would love to join your pany and you would not regret giving me this opportunity.’ and just finish with a smile!) Th