【正文】 文章縱橫捭闔、開合自如，很好地論述了觀點，且結構嚴謹，論證有力。殊不知，當我們暗自高興，以為能將歲月的痕跡和世故的表情統(tǒng)統(tǒng)遮去，卻令自己最珍貴的一面、生命最澎湃的熱度一同抹去?；蛟S是我長高了，總覺得此時的他不再高大威武，也沒有了兒時痛斥我時的挺拔模樣?！鞍职?，向日葵哭了嗎，這上面怎么沾滿了淚珠呢？”彼時的自己總是愛強調(diào)自己的見解，以為一切都是這樣。即使結果不盡如人意，即使會有“心比天高，命比紙薄”的詆毀，即使“零落成泥碾作塵”，仍會“香如故”。綜 5 觀，本文立意高遠，不落俗套，文筆大氣，論證嚴謹，亮點頻出，不愧為滿分之作?？纯茨切┟?，有誰敢不低頭以示謙遜？有誰敢鋒芒畢露？大師是清一色的戴一副眼鏡，腋下夾著書，低著頭行色匆匆，顯出儒家風范；大官是清一色的西裝革履，笑容滿面，手里提著公文包，見人就笑；還有專家、成功人士等，這些“成熟商人”無不這樣，但他們以前完全不是這樣的，是功利的社會改變了他們?！比绻鄙倭瞬黄接沟娜藗兊乃枷牒綐?，那將會有一大批人找不到生存的意義與價值。拒絕平庸，對他們而言，是如此必要，卻又相當艱難。但這恰恰是施耐庵為宋江吹響挽歌前的空響，宋江畢竟還是一個鄆城小吏，在他的骨子里，透著的是對大宋王朝忠貞報國的志向?！笔裁磿r候，我們能讓信仰回歸，讓靈魂在場，讓民族重塑血氣？我依舊困惑。人們帶著冷漠的表情像游魂一樣行走；網(wǎng)絡上的刀光劍影；舞廳里的燈紅酒綠；人們綿里藏針，筆里帶刀，鉤心斗角??沉湎迷失像塵埃一樣迷漫于各個角落。在無錢可賺、自身難保的窘困下，只好卷起家什作鳥獸散，庶可痛已！在21世紀的今天，高雅文化遭遇了有文化史以來最大的尷尬，離原點越來越遠。From the way she’s bowing and scraping in front of the boss, you’ll know what sort of person she 、瘋瘋癲癲go gaga 對他的話不要太在意了，他總是瘋瘋癲癲的。詞數(shù)：120左右?？偟貋碚f，文章句式精煉，是篇不錯的滿分作文。長短句運用合理，結合了簡單句和復合句，流暢自然，不露痕跡，的確是一篇佳作。【北京卷】【試題回放】開放作文請根據(jù)下面提示，寫一篇短文，詞數(shù)不少于50In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand an interesting picture!A western young man, sitting at a table, is ready to eat a bowl of is holding two forks the same way as we Chinese hold is trying so hard to pick up the noodles that he is sweating a first glance, I think it’s a bit funny, for we Chinese take for granted that chopsticks are the tools for eating man in the picture is trying to copy he is doing it the hard using one fork will do a better job, In my opinion, we don’t need to copy others’ ways of a simpler way of doing things may be a better way.【名師點評】本文是開放性作文，要求考生把握好圖畫內(nèi)容，發(fā)散表達。在句式使用上，作者用法多樣，使用了獨立結構和虛擬語氣，十分出彩。：單人間(共20間)，100元/天?！救珖砀呖加⒄Z】【試題回放】假定你是李華，從小喜愛大熊貓(panda),一直通過有關網(wǎng)站(website)關注三年前在美國圣迭哥動物園出生的大熊貓“蘇琳”和她的母親“白云”。l 簡要說明理由。英語能夠?qū)W到這種程度，不可謂不讓人佩服。例文：Dear Sir/Madam，Greetings from China!I’m Li Hua, a student in ’ve been a panda lover since I was a three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and I’ve been watching her grow on your website,.Now she’s going to be ’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very much in truly，Li Hua【名師點評】本文寫作的內(nèi)容要點如下：。Wele to Baishan Mountain Hotel!Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for meters far from the entrance of Baishan Mountain, it provides singleperson room, of which the price is RMB100 yuan per day and the number is 20, and 15 double person rooms, with a price of RMB 150 yuan per also provides hot water bath can enjoy both Chinese and western food in the restaurant and drink coffee and tea in the swimming pool is open for free the whole these services can bring great convenience to you and are very e to enjoy yourself!Wele to book rooms in Baishan Mountain.【名師點評】本文開門見山，首先點明了主旨。, stand up and fight against the disease!因此，堅強地與疾病做斗爭吧!好處：擲地有聲，語言準確。表達地道【北京卷】【試題回放】李老師滿分課堂 免費答疑解題熱線 053186969606 ：1044738198 希望更多老師加入到公益教學中【名師點評】這是一篇滿分作文。感謝工作人員。：全天免費開放。作者對定語從句的使用恰到好處地修飾了文章，行文自然而通順，值得學習。 we did not do exercises, we wouldn’t be able to get good study ，我們的學習成績就不會很好。I prefer my English classes to be taught in...I prefer my English classes to be taught in both English and Chinese, whose advantage is that it is easy for us to understand what the teacher talks teacher first teaches the class in English, and then she explains those that are hard to understand to us so that we get a better knowing of the will be good for , teaching the class in two languages will make the English atmosphere not so students who wish to be taught in English will be for the disadvantage, I think it is really good to hear two languages in can make us more familiar with the foreign culture.第四篇：高考滿分作文及賞析高考滿分作文及賞析回到原點（一）水之源頭是最清澈最原始最單純的起點，一路流下來，夾雜著兩岸的雜質(zhì)，越來越渾濁，如果不加保護，未免越來越骯臟。其精妙在于觀點鮮明激情澎湃，幽默嘲諷，力透紙背。日本至今不愿懺悔，岡森正宏公然為東條英機等甲等戰(zhàn)犯辯護，小泉首相每年都要參拜靖國神社，并得到近半數(shù)民眾的支持。從寫作體裁來看，議論文最多，散文和記敘文相對少，也有寓言故事、詩歌、劇本等多種體裁出現(xiàn)。如果可以重來，我愿看到那個真正“笑黃巢”的宋江，那個水泊里“替天行道”的宋江。當她在自己的舞劇中加入類似“親愛的觀眾朋友們，你們好嗎”的吆喝吶喊時，一位著名的舞評家說，這是中國舞蹈界一根脊梁的坍塌！但楊麗萍又能如何？當《云南映像》這樣的精品都帶動不了票房，“拒絕平庸”四個大字顯得多么蒼白無力，走向平庸，乃是無奈之舉。作者以此切入，對這種現(xiàn)象進行了猛烈的抨擊。他在《傳統(tǒng)下的獨白》一書的封底寫道：“五十年來和五百年內(nèi)，中國寫白話文的前三名是李敖、李敖、李敖。沒有人生來就是任人踐踏的草芥螻蟻，但如果甘于平庸甘于卑賤，那唯一的歸宿就只是螻蟻。即便化用詩句，也饒有情趣，你看?與老板相視一笑出門而去，我輩豈是蓬蒿人?一句，瀟灑之態(tài)躍然紙上?！鞍职诌€有些事，你在校門口等一等吧!”他似乎真的很忙，電話就這樣被草草掛斷。?爸爸就像一枚翠綠色的葉子，背面紋路錯雜，將它翻轉(zhuǎn)過來，葉脈就清晰地呈現(xiàn)在眼前?，融情于物，情真意切，感人至 10 深。造反者說他已丟掉立場的原點，我卻謂馬老回到了一個學者的原點。山里。想起著名的人口學家馬寅初。作者以?向日葵?為載體，敘寫?父親與我?的故事，以?向日葵沒有眼淚?反襯自己的自我、脆弱，烘托父親的高大形象?！鞍职?，你到了嗎？我們下課了。生活中處處有文章，看我們是否有心而已，作者從細微處著筆，由此生發(fā)出不凡的人生哲思，讓人折服。當社會的風雨吹涼了滿腔熱情、澆滅了心中理想，當學過的知識沒有用武之地而被丟棄在腦后，他們早忘卻了自己接受過高等教育，忘卻了父母的期望，于是一個個變得沉寂了，平庸了。狷介之士劉文典更是狂得痛快，他狂言：“古今以來，真懂《莊子》者，兩個半人而已。作者從周國平與楊麗萍的身上，隱隱約約看到了什么叫平庸?！钡麩o力拒絕。宋江在施耐庵的筆下完成了他的使命，他在忠與義的交織中，迷失了自己，最終只能淹沒在宋王朝的浪花之中，在“忠君”與“仁義”之中，他選擇了忠君，選擇了一條看似美麗卻永無出頭之日的道路。其次是能夠應用課內(nèi)課外所學的知識來充實文章的內(nèi)容。幾十年的光陰磨滅了許多，也洗滌出許多。作為重要傳媒的幾家大網(wǎng)站，迫于商業(yè)利益的驅(qū)使，明修棧道，暗渡陳倉，缺乏最起碼的社會責任感、民族危機感。授課形式一：只用英語優(yōu)點：有助于提高聽說能力等缺憾：不易聽懂等結論：??授課形式二：英語、漢語兼用優(yōu)點：易于理解等缺憾：英語氛圍不濃等結論：??注意：詞數(shù)100~120，短文開頭已給出(不計詞數(shù))。積累卡片 Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 ，能夠健康地活50年。Dear Amy，I’m Li Hua from Xinhua Middle School of ’m sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which brought you great you should realize that you are young and have a promising great , stand up and fight against the disease!I’m sure you will is reported that the America anticancer association will donate three cents upon every fort letter you I will tell your situation to all my friends and ask them to write to that way, you will get enough money for you to be you can be well ，Li Hua[名師點評]本文依照要求，涵蓋了所有要點。熱水淋浴。請根據(jù)以下要點給動物園工作人員寫一封信：李老師滿分課堂 免費答疑解題熱線 053186969606 ：1044738198 希望更多老師加入到公益教學中自我介紹。評析：虛擬語氣。積累卡片 m sorry to hear that you got the lung cancer which b