【正文】 ions that scared time I called a penalty in a championship game during the third overtime and the team I penalized ended up losing because they got scored knew I had made the right call, even though I was unnerved when I saw the losing teams’parents waiting for me at my locker room。有些網(wǎng)站專門刊登免費(fèi)的樣文，都是申請成功者的杰作。句式要多樣：避免通篇使用短句，短句固然簡潔清新，但用多了略顯幼稚。更多關(guān)于美國本科留學(xué)的相關(guān)問題大家可以咨詢天道的在線專家。美國留學(xué)申請文書中的個(gè)人簡歷除了留學(xué)個(gè)人陳述之外，個(gè)人簡歷也是文書準(zhǔn)備中不可缺少的一部分，個(gè)人簡歷要求美國留學(xué)申請者，在一頁到兩頁的篇幅內(nèi)，簡單明了地展示個(gè)人情況、教育背景、實(shí)習(xí)經(jīng)歷、工作經(jīng)歷、獲獎(jiǎng)情況等信息，使錄取委員會對申請者有一個(gè)直觀了解。美國留學(xué)申請文書中的Essay準(zhǔn)備留學(xué)推薦信時(shí)要注意推薦人的選擇標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，最好選擇那些與你有較多接觸機(jī)會的推薦人，例如你的對于美國本科和MBA申請者來說，Essay是非常重要的申請材料。在寫作過程中切記不要照搬照抄別人的文章，要具備鮮明的個(gè)人特色。如果申請者的個(gè)人簡歷，只是簡單的羅列個(gè)人資料，或者隨便堆砌一些內(nèi)容，這樣的個(gè)人簡歷是很難打動(dòng)招生委員會的。在美國留學(xué)申請中，留學(xué)申請文書的寫作水平，堪稱是決定美國留學(xué)申請結(jié)果的關(guān)鍵因素之一。而中國學(xué)生使用復(fù)雜長句，更能體現(xiàn)其英語的成熟。申請文章都有字?jǐn)?shù)限制，一般為250到500個(gè)詞。if I am prepared and act with confidence, I will be perceived as are the little lessons that I’m grateful to have learned as a woman to Notice About This Essay author tells an interesting story about her experiences as a sense of her personality—determination, flexibility, good humor—es through in the like “Do you have a hot date tonight, ref?” make the narration memorable(we’d love to hear more of these kinds of details). essay needs a faster first paragraph(three sentences)says the same thing in both the first and third sentences—and gives away the essay’s surprise in the second!A good revision would delete all of paragraph one and start at paragraph ’s too much frame here and not enough essay needs further development, especially about the difficulties of being and being a ref, to keep it author should “dwell” in the meaning of the experience a little more at the end—“I wonder about…I also think…Sometimes I believe….” Significant experiences like this one, woven through many years of the author’s life, don’t mean just one thing—there are more insights and lessons to explore here.第四篇：美國大學(xué)申請文書的5個(gè)寫作技巧（模版）美國大學(xué)申請文書的5個(gè)寫作技巧每個(gè)學(xué)校都要求申請人寫規(guī)定了主題的美國大學(xué)申請文書?？吹接腥藦目Х全@取暴利而我的多米尼加爸爸卻得到很少，我無法沉默。我在Cadillo生活的那家人待我如親人，讓我體驗(yàn)了一番他們的生活是什么樣子。這里沒有律師，沒有電。我常常排著隊(duì)。沒有它，我父母就沒辦法開始新一天的工作生活。他們的房子小、而且陰暗，里面的家具只有幾張木頭做的椅子、一張桌子及幾張床。然而，在我同Cadillo的人們生活了一個(gè)星期后，我才第一次理解到真有人是這樣生活著。他們讓我真實(shí)的看到這樣一群善良的人受到不平等的對待，而我不能坐視不理。for the moment I wished I hadn’t called that it was scary at the time, I stood my ground and overcame my was an important steppingstone in my officiating career and in my four years of refereeing, I still can’t say it’s game hands me something new and I never know what to I have the confidence and preparation to deal with the unexpected, on and off the now also know to take everything with a grain of salt and not let it get to have learned that life is just like being out on the ice。簡潔明快：美國大學(xué)申請文章以簡潔明快為好。中國學(xué)生不比美國學(xué)生，可以隨意運(yùn)用語言，沒有人會認(rèn)為美國學(xué)生不會使用長句。原文地址：：美國大學(xué)申請?zhí)斓澜逃谖迤好绹髮W(xué)申請文書的留學(xué)個(gè)人陳述立思辰留學(xué)360介紹，美國名校以優(yōu)質(zhì)的教育資源，吸引著眾多的留學(xué)生。個(gè)人簡歷作為一種自我宣傳與自我推銷的媒介，其作用也日益受到申請者的重視。很多學(xué)校都會要求學(xué)生提交35篇不等的Essay，其中12篇是主E