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題 , 符合要求 , 首尾呼應(yīng) 注意寫作對(duì)象和語(yǔ)言風(fēng)格 , 要有讀者的 意識(shí) 要進(jìn)行細(xì)致描寫 , 有細(xì)節(jié)的支撐 要有主次之分 , 詳略得當(dāng) 要力求內(nèi)容新穎 , 必須符合邏輯 要做到思想健康 , 積極向上 海淀二模: When your mother es home from work., she finds the living room in a terrible mess. She asks you the reasons. You tell her what happened. 審題:人稱 I, 時(shí)態(tài) 過去時(shí) 敘事 根據(jù)結(jié)果,解釋原 因。文字 +表格 2。 寫作方法通常有: 1)相同點(diǎn) 不同點(diǎn)分析 A,A,A, B,B,B, 結(jié)構(gòu) 2) A,B, A,B, A,B, 結(jié)構(gòu) (如內(nèi)容較多,可逐點(diǎn)分析 。確定主題;理清結(jié)構(gòu)。 修改前 Yesterday, there was a policeman in the street. He stopped a car. The car was at the corner. It looked like a Honda. There was a boy on the sidewalk. He was riding his bicycle. The bicycle was a twowheeler. The car nearly knocked down the boy. 修改后 Yesterday, a policeman stopped a car— Honda at the corner of the street, because it nearly knocked down a boy who was riding a twowheel bicycle on the sidewalk. 修改前 Suddenly, a car run quickly from the third street and turned to the west. The car didn’t stop and hit the old man. The driver didn’t stop and have a look. The car ran away quickly. The car was yellow and the driver was a woman. 修改后 Suddenly, a car turned west from the 3rd Street to the Park Road. It hit the old man, but it didn’t stop and ran away quickly. I noticed the car was yellow and the driver was a woman.