福州市20xx—20xx學(xué)年末高三質(zhì)量檢查書面表達(dá)(更新版)
【正文】 ly introduced to schools to help reduce their anxiety. ? At school students can be taught how to manage stress and anxiety. ? In addition, schools can invite some consultants to give the students some advice on/about how to solve their psychological problems. () ? Schools can anize [hold, put on ] some lectures, inviting some consultants , to whom students can turn for help.() 家長方面： ? 范文： Parents should also care more about the mental health of their children. ? 其它： ? As for parents, they had better municate with their children and don’t try to be pushy (急于求成；執(zhí)意強(qiáng)求的 ). () ? Parents should encourage their children more and help to relieve their pressure. () ? cope with應(yīng)付 / reduce their pressure ? relieve them from anxiety 消除憂慮 4. 結(jié)束句 ? 范文： Only by doing so can we solve these problems. ? 其它： ? Only by / through joint efforts can we say goodbye to anxieties. () ? To sum up, only by / through bined efforts can we solve the problems. ( ? Only when we try together and make joint effort that can we get rid of anxieties.() ? Getting rid of anxieties, our tomorrow is better.() ? In a word, only by working together can we solve the problems and give students a better environment to grow up and study in.() 。 ? firstly， secondly等 表示順序、時(shí)間（ meanwhile）、遞進(jìn)（ also）的連接詞的使用使結(jié)構(gòu)連貫、層次分明、脈絡(luò)清晰。 ? 最后一點(diǎn)用 even一詞 ， 說明焦慮的嚴(yán)重性需要引起大家的重視。書面表達(dá)指導(dǎo) 特別注意： 1） 認(rèn)真審題 ，確定體裁； 2）把握要點(diǎn)，注意自然連貫； 3）表達(dá)有效， 適度 發(fā)揮；要抓住文章的靈魂，即文章的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)， 合情合理地 發(fā)揮。） 【 參考范文 】 ? With the national entrance examination ing on, more and more graduating students suffer from various kinds of anxieties. Some cannot eat or sleep well and fail to concentrate on their studies. Some are afraid of taking exams and others even lose hope for their future life. ? 列舉焦慮的現(xiàn)象，用 Some…. Some…and others… 平行結(jié)構(gòu) ，表達(dá)比較清晰，語氣貫通。 ? 句首的 設(shè)問句 ，給人留下思考的空間，也使短文更富有活
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