【正文】 vironment .We can plant more trees and more trees in order to live better and more healthy .Now, Our hometown has started to face the problem, I believe we can make our country a better place if we keep trying.【解析】【詳解】環(huán)保話題是人們最關心的話題之一，請以Change for a better China為主題，結合自己家鄉(xiāng)的變化寫一篇英語短文。首先應注意在短文中要包括題目中給出的所有信息，不能遺漏要點，并注意表達的層次和條理。結合要點提示，可知本文主要從三個方面進行敘述，注意圍繞要點組織材料，適當發(fā)揮。所以，考生不能遺漏要點，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復雜的句式結構以便得到較高的分數(shù)。每年統(tǒng)計兩次鳥兒的數(shù)量，以研究鳥兒在數(shù)量方面的變化。而固定結構But how to live in the greenhouse gases lifestyle?和I think as a middle school student, we should save the resources around us, such as the water, the electricity and so on. /Can you turn off the lights when you left the classroom? / If we can save more food, the peasants will plant more trees on their ，豐富了短文內容，使表達多樣化，是本文的亮點?，F(xiàn)在正在倡導“低碳”生活，只要我們不污染地球的環(huán)境，不浪費地球的能源，就能夠讓我們的周圍變得更綠，生活變得更美好。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。Zhang Yang is a student in Sunshine Middle School.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Zhang Yang is a student in Sunshine Middle School. He is in Class 2,Grade 9. He likes reading. He spends more than seven hours a week reading all kinds of books because he thinks reading is helpful. He enjoys watching birds. He counts the number of birds twice a year to study changes in the number of birds. He donated his pocket money to the Hope Project last month. His dream is to be the chief engineer of highspeed railway connecting my hometown to Shanghai. He hopes everyone can make some changes to protect the environment. We mustn’t throw rubbish everywhere.【解析】【詳解】亮點說明：這篇習作的層次清晰，內容飽滿，表達流暢。提示：1. 體育鍛煉2. 上下樓梯3. 交朋結友4. 食品衛(wèi)生要求： 1. 語句通順，表達準確，內容連貫；2．短文可以適當發(fā)揮；但要包含以上要點。上下文之間可以適當使用連接詞。應從句子整體考慮，使用恰當?shù)脑~匯和句型來表達，語法規(guī)范。內容上應注意描述的全面性；語言的表述應該符合語法的結構，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣。請根據(jù)下表提示，以“The Changes in My Hometown”為題，用英語寫一篇100詞左右的短文，不必逐字逐句翻譯。將來希望……（兩點）要求：1. 短文的開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；2. 短文必須包括所有內容要點，并適當發(fā)揮，使短文連貫通順；3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名、地名等相關信息?！军c睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者按照題目要求，介紹了自己的家鄉(xiāng)這些年來的變化。學校英語?？队⒄Z天地》對此進行調查，假如你是一名校刊小記者，請你就此次調查的結果進行總結，并談談你自己的觀點。最后還要加上自己的看法。第二段中作者表述了支持和反對玩這個游戲的人們各自的理由；第三段中作者發(fā)表了自己的看法。作為新時代的中學生, 如何響應習主席的號召, 從“我”做起, 創(chuàng)建“綠色生活美麗家園”（Live Green, Live Better）? 請以此為題,參考以下要點（可適當發(fā)揮）, 為?？庇⒄Z角”寫一篇100詞左右的英文稿件。目前數(shù)量在減少，因為：1）人們砍伐森林，大象漸漸失去家園；2）人們捕殺大象，獲取象牙。文章共分為三個方面的內容，首先描述大象想在所處的現(xiàn)狀，然后說明出現(xiàn)這種狀況的原因，最后為了保護的大象我們應該如何去做。Dear Jack,I’m glad to hear from you. I know you are interested in this poem Song of the parting son.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,【答案】Dear Jack,I’m glad to hear from you. I know you are interested in this poem Song of the parting son. Now I’m writing to tell you something about it.Song of the parting son is one of the most popular Chinese poems. It was written by Meng Jiao, a famous poet in Tang Dynasty. It describes a mon matter in daily life—a mother making clothes for her son, which is familiar to most of us. It mainly shows how great a mother’s love can be. In a word, this short poem has touched many people’s hearts. If you have any other questions about this poem, please tell me.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】這是一篇材料作文。