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寫一篇英語短文。越來越多的人有自己的汽車;生活舒適。文章中語言得體,語句通順,句式表達符合英語的習(xí)慣,語法規(guī)范、準(zhǔn)確。點睛:這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系,語意連貫。并且一些連詞的使用,比如so, or, but等也使文章具有連貫性,是一篇不錯的文章。人稱是第一人稱和第三人稱。倡議書的結(jié)尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。短文中使用了較豐富的句型,如About 75% of them think it is a popular form of entertainment, bring them more fun.、Grabbing red packets has been part of people’s lives、About 25% of them say some people spend too much time grabbing red packets、Personally, there39。s no doubt that not only does it bring people happiness, but also send blessings to people in a special form. Also, it39。審題可知,作文的基本框架和大概內(nèi)容都有了,需要注意的是在描寫過去的時候,需要適當(dāng)發(fā)揮一到兩點;還有對將來的希望也需要學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮。句式豐富。請你用英語寫一篇有關(guān)霧霾的短文向??坝⒄Z角”投稿,內(nèi)容包括:1. 霧霾的危害 2. 霧霾產(chǎn)生的原因(2個) 3. 應(yīng)對霧霾的措施(3個)提示:霧霾 smog poisonous 有毒的注意:1. 詞數(shù)110左右; 2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫; 3. 開頭語已為你寫好(不計入總詞數(shù))?!军c睛】書面表達題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。t be cut down again. If we can save more food, the peasants will plant more trees on their farm. Don39。2.書面表達根據(jù)以下提示,寫一篇介紹我的朋友張陽的短文。短文開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。5.環(huán)保話題是人們最關(guān)心的話題之一,請以Change for a better China為主題,結(jié)合自己家鄉(xiāng)的變化寫一篇英語短文。污染嚴重,垃圾遍地。然后是家鄉(xiāng)現(xiàn)在的樣子,這里主要以一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)為主。寫作時,應(yīng)注意英語表達習(xí)慣和漢語的不同,不要逐詞翻譯,應(yīng)從句子整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā),以簡單句為主,穿插并列句和復(fù)合句。Live Green, Live Better As China has been speeding up its development, we should pursue harmony(追求和諧) between man and nature. But how can we help?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Live Green, Live BetterAs China has been speeding up its development, we should pursue harmony(追求和諧) between man and nature. But how can we help?In recent years,protecting the environment is being more and more important to the whole human beings. It is everyone’s duty to do something good to the environment around middle school students,we can also do a lot of helpful things. For example,we go to school by bike or on can protect environment by not throwing rubbish can save water to make full use of can use materials which do no harm to the can grow more more trees there are,the clearer the sky is,the greener the hills when we have the idea of loving our environment can we make a better place to everyone,let’s take action!【解析】【詳解】這是一篇要求寫一篇關(guān)于如何響應(yīng)習(xí)主席的號召, 從“我”做起, 創(chuàng)建“綠色生活美麗家園”的文章。提出倡議時可以使用We can/ We should/ Let’s/We’d better的表示建議的句子。第二部分:文章主體部分——具體介紹《游子吟》(Song of the parting son)這首詩。s contribution (貢獻) can make a big difference. Yours,Lihua【答案】Dear classmates,Elephants are the largest mammals on the land and they can live up to be eighty years. But now the number of the elephants is decreasing because of the following reasons. Firstly, people cut down trees in the forest, so elephants are losing their homes. Secondly, people also kill elephants for their ivory.As a result, we need to do something to help them. First, we should plant more trees to build the homes for elephants. Second, we can put up post on the street to tell people that it is against the law to kill elephants. Or we can also hold some activities in some public places to spread the idea of protecting the elephants. I believe everyone39。文章中也出現(xiàn)了一些語法上的小錯誤,總的來說,不影響整篇文章的質(zhì)量。s worse, it may lead to the crime.【解析】這篇作文要求我們對學(xué)校進行的關(guān)于春節(jié)搶紅包這件事的調(diào)查結(jié)果進行總結(jié),并談?wù)勛约簩@件事情的看法。注意句式的多變,長短句結(jié)合、簡單句、并列句或復(fù)合句穿插使用,提升文章的檔次。文中用到了一些好的句型:The air is badly polluted because there are more cars on the road these days.;We can plant more trees and more trees in order to live better and more 。其次要注意使用正確的時態(tài)和人稱,通過分析可知,這篇短文應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài),謂語動詞用原形,特別要注意謂語動詞形式要變化,這是一個寫作的難點。3.安全對每個人都很重要。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章表達更有邏輯性,也更富有條理?!军c睛】書面表達題既不是漢譯英,也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。請根據(jù)以下信息內(nèi)容提示,寫一篇關(guān)于校園安全的英語小短文。最后要注意英語的表達習(xí)慣,英語句式與漢語在語序和詞性上的使用是不同的,要注意不能逐詞翻譯,寫漢語式的英語。6.書面表達某英文報舉辦“家鄉(xiāng)的變化”主題征文活動。語句之間注意使用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分,使文意連貫。題目中給出了一個表格,里面包括了支持搶紅包這個游戲的人們的觀點以及反對這個游戲的人們的觀點和理由,只給了一些短語,我們需要組織語言,將這些要點用正確的英語表達出來,并使文章內(nèi)容更加豐富、完整。8.書面表達4月28日,國家主席習(xí)近平在北京延慶出席2019年中國北京世界園藝博覽會開幕式,提出綠色發(fā)展“五個追求”(fivepoint initiative on green development),為全球生態(tài)文明建設(shè)貢獻中國智慧。s contribution (貢獻) can make a big difference. Yours,Lihua【解析】【詳解】本文是一封倡議書,倡議大家保護大象。:孟郊:唐朝:母親為兒子做衣服:母愛的偉大第三部分:信的結(jié)語——如果對方有任何問題,可以繼續(xù)問自己,并期待收到對方的來信。時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時。參考要點: 1保護自然,如:綠色低碳出行, 減少污染……2美化自然,如:讓天更藍山更綠水更清……3呼吁人人參與,從身邊小事做起,如:適度節(jié)約,拒絕浪費……;做到人與自然