【正文】 寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文。越來(lái)越多的人有自己的汽車；生活舒適。文章中語(yǔ)言得體，語(yǔ)句通順，句式表達(dá)符合英語(yǔ)的習(xí)慣，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范、準(zhǔn)確。點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。并且一些連詞的使用，比如so, or, but等也使文章具有連貫性，是一篇不錯(cuò)的文章。人稱是第一人稱和第三人稱。倡議書的結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。短文中使用了較豐富的句型，如About 75% of them think it is a popular form of entertainment, bring them more fun.、Grabbing red packets has been part of people’s lives、About 25% of them say some people spend too much time grabbing red packets、Personally, there39。s no doubt that not only does it bring people happiness, but also send blessings to people in a special form. Also, it39。審題可知，作文的基本框架和大概內(nèi)容都有了，需要注意的是在描寫過(guò)去的時(shí)候，需要適當(dāng)發(fā)揮一到兩點(diǎn)；還有對(duì)將來(lái)的希望也需要學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮。句式豐富。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫一篇有關(guān)霧霾的短文向?？坝⒄Z(yǔ)角”投稿,內(nèi)容包括：1. 霧霾的危害 2. 霧霾產(chǎn)生的原因（2個(gè)） 3. 應(yīng)對(duì)霧霾的措施（3個(gè)）提示：霧霾 smog poisonous 有毒的注意：1. 詞數(shù)110左右； 2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫； 3. 開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。【點(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。t be cut down again. If we can save more food, the peasants will plant more trees on their farm. Don39。2．書面表達(dá)根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇介紹我的朋友張陽(yáng)的短文。短文開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。5．環(huán)保話題是人們最關(guān)心的話題之一，請(qǐng)以Change for a better China為主題，結(jié)合自己家鄉(xiāng)的變化寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文。污染嚴(yán)重，垃圾遍地。然后是家鄉(xiāng)現(xiàn)在的樣子，這里主要以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主。寫作時(shí)，應(yīng)注意英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語(yǔ)的不同，不要逐詞翻譯，應(yīng)從句子整體結(jié)構(gòu)出發(fā)，以簡(jiǎn)單句為主，穿插并列句和復(fù)合句。Live Green, Live Better As China has been speeding up its development, we should pursue harmony（追求和諧） between man and nature. But how can we help?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Live Green, Live BetterAs China has been speeding up its development, we should pursue harmony（追求和諧） between man and nature. But how can we help?In recent years,protecting the environment is being more and more important to the whole human beings. It is everyone’s duty to do something good to the environment around middle school students,we can also do a lot of helpful things. For example,we go to school by bike or on can protect environment by not throwing rubbish can save water to make full use of can use materials which do no harm to the can grow more more trees there are,the clearer the sky is,the greener the hills when we have the idea of loving our environment can we make a better place to everyone,let’s take action!【解析】【詳解】這是一篇要求寫一篇關(guān)于如何響應(yīng)習(xí)主席的號(hào)召, 從“我”做起, 創(chuàng)建“綠色生活美麗家園”的文章。提出倡議時(shí)可以使用We can/ We should/ Let’s/We’d better的表示建議的句子。第二部分：文章主體部分——具體介紹《游子吟》（Song of the parting son）這首詩(shī)。s contribution （貢獻(xiàn)） can make a big difference. Yours,Lihua【答案】Dear classmates,Elephants are the largest mammals on the land and they can live up to be eighty years. But now the number of the elephants is decreasing because of the following reasons. Firstly, people cut down trees in the forest, so elephants are losing their homes. Secondly, people also kill elephants for their ivory.As a result, we need to do something to help them. First, we should plant more trees to build the homes for elephants. Second, we can put up post on the street to tell people that it is against the law to kill elephants. Or we can also hold some activities in some public places to spread the idea of protecting the elephants. I believe everyone39。文章中也出現(xiàn)了一些語(yǔ)法上的小錯(cuò)誤，總的來(lái)說(shuō)，不影響整篇文章的質(zhì)量。s worse, it may lead to the crime.【解析】這篇作文要求我們對(duì)學(xué)校進(jìn)行的關(guān)于春節(jié)搶紅包這件事的調(diào)查結(jié)果進(jìn)行總結(jié)，并談?wù)勛约簩?duì)這件事情的看法。注意句式的多變，長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合、簡(jiǎn)單句、并列句或復(fù)合句穿插使用，提升文章的檔次。文中用到了一些好的句型：The air is badly polluted because there are more cars on the road these days.；We can plant more trees and more trees in order to live better and more 。其次要注意使用正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，通過(guò)分析可知，這篇短文應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用原形，特別要注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式要變化，這是一個(gè)寫作的難點(diǎn)。3．安全對(duì)每個(gè)人都很重要。在學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有邏輯性，也更富有條理。【點(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下信息內(nèi)容提示，寫一篇關(guān)于校園安全的英語(yǔ)小短文。最后要注意英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣，英語(yǔ)句式與漢語(yǔ)在語(yǔ)序和詞性上的使用是不同的，要注意不能逐詞翻譯，寫漢語(yǔ)式的英語(yǔ)。6．書面表達(dá)某英文報(bào)舉辦“家鄉(xiāng)的變化”主題征文活動(dòng)。語(yǔ)句之間注意使用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫。題目中給出了一個(gè)表格，里面包括了支持搶紅包這個(gè)游戲的人們的觀點(diǎn)以及反對(duì)這個(gè)游戲的人們的觀點(diǎn)和理由，只給了一些短語(yǔ)，我們需要組織語(yǔ)言，將這些要點(diǎn)用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái)，并使文章內(nèi)容更加豐富、完整。8．書面表達(dá)4月28日，國(guó)家主席習(xí)近平在北京延慶出席2019年中國(guó)北京世界園藝博覽會(huì)開(kāi)幕式，提出綠色發(fā)展“五個(gè)追求”（fivepoint initiative on green development），為全球生態(tài)文明建設(shè)貢獻(xiàn)中國(guó)智慧。s contribution （貢獻(xiàn)） can make a big difference. Yours,Lihua【解析】【詳解】本文是一封倡議書,倡議大家保護(hù)大象。：孟郊：唐朝：母親為兒子做衣服：母愛(ài)的偉大第三部分：信的結(jié)語(yǔ)——如果對(duì)方有任何問(wèn)題，可以繼續(xù)問(wèn)自己，并期待收到對(duì)方的來(lái)信。時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。參考要點(diǎn): 1保護(hù)自然，如：綠色低碳出行, 減少污染……2美化自然，如：讓天更藍(lán)山更綠水更清……3呼吁人人參與，從身邊小事做起，如：適度節(jié)約，拒絕浪費(fèi)……；做到人與自然