【正文】 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】　　In recent years, many cities in China have been hit by smog frequently, which has aroused great concern among people.　　Smog has a bad effect on people’s health. Many people, children and the old in particular, suffer from illnesses caused by smog. Consequently, citizens are warned not to go out without wearing masks. 　　How does it e about? Scientists have found that it is human activity that has caused this. The poisonous matters in the air mainly e as a result of people’s burning coal, driving cars, industry production and so on.　　What should we do to stop the situation from worsening? First, cleaner fuels for cars and stricter emission standards for factories are of vital importance. Second, for us individuals, living a green life like going to work or school by public transport is a good choice. 　　Also planting more trees to increase green areas is necessary. I believe every contribution counts. Only if we work together will smog weather disappear pletely. 【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們根據(jù)提示來介紹有關(guān)霧霾的情況，題目中給出了寫作的內(nèi)容，我們應(yīng)將這些內(nèi)容用正確的英語表達(dá)出來。同學(xué)們該如何管理自己的錢，讓自己的錢用得更有意義？這是一篇給材料作文，本題所給材料比較詳細(xì)，寫作中注意將所給內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，不能逐字翻譯。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。Dear classmates,Reading is very important in our daily life. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Let’s start reading now!【答案】Reading is very important in our daily life． First of all，reading will/can help us get knowledge from all kinds of books．It can also help to open up a whole new world to us．Second，reading will/can make us clever and happy．It is good for our study and it can help us grow up．Third，reading can help us think more and further and make our life more colourful． However，there is usually so much homework for us to do that we don39。而He spends more than seven hours a week reading all kinds of books because he thinks reading is helpful./ He hopes everyone can make some changes to protect the ，豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。2．書面表達(dá)根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇介紹我的朋友張陽的短文。s very convenient for people to go somewhere.【高分句型一】Also, it helps to reduce the traffic pressure. There will be less pollution because of bikesharing. Besides, bikesharing helps people take more this way, it39。請你根據(jù)提示以＂Bikesharing＂為題寫一篇英語短文，表達(dá)自己的看法和建議。在短文中使用了大量的復(fù)合句、固定句式、連詞及固定短語，為文章增色不少，.如: It39。每年統(tǒng)計(jì)兩次鳥兒的數(shù)量，以研究鳥兒在數(shù)量方面的變化。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。s start reading now!【解析】亮點(diǎn)說明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。隨著生活水平的提高，大部分孩子得到越來越多的壓歲錢，有些甚至通過微信（WeChat）或支付寶（Alipay）收壓歲錢。上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞。最后要注意英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣，英語句式與漢語在語序和詞性上的使用是不同的，要注意不能逐詞翻譯，寫漢語式的英語。題目中列出了三個(gè)要點(diǎn)，我們應(yīng)根據(jù)這些要點(diǎn)提示，來組織語言，充實(shí)內(nèi)容。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，作者根據(jù)表達(dá)需要使用了一般過去時(shí)、一般將來時(shí)態(tài)和一般將來時(shí)態(tài)，動(dòng)詞形式變化準(zhǔn)確，語法規(guī)范。......（適當(dāng)發(fā)揮一至兩點(diǎn)）現(xiàn)在環(huán)境：政府采取措施來改善污染，城市變得越來越整潔。審題可知，作文的基本框架和大概內(nèi)容都有了，需要注意的是在描寫過去的時(shí)候，需要適當(dāng)發(fā)揮一到兩點(diǎn)；還有對將來的希望也需要學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮。最后對家鄉(xiāng)的未來表達(dá)了自己的愿望。例文點(diǎn)評：例文采用的是一段式，寫的是閱讀的好處，時(shí)態(tài)采用的是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，描述倡議時(shí)，描寫細(xì)致，條理清晰。亮點(diǎn)句型：It is good for people to keep healthy by drinking Longjing tea. 喝龍井茶對人們保持健康有好處。請從下表的兩種觀點(diǎn)中選擇一種觀點(diǎn)，并結(jié)合此觀點(diǎn)闡述自己的看法，用英文寫一篇短文投稿。s this case,they think children have a successful life ,Children have no freedom to do is the worst thing in their life.In my opinion,parents shouldn39。thiseasily．In