【正文】 provided is not very is online never use this method before，so we can not say this is good or ，online recruitment，sometime the resources is one is newspaper used many times before，and we have two better newspaper，one is Echo，the other is cost of advertisement on the newspaper is ￡25，00 and ￡2， the cost of advertisement on Echo is expensive is higher than Chronicle，the numbers sold on each day is more than Chronicle，is 600，000，the wide rage that the Echo covered is ，we decide use Newspaper advertisement，and name of newspaper is you！題目要求的要點(diǎn)基本談及到，結(jié)構(gòu)是不錯(cuò)的，文章中也使用了表示承接關(guān)系的連接詞，但是不斷的重復(fù)和過多的語言錯(cuò)誤讓讀者難以理解文章。從上面的官方例文我們可以看出，ＢＥＣ寫作考試對(duì)商務(wù)知識(shí)考得不是很多，大多只需涉及基本的一些觀念就行了；２、提綱所示必須以明確方式體現(xiàn)在文章中；３、語言的基本功底很重要，越是高級(jí)考試，越難以容忍簡(jiǎn)單的基礎(chǔ)性語言錯(cuò)誤；４、每種文體的結(jié)構(gòu)是有限制的，一定得按照相應(yīng)的商務(wù)文章的結(jié)構(gòu)去謀篇布局，也就是，“八股文”的形式是不應(yīng)該有大的改變的。Sample B(2 分)The employe?s moral is at a very low level and get deteriorated over the last are some reasons for that：First of all，the market is not growing which means that nobody is seeing how things could go better and nothing is moving are more and more cost?s controls and in an other hand，employees can see other departments spending money for “useless” are requesting more and more and employes have the feeling they have to do more relationship，politic tan real technical work..Because of those，people are spending time by shouting around against customers，pany and are criticizing others，sometimes to times they answer “badly” to customer and their job?s quality is falling proposals to fight against these and to go back to the high quality with motivated employes are：Management should handle the political part out of the employe?s have to stay focused on their core petency，the technical implementing web based training employes could spent their “shouting” time to train themselves from their desk to improve their knowledge and to make their job this，pany avoid any extra costs for acmodations，travel and time spend in training measure bring more workload on Management and more time spent with employes and based training means less time spent on “real” work because of the tie needed to learn and assimil the course? ，做到提綱要求的延伸。同一個(gè)意思的詞在原文出現(xiàn)多次，那么要盡可能換為它的近義表達(dá)，或者改編詞性出現(xiàn)，這是所有英文考試作文部分都要看的。也就是說，不能僅僅依靠一個(gè)名人的話語就可以決定觀點(diǎn)的正確，得有推論，得有例證。所以，提綱的內(nèi)容改編成中心句體現(xiàn)在文章中這是必要的。高級(jí)：小作文，圖表。中國(guó)教育部考試中心負(fù)責(zé)報(bào)名、印制試卷和組織考試。s life and work hard to achieve feats that will live up to the expectations of the people and the ,努力的工作取得成就,而不辜負(fù)人民和時(shí)代的期望.(出處同上) asked about…, the overwhelming majority of people say that ….But other people think of … as…./ But I think quite differently.(對(duì)報(bào)刊上某一問題(已有不同的人發(fā)表了不同的觀點(diǎn))發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)) is generally believed/accepted/held that… 通常認(rèn)為….It is no denying the fact that….無可否認(rèn)…23……… , so…that… river is very clear, so clear that you can see the fishes ing and going in is covered with a thick layer of dust, so poisonous that all the grass, trees, vegetables and flowers gradually as the popular saying goes, “Every coin has two sides”.From one side,….from the other side,….正如一個(gè)諺語所說的, “每個(gè)硬幣都有兩面(事物都是一分為二的)”.從一方面看……… 從另一方面來看………,擬人 are taken prisoners by fame and their achievements turn into a bar to further and deep love of life is the spring from which flow courage, confidence and 應(yīng)當(dāng)承認(rèn):Admittedly, a few governments have taken timid 簡(jiǎn)而言之:The answer is simply 小心謹(jǐn)慎地:point out discreetly that… 可以想象地:Smoking may, conceivably, be 肯定地:This is surely the most shortsighted policy you could 渴望地 不斷增長(zhǎng)地While money is eagerly collected in vast sums with one hand, it is paid out in increasingly vaster sums with the :