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t the those who feel that sports stars’ salaries are justified might argue that the number of professionals with real talent are very few, and the money is a recognition of the skills and dedication a person needs to be is constant and a player is tested every time they perform in their relatively short pressure from the media is intense and there is little privacy out of the all of these factors may justify the huge , I think that the amount of money such sports stars make is more justified than the huge earnings of movie stars, but at the same time, it indicates that our society places more value on sport than on more essential professionals and many countries, the proportion of older people is steadily this trend have more positive or negative effects on society?In more and more developed countries we see the following trends: ines rise, people get married later and have fewer result is the demographics change and the population having more old people sounds like a good thing(as they tend to be kind and warmhearted), it can have a serious impact on economies and , for example, that in order for a country’s GDP to grow it needs to produce more goods and services each an aging population and more people retiring, fewer are left to work, creating an economic result is that such countries have to rely on immigration to fill the gap and this is a lessthandesirable also, that as more people reach their twilight years they will face increasing health problems and this puts huge pressure on health care and other social most countries the government pays for at least some of the costs of health care, not to mention things like pensions, all of which means a big bill someone has to pay be fair, however, we should be careful not to direct our anger towards old people people can still make contributions to society, whether it means helping look after grandchildren, working part time or even doing voluntary an individual level, old people can be a real sum up, governments should recognize the challenges of an aging society and take the appropriate in addition to fixing the shortterm impact of an older society, they should also look at the bigger picture and do their best so that in the future we have a better age balance.第三篇:雅思作文高分實(shí)用雅思小作文高分模版小作文結(jié)構(gòu)開(kāi)頭段12句 轉(zhuǎn)述原題主體段11+X句 每個(gè)主體段第一句話概括本段,X句介紹數(shù)字…主體段N結(jié)尾段12句 第一句介紹總數(shù)total(如果沒(méi)有就不寫(xiě)),第二句作結(jié)論開(kāi)頭段時(shí)態(tài):一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)替換詞proportion/ percentageinformation/ datanumber/ figuresfamily/ householdmales/ menfemales/ womeninfluence/ affect(v.)effect(n.)categories/ kinds/ typesdemand/ needsubway/ underground railwaystore/ shopuniversity/ college show/ describe/ illustrate/ demonstrate/ summarize/ indicate國(guó)家的替換(如美國(guó),英國(guó)等)主體段時(shí)態(tài):由題目的時(shí)間決定,不要跳躍:maximum最大值,minimum最小值,trend變化趨勢(shì),intersection交叉點(diǎn)(線圖)第一句,由圖可見(jiàn):As can be seen from the table that…It can be seen from the table that…We can see from the table that…According to the xx chart, …It is interesting to note that…Noticeably,(Interestingly)第二句,具體來(lái)說(shuō):To be more specific, … = more specificallyTo be more exact,… = more exactly替換詞上升increased/ an increaserose/ a rise急劇上升rocketed(boomed)a rocket(a boom)下降dropped/ a dropdecreased/ a decreasereduced / a reduction急劇下降slumpeda slump持平stabilizedremained / maintained / stayedstable / constant / steady波動(dòng)fluctuateda fluctuation最高點(diǎn)peaked atreached the highest point at(as high as)最低點(diǎn)reached