【正文】 鍛煉對(duì)我們健康帶來(lái)的好處； ? 2. 鍛煉對(duì)我們健康可能帶來(lái)的壞處； ? 3. 我們應(yīng)該怎樣鍛煉。 １ 3. 卷面要整潔 。 譬如，想表示某人過(guò)著豪華的生活，可以說(shuō) He lived a kind of luxurious life. 但考生如不會(huì)寫(xiě) luxurious 這個(gè)詞，不妨回避，切勿生拼硬造。s attention代替 attract one39。（考試中一般不要出現(xiàn) good, bad , many, thing, think, people, opinion 等等） eg. It is, therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. Thus, its petitive edge will be sharpened effectively. applicable代替 proper, approaches代替 ways, implement代替 carry out, sharpen one39。現(xiàn)將閱卷過(guò)程中所發(fā)現(xiàn)的大量語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤逐一歸類，抽出其中的典型錯(cuò)誤，以警示大家。 lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet. ? No garden has no weeds 替換 Every coin has two sides ? Computers do play ， do 強(qiáng)調(diào) ? Positive 替換 important / good 等 ? A slice of 替換 a part of ? Unfavorable 替換 bad ? Impacts 替換 effects / influences ? We should, therefore, take advantage of … 使用插入語(yǔ) ? Fruits (而且 fruits 用的非常形象， merits/ virtues) 替換 advantages ( defects 替換 disadvantages ) ? Facet 替換 aspect 最經(jīng)典的替換詞 ,characters, folks代替 people ,persons 2. positive, favorable, rosy(美好的 )， promising (有希望的 )，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding代替 good , unfavorable, poor, adverse(有害的 ), be less impressive代替 bad eg. An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation ,as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive. 4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of , many, if not most)代替 many. 注：用 many, if not most 一定要小心， many后一定要有詞。 6. 主動(dòng)使用生動(dòng)的成語(yǔ)、諺語(yǔ)及有說(shuō)服力的引語(yǔ)。 如 however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入語(yǔ)放在中間，一般放在動(dòng)詞，助動(dòng)詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號(hào)。 。 但不要寫(xiě)得太長(zhǎng) (四級(jí)在 120180之間；六級(jí)在 150200之間 )，否則容易引起閱卷者的反感。例如，在論述求知的艱難時(shí)，可引用 There is no royal road to learning. (做學(xué)問(wèn)無(wú)捷徑可 走 ) 7. 學(xué)會(huì)回避。所以當(dāng)修飾名詞時(shí)用increasing/，副詞用 increasingly. Eg. sth has gained growing popularity. Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth. ,extremely替換 very , rewarding代替 helpful ,client,consumer,purchaser, 代替 customer 15. thrilling 替換 exciting 代 but appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 代替 sb be interested in one39。 以形容詞或形容詞組開(kāi)頭 Mary was very pleased and telephoned her mother． →Pleased ， Mary telephoned her mother． The girl， hungry and thirsty， went back home． →Hungry and thirsty ， the girl went back home． 以副詞開(kāi)頭 The child stayed there quietly． →Quietly ， the child stayed there． 以不定式開(kāi)頭 He got up very early to catch the bus． →To catch the bus ， he got up very early． 以現(xiàn)在分詞或過(guò)去分詞開(kāi)頭 I was filled with anticipation when I came home from school that dark winter‘ s day so long ago． →Coming home from school that dark winter ‘ s day so long ago， I was filled with anticipation． If you give me enough time， I can do it well． →Given enough time ， I can do it well． 以介詞短語(yǔ)開(kāi)頭 Chester like many other adventurers had experienced fear and conquered it． →Like many other adventurers ， Chester had experienced fear and conquered it． 以同位語(yǔ)開(kāi)頭 Sue， our monitor， always likes giving suggestions to everybody． →Our monitor ， Sue， always likes giving suggestions to everybody． 以從句開(kāi)頭 Francis had already surprised his friends several times before he sailed round the world singlehanded． →Before he sailed round the world single handed，F(xiàn)rancis had already surprised his friends several times． You will greatly improve your finished product if you have a quality control inspection． →If you have a quality control inspection ， you will greatly improve your finished product． 3. 一定要學(xué)會(huì)換詞 ，形象具體的代替太寬泛的。 We always working till late at night before taking exams.(誤 ) We are always working (We always work) till late at night before taking exams(正 ) We should read books which may be useful to us. (正 ) We should read books may be useful to us