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lunch, we were called to the bus by the driver. 此句非謂語動詞的邏輯主語與主語不一致。 如: The inhabitants of the city were robbed, starved and killed. 重復法。如: Lei Feng is the very model of Chinese youth. If ever eyes could speak, the little girl’s did. 寫作時還有一些其他注意事項 在表達相同的詞意時,盡量用不同的詞匯。但是在一些特殊情況下,往往需要對一些關鍵性的詞有意識,有目的地加以重復,以受到突出重點,加強語氣的效果。 The basketball players were disappointed, caused by the sudden change of weather. The basketball players were disappointed because the weather suddenly changed. 此句 caused引出的分詞短語與前半句沒有意義聯系,導致短語失去修飾對象而呈游離或垂懸狀態(tài),從而破壞了整個句子的邏輯連貫性。 如: The police helped him when his important documents were lost and he found them several days later. 句子的統(tǒng)一性原則要求句子只有一個明確的中心。如何寫好英語作文 1.簡潔性( Conciseness) 盡可能把從句變成短語,把短語變成單詞。由于英語句子重形合,句法結構要完整,即一個句子必須有主語、謂語和其他必要的輔助成分,必須避免句子殘缺不全。這顯然不是作者的原意,改正后的句子就清楚多了。 ? 如前所述,寫作應力求簡練,避免重復。 例 1. He argued that …… It is (generally) accepted that…… He claime