【正文】 r admission to your university her guidance counselor for three years I have watched this young woman develop both academically and personally into a mature individual ready in every way for her college is bright, energetic, passionate and genuinely well grades have been consistently above average in all of her courses, and she has actively participated in a diverse assortment of extracurricular activities ranging from track and field and chorus to the school yearbook and our drama has also spent considerable time outside the school involved in the has included work with Meals on Wheels and volunteering 10 hours a week at one of our area39。s level of knowledge and attitudes....All in all, I think X has a very bright future, and I am sure that he would benefit from....Given his great intelligence and sensitivity, I am sure that he could put...to good short, I give X my highest remendation, and very much hope that the mittee judges his application favorably.” SAMPLE C“I am writing in support of X to....I have known X since September, was a member of a small...tutorial that I taught in l98687....X was an active and conscientious member of the challenged the rest of the class to consider issues from new perspectives and often asked very penetrating and important chose to take on difficult topics and handled them assignments were wellwritten, wellsupported, organized, neat, and was evident that X really desired to learn more and challenge himself....X also has interest outside of has been an active member of..., a Harvard singing group, and a member of the campus... is also a member of the...House film 39。I used to dislike running.“If you don39。m running—only while running did I realize that “hippopotami” is possibly the funniest word in the English language, and only while running did I realize that the travel section of The York Times does not necessarily provide an accurate depiction of the entire lends me precious moments to contemplate my life: while running I find time to dream about changing the world, to think about recent death of a classmate, or to wonder about the secret to college admissionRunning is the awareness of hurdles between me and the finish line?！叭绻銈儧]有贏得這場比賽，明天你們所有人都得跑5英里。我期待在這個時節(jié)訓(xùn)煉，以回應(yīng)同伴隊友的鼓勵和不斷的喝彩。跑步是克服這些障礙的愿望。蓋茨送給年輕人的十一條忠告：，你要去學(xué)會適應(yīng)它；，這世界指望你在自我感覺良好之前先要有所成就；，你也不會很快成為擁有車載電話的公司副總，這些都要你自己掙得；，等你有了老板后再比較，老板可不是終身的；。名牌大學(xué)對學(xué)生未來的發(fā)展期望很高，對學(xué)生承受壓力、正視挫折的能力非?？粗?。使用通用申請的學(xué)校增加了33所，它的改革本質(zhì)上更直接更準(zhǔn)確地表達出美國本科學(xué)校所希望錄取的學(xué)生標(biāo)準(zhǔn)和群體，此次變革主要涉及界面，模塊，內(nèi)容，功能等方面，具體表現(xiàn)為：網(wǎng)申表格部分更新 網(wǎng)申付費方式更新網(wǎng)申表格變化較多，比如：活動清單（Activity List）的描述字?jǐn)?shù)從舊版的100字符增加到新版的150個字符，學(xué)生有更多的空間來展示他們的細(xì)節(jié)和成就。針對國際學(xué)生，如果沒有美國信用卡和賬戶，可以通過Sallie Mae提供一個新的在線支付方式付款。小文書（Short answer）將不再出現(xiàn)在主表里，而是每所學(xué)校自己選擇是否要放在自己的附加申請（supplement）里面。Lauren 是個可男可女的名字，但從第一段談?wù)摽刂企w重保持身材就可看出是個女孩。徑賽隊同伴的鼓勵，讓我們看到了作者珍惜友愛和社會的溫情；作者的感悟，讓我們既看到了作者走向社會的心理準(zhǔn)備，又充滿了積極的人生向往。但在現(xiàn)實生活中，卻完全不同；，你并沒有暑假可以休息，也沒有幾個人樂于幫你發(fā)現(xiàn)自我?，F(xiàn)在，日落之前，我想利用前方的道路，再跑上一回。當(dāng)我跑步時，有些事情對我會變得清晰。盡管如此，我都會數(shù)著距離曲棍球賽季結(jié)束還剩幾天，并發(fā)誓絕不再穿上跑鞋。譯文：今天我要去跑步。Anyone would have thought that I39。s focus of interest, the..., is admirably suited to someone of X39。s more notorious inner city high schools....Throughout the term, often at great cost to her own peace of mind, and sometimes in explicit conflict with the regular teacher, she continued to insist on a high level of performance from her not only survived the term but won the admiration and respect of students accustomed to being patronized by teachers content to believe that nothing much can be would expect X to bring these same qualities of character to....That is, an openness to new places, peoples, cultures and customs。I taught Miss XXX, where she left me with an impression of her intellect, industry and independent the 2 years in my class, both her assignments, which are meticulously finished, along with test scores on Physics subject almost always e out the whole, she performed fairly petitively in most subjects in junior ，本文是從學(xué)術(shù)角度評價被推薦人的。面對即將離別的現(xiàn)實，我有些不舍。某同學(xué)喜愛運動，但并不盲目，他的運動很有規(guī)律。久而久之，其表演才能更擴大到了小品、相聲、講故事等范疇，并數(shù)次在學(xué)校藝術(shù)節(jié)上獲獎。某同學(xué)與人為善，這向來為眾人所稱道。所以她的文章總是吸引很多人，大家還常常被她文章中的悲憫情懷所打動，一個被辭退的教師，一位答不上題的同學(xué)，一只流浪的貓等等，都會讓她頓生惻隱之心。最后可以再次強調(diào)你對推薦該申請者充滿信心，為能夠推薦他到更好的院校進行深造感到十分自豪，同時表示學(xué)校在審核材料的過程中可以隨時聯(lián)系你，不要忘記附上你的聯(lián)系方式。接下來就可以正式動筆了，不同的學(xué)校對推薦信的要求可能會略有不同，但是基本上一封結(jié)構(gòu)清晰明確內(nèi)容翔實的推薦信都應(yīng)該由以下幾個部分組成：（1）介紹部份。改掉懶惰愛拖延的壞習(xí)慣，全心全意地準(zhǔn)備考試。另外，早點開始準(zhǔn)備推薦信。準(zhǔn)備一副日歷，寫下所有大學(xué)申請截止日、考試日期及獎學(xué)金申請的截止日。不要只申請幾所，盡量申請多所一些。利：節(jié)省了時間和金錢；提早準(zhǔn)備雅思或托福等，提高英語水平。方案3：先讀社區(qū)大學(xué)后轉(zhuǎn)學(xué)分推薦院校：Foothill college等與普通的四年制本科大學(xué)不同，社區(qū)學(xué)院主要提供兩類課程：一類是過渡性的文理課程，相當(dāng)于四年制大學(xué)的前兩年，學(xué)生畢業(yè)后，學(xué)校會為學(xué)生頒發(fā)副學(xué)士學(xué)位。方案2：無語言成績可申請雙錄