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yes. The internet helps make many friends. Chatting on line, students can more freely express their feelings and opinions, and even get help with their foreign language studies. But others think students should not. They say making friends on line is a waste of time, which should be spent more meaningfully on study. Besides, some students get cheated on line.It is my opinion that students should place their study, health and safety before other things. As for friendship, we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us.【解析】【分析】整體分析:這是一篇提綱話題作文。而Thank you for attending our robot show./ I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. / I think in the future people will live a more fortable life with the help of new ,豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容,使表達(dá)多樣化,是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。文中使用了非常好的短語,例如like reading,more than,all kinds of,spend time doing,enjoy doing,the number of,twice a year,be the chief engineer of等。此處ask about, turn off, sort out, in addition, instead of, contribute to等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。請(qǐng)你用英語寫封回信,簡單介紹以下討論結(jié)果:1.節(jié)水節(jié)電. 2.垃圾分類 3.少用紙巾,重拾手帕4.步行、騎自行車或公交出行、參考詞匯:low carbon低碳;tissue紙巾詞數(shù):100詞左右。【答案】My junior high school lifeMy name is Tony. I am studying in Grade time goes by, my colorful junior middle school life is ing to an end. I’m glad to tell you something about my school life. Our campus is clean and beautiful, and there are all kinds of activities. Our teachers teach us rich knowledge and how to behave ourselves. They also encourage us to work hard. We all get on well with our classmates. Besides, we learn from each other and make progress together. I thanks for my school, my teachers and my classmates. Wish them better.【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文,介紹我的初中生活。請(qǐng)以 My junior high school life為題,寫一篇80詞左右的短文。寫作中注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關(guān)系?!驹斀狻拷Y(jié)合所給材料,可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài),人稱為第一,三人稱,注意主謂一致問題,句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu),注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用,比如:We can do……,we’d better……,we suggest……,which contributes to……等句式的應(yīng)用。每周花七個(gè)多小時(shí)閱讀各種類型的書,因?yàn)椤?。它要求將所?guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維,考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以,考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn),要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式,盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。注意文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。文中使用了非常好的短語,例如take place,in our hometown,in the past,used to be,go to do,on foot,by bike,better and better,more and more等。,詞數(shù)不少于80。表述靈活。題目中列出了三個(gè)要點(diǎn),我們應(yīng)根據(jù)這些要點(diǎn)提示,來組織語言,充實(shí)內(nèi)容。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱,作者根據(jù)表達(dá)需要使用了一般過去時(shí)、一般將來時(shí)態(tài)和一般將來時(shí)態(tài),動(dòng)詞形式變化準(zhǔn)確,語法規(guī)范。要點(diǎn)提示:三條家規(guī)尊老愛幼,禮貌待人誠實(shí)守信,不斷學(xué)習(xí)按時(shí)作息,杜絕熬夜你對(duì)你家家規(guī)的看法......簡單闡述你是如何受益的......寫作要求:,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,使行文流暢、通順;;。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求,抓住要點(diǎn),詞數(shù)符合要求。修改潤色。短語和固定搭配的正確使用也為這篇文章增色不少,例如“adjust to…”(調(diào)整以適應(yīng)…),“as time went by”(隨著時(shí)間的流逝),“made great progress”(取得巨大進(jìn)步),“keep on learning”(繼續(xù)學(xué)習(xí)),“In a word”(總而言之)等等短語使用正確。初寫短文。亮點(diǎn)說明:這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文,很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù),語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣,準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致,特別使用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句,如be supposed to, be kind to, keep your words, what’s more, in one’s opinion, develop bad habits, be rude to, be strict with, make a difference to以及it is a good habit to be honest中it作形式主語。9.俗話說,國有國法,家有家規(guī)。寫作時(shí),應(yīng)注意英語句式表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的,不能逐詞翻譯,應(yīng)從句子的整體考慮,寫完整的句子,利用簡單句的基本句型,使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和短語。請(qǐng)你按照以下提示給他回一封。內(nèi)容上應(yīng)注意描述的全面性;語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維,考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。注意過渡性語言的使用。2. 詞數(shù)80詞左右,短文的開頭已給出(不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。文中使用了非常好的短語,例如thank you for doing,I’d like to do,introduce sb. to,all of you,at home,do some washing,at a fixed time,have a chat,play chess,do exercise,deal with,a great help,in the future等。Zhang Yang is a student in Sunshine Middle School.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Zhang Yang is a student