【正文】 fect of…”， ”Studies on…” 前言是關(guān)鍵 ? 前言能把審稿人套進(jìn)去（看文章不先看前言） ? 前言要解決什么問(wèn)題？（三段論） – 為什么要做這個(gè)工作？ – 前人已經(jīng)做了什么？ – 我們?cè)诖瞬捎檬裁醇夹g(shù)做了哪些事情？這些事情相對(duì)于前人而言有什么進(jìn)步或突破？為什么我們能進(jìn)步或突破？ ? 前言是說(shuō)服他人認(rèn)可我做這個(gè)工作是有意義的 – 首先要說(shuō)服自己 ? 指出當(dāng)前研究的不足并有目的地引導(dǎo)出研究重要性 – 在敘述前人成果之后，用 However來(lái)引導(dǎo)不足，提出一種新方法或新方向。 – 1)如果觀點(diǎn)不是這篇文章最先提出的： We confirm that…… – 2)對(duì)于自己很自信的觀點(diǎn)： We believe that…… – 3) 由數(shù)據(jù)推斷出一定的結(jié)論： Results indicate, infer, suggest, imply that…… – 4) 在極特別時(shí)才可用 for the first time來(lái)強(qiáng)調(diào)自己的創(chuàng)新 …… – 5) 對(duì)所提出的觀點(diǎn)不完全肯定： We tentatively put forward。最好引用文獻(xiàn)作一些解釋 – 有理有據(jù) 投稿流程 1）選擇合適的 SCI期刊。 then upload your archive file under Manuscript(s) to be Revised from your To Do list. We trust in your cooperation and look forward to receiving the final version of this fine paper soon. Yours sincerely, Dr. Haymo Ross Deputy Editor 示例解析 II ATPaptamer 復(fù)合物 Adv. Mater. 2022 （影響因子 ） 選擇性 濃度梯度 對(duì)照 ? Subject: Your Manuscript for ADVANCED MATERIALS ADVANCED MATERIALS Manuscript number: MSType: Communication Title: A Gold Nanoparticlebased Aptamer Target Binding Readout for ATP Assay Correspondence Author: Fan YOUR SUBMISSION OF: ______________________________________________________ Dear Professor Fan, Thank you for your letter and the above mentioned manuscript. Please find attached the ments of our referees. I regret to inform you that on the basis of the reports we are unable to accept the manuscript for publication in ADVANCED MATERIALS in its present form. However, if you were to substantially revise the manuscript taking into account the ments of the referees we would be pleased to have the manuscript reassessed. I am sorry not to be able to be more positive at this time but hope that this does not deter you from continuing to enjoy, and submit your work to, the journal. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Dr. David Flanagan Deputy Editor ? Subject: Your manuscript for ADVANCED MATERIALS YOUR SUBMISSION OF: ______________________________________________________ Dear Professor Fan, Thank you for your letter and the abovementioned manuscript. I regret to inform you that we are still unable to accept the manuscript for publication in ADVANCED MATERIALS, a decision that is in accord with the opinion of the referee (see below). I am sorry not to be able to be more positive in this case but hope that you continue to enjoy ADVANCED MATERIALS and soon submit more work to the journal. I hope then to be able to offer you a better service. Yours sincerely, Dr. David Flanagan Deputy Editor ? Dear Professor Fan, Thanks for your , in which you asked whether it is possible for me to reconsider my earlier decision to reject your abovementioned revised manuscript. In principle every author of a rejected paper at ADVANCED MATERIALS has the right to appeal. For this it is necessary to submit a revised (or the original) manuscript and to present a rebuttal to the referees39。 Calculation results。 This observation leads us to conclude ? – 你是否在敘述每個(gè)方法時(shí)，在開頭都已經(jīng)說(shuō)明了為什么要進(jìn)行這個(gè)測(cè)定？ – 你是否簡(jiǎn)要說(shuō)明了你所使用的各種統(tǒng)計(jì)分析方法？ – 你所用的方法都與你的研究相關(guān)嗎？ ? 結(jié)果 – 結(jié)果展示是否符合讀者理解的邏輯性？（不一定要與你做的順序相同） – 結(jié)果是否充分展示？（以圖、表表示）。 – No ： It was observed that the solution turned red. – Yes ： The solution turned red. 或 We observed that the solution turned red. ? product of the reaction ? Sketch map。 4）網(wǎng)上投稿 Submit a manuscript – 申請(qǐng)賬號(hào)，然后以 author login身份登錄，按照提示依次完成。 More recent studies by DD…… ? 敘述兩種觀點(diǎn)： AA put forward that……In contrast, BB believe or Unlike AA, BB suggest ； AA suggest……Similarily, alternatively, BB……Or Also, BB or BB also does…… ? 表示因果或者前后關(guān)系可用 Consequently, therefore, as a result……表明遞進(jìn)關(guān)系可用 furthermore, further, moreover, in addition…… – 注意段落布局的整體邏輯。 ? 可明確提出本文只關(guān)心某一特定范圍的問(wèn)題， We