【正文】 le believe that there is equality of opportunity that allows anyone to bee successful. This belief is illustrated by stories written by a nineteenthcentury American novelist, Horatio Alger, who wrote about the “American Dream”. In his stories he described poor people who became rich because of their hard work, honesty, and luck. The stories reinforced the idea that all individuals, no matter how poor, were capable of being wealthy as long as they were honest and hardworking. For many Americans, however, Horatio Alger’s “ragstoric。 I…/….night, and/so I…7. …punished。 the students… choice, therefore10…coffee。 during the winter…beach.6. To…extent, mankind…earth.7. Like…wild life,…reproduce, grow…fall.8. The…Jim Thorpe, the greatest American…times.9. The…enormous, juicy…appetizing.10. I…kids－educated…the West…movies－would be disappointed.11. I…statue. Its soul, so to speak, is…beauty.12. The…students, teachers, doctors, businessmen, factory workers－people…life.13. Is…underground－in new…caves?14. I…－by correspondence－that I…h(huán)er at Beijing Hotel…Thursday.15. Passengers…beverages: coffee, tea, milk or soda.16. Present…Mr. Ho, Chairman…English Department。 x 6. the。 (on) the (bus) 10. the (ground)。 a (noble animal)。 a 5. the 6. a。 the 8. the。 a (gathering) 7. a (mountain)。 an。 a。附錄 寫作練習答案二、寫作常見錯誤分析一、語法錯誤（一）句子結(jié)構(gòu)錯誤1． 主從句疊置1) There are more and more students who like to use the puter. / More and more students like to use the puter.2) There are still many problems that should be noted and resolved. / Many problems still should be noted and resolved.2． 簡單句疊置I like chatting on line very much, so I go to the net bar almost every weekend. / I like chatting on line very much. I go to the net bar almost every weekend.3． 從句疊置It is known to all that puters play an important role in many fields of our life. / As is known to all, puters play an important role in many fields of our life.4． 句子成分缺失If we work hard, we will surely be successful. /Working hard, we will surely be successful.5． 語序錯誤1) Why do college students spend more and more time on the puter?1) I often wonder where they have got their money.（二）動詞形式錯誤1．時態(tài)錯誤Many people think that the Internet will be more useful in the future. 2．語態(tài)形式錯誤1) I have been excited several days at the news that you will e here.2) Most of the students are satisfied with the service in the dining hall.3．單復數(shù)形式錯誤1) Wise men seek opportunities rather than wait for them. / A wise man seeks opportunities rather than wait for them.2) Some people are afraid that puters may control men in the future. 4．非謂語動詞形式錯誤1) Let me say “hello” to you on behalf of everyone.2) Doing exercise in the morning is good for one’s health.3) Having studied in our school for 3 years, I find that the canteen service has changed a lot.（三）代詞錯誤1) We can use puters in doing everything we like.2) A college student should be able to do his washing on his own.（四）冠詞錯誤1) A/The horse is a useful animal.2) The exam will be held in December, 2004. （五）詞性錯誤1) I wish you can consider my suggestions.2) If a person wants to succeed, he must learn to endure sufferings and setbacks.二、用詞錯誤1) Students must know how to operate a puter. / Students must know how to work on a puter.2) People can be exposed to many new things on the Internet. / People can learn many new things on the Internet.3) The purpose of this letter is to express some opinions on the service in the dining hall. / The purpose of this letter is to make some plaints about the service in the dining hall.三、表達習慣錯誤1) What generated so large a change? / Why is there so large a change?2) Now 6000 yuan is enough for you to buy a P4 puter. / Now you can buy a P4 puter for 6000 yuan.3) In a room often live 68 students. 4) I think there are three reasons for this great change. 5) The prices of the food are too high. / The food is too expensive.6) The reason for this is that some people want to earn plenty of money without working hard. / This is because some people want to earn plenty of money without working hard.四、標點符號及大小寫錯誤1) However, every coin has two sides. I think the surroundings in our canteen are the best among all universities.2) The man was racing down the street because he was late for the class.3) At last I want to let you know that I love our university very much.4) My favorite sports are swimming, jogging, mountaineering and playing table tennis.5) The best English film in my eyes is Forrest Gump.五、冠詞用法講練EXERCISE 1A. 1. a 2. an3. an 4. an 5. an 6. an 7. a 8. anB. 1. a new office building 2. travel agent 3. an American scientist 4. a day’s outing 5. an Indian stamp 6. a heart attack 7. an advanced country 8. an interesting playEXERCISE 2 1. A (telephone)。 a。 x。 a (month) 5. an (hourly service) 6. a (great honour)。 x7. x。 x。 xB. (horse)。 (get) a。 the。 the 10. xB. 1. the British Museum 2. the Suez Canal 3. the difference between 4. the Wilsons these two words 5. in the first row 6. the year 1949EXERCISE 7 (The) People everywhere … When (the) strangers … (The) Good manners … in (the) different parts … accepting (the) gifts … shows (the) bad manners … even (the) rudeness … with (the) good manners accept (the) important things with (the) both hands …to accept (the) important things shows not only (the) discourtesy … In (the) Europe and (the) North America, however, (the) people…六、標點符號用法講練EXERCISE 1 1. The…identity: Lt, Henry Bedell, Company D, 11th Vermont Volunteers…old.2. It…that Dad…already－farming 80 acres…job.3. Now I’m…point－but what …there?4. Rain, snow, sleet, fog…world.5. During…tourists。 the food, however, is…9….pulsory。 …6. …night。s sleep the night before8. Ⅰ. changes brought by putersA. better telephone servicesB