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I am outgoing and helpful. I get on well with children. Besides, the school39。【點睛】本文首先開篇功能句Thank you for your ,運用多種連接詞,比如because,Besides,To realize my dream, 等使文章連貫性強,長短句結合,讀起來朗朗上口,不失為一篇佳作。應從句子整體考慮,使用恰當的詞匯和句型來表達,語法規(guī)范。寫作亮點:首先用一個自然段來闡明寫作的主題,表達出自己的觀點(認為作業(yè)是很必要的),可以借助it is necessary for sb to do…這樣的句型。最后玩具的意義得到了升華,表達了作者的期望(I hope I can be a soldier),上升到了保家衛(wèi)國的層面,這樣的一篇作文是有深度的,能夠讓人感動的,是一篇優(yōu)秀的范文。寫作中注意敘述順序,符合邏輯關系。10.A解析:Public bicycles are being more and more popular in our daily life. They have won high praise since they appeared. Public bicycles have brought us many advantages. They can be seen everywhere so that it’s easy for us to get around on public bicycles. Also, Riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What’s more, using public bicycles costs so little that we can afford it. But there are some problems too. Some people can’t return public bicycles in time. Sometimes because public bicycles take up too much of the road, they are in our way. I think we should encourage more people to use public bicycles. After all, it’s a way of living a green life.【解析】這是一篇材料作文,要求給英文報社寫一篇投稿,介紹對共享單車看法。比如:固定搭配、固定句型It39。8.G解析:It39。:短語:in order to,take part in,lots of,learn from,in the process of,What’s more,have a good time。并且一些連詞的使用,比如so, or, but等也使文章具有連貫性,是一篇不錯的文章。最后要細心復核檢查,確保正確無誤。寫作亮點:短文開頭直奔主題:我想要談談我的煩惱及怎樣處理他們;后面三段分別從外貌上的煩惱、與父母交流上的障礙、學習上的壓力幾方面分別談論自己的煩惱及處理的方式,生動具體,條理分明。根據內容提示可知本文會用一般過去時態(tài)和一般將來時態(tài),注意一些常見句式的應用。請你寫一篇短文,談談你對現代通訊工具的使用及看法。假如你是Mike,請你用英語寫一封郵件,給你校英文報投稿寫一篇短文,詞數80左右,談談你對開設傳統(tǒng)文化課的看法。To: lihua china. From: bill006 america. Subject: Your dream jobDear Li Hua,Our teacher told us China is developing fast. You are lucky enough to live in China.Would you please tell me about your dream job in the future?◆What is your dream job?◆ Why do you like the job?◆ Do you think your personality is suitable for the job? Why or why not?◆ What do you need to do for your dream job?Drop a few lines if you have time.Best wishes,Bill要求:1. 參考提示語, 可適當發(fā)揮;2. 語句通順, 意思連貫, 書寫工整;3. 文中不得出現你的任何真實信息(姓名、校名和地名等);: 不少于70詞(開頭已給出, 但不計入總詞數)。在你班的主題班會上,同學們進行了“Is daily homework necessary?”的討論,請你根據提示和要求,并結合自己的實際經驗,發(fā)表你的觀點。2. 可適當加入細節(jié),使內容充實,行文連貫。Public bicycles are being more and more popular in our daily life. 11.書面表達假如你是九年級學生李華,你的美國筆友Billy發(fā)來郵件詢問你平時鍛煉的情況。請以Dream Chaser為題,談談你自己的觀點。”堅持是一種可貴的品格。內容包括:應該讀什么樣的書,以及讀書的意義。目前數量在減少,因為:1)人們砍伐森林,大象漸漸失去家園;2)人們捕殺大象,獲取象牙。假設你是李華,請根據下表提示,用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿,在班會上談談你遇到的煩惱以及你自己的做法。英語:常見英語書面表達 及解析一、英語書面表達1.書面表達難忘的初中三年學習生活已經接近尾聲,你一定既有收獲又有不足,也有許多對自己未來的期待。How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about myself. 2.中學生在成長過程中經常會碰到一些煩惱。 提示:陸地上最大的哺乳動物,可以活到80歲。假如你是李華,請你寫一封倡議書,向全體同學發(fā)出號召。提示詞語: pollution, protect, save, recycle, take action提示問題:● What are the main environmental problems we have?● What can we do in our daily life? ● What’s your wish?Now there are many environmental 8.題目②“持之以恒,方得始。所以在學習和生活中,我們要滿懷希望、努力奔跑、追逐夢想。,文章的開頭部分已給出,不計入總詞數。寫作要求:1. 不得使用真實的姓名和學校名。一直以來,同學們對作業(yè)持有不同的觀點。請認真閱讀下面的郵件, 根據信中的內容和你的實際情況給他寫封回信。有人認為學校應當開設傳統(tǒng)文化課(set up traditional culture classes),但也有人認為沒有必要。Zhang Yang is a student in Sunshine Middle School.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________19.隨著社會的發(fā)展,通訊的方式從遠古時代的書信到當今的互聯網,經歷著巨大的變化?!緟⒖即鸢浮?**試卷處理標記,請不要刪除一、英語書面表達1.H解析:How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about myself.In the past, I learnt a lot of knowledge not only from books but also from the teachers. So, I am very grateful to them. They helped me a lot! I also got on well with my classmates. We shared happiness and sadness together. We were like a big family. However, I still have a lot to improve. I didn’t do well in Maths because I gave up easily when meeting difficult Maths problems. Besides, I didn’t have a good sense of time. I used to go to school late and that made my teachers angry.Therefore, in the future, I will try my best to bee better. I will work harder and organize my life and my time better. I hope one day, my school and teachers will be proud of me!【解析】試題分析:本篇書面表達以“My Unforgettable Middle School Life”為題,結合本題所給的寫作信息,闡述自己難忘的中學生活。短文用第一人稱形式,一般現在時態(tài)。同時要注意語言的表述應該符合語法的結構,造句應該符合英語的表達習慣;盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,最好不要寫太長的復合句;盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞,確保正確率;詞匯、句式要豐富多樣,可以為文章增色添彩。本篇文章內容完整,符合材料要求,Elephants are the largest mammals …,及First, we should plant more trees 也使用到了比較級和最高級;Firstly,…. Secondly,…等詞的使用使文章具有層次性,條理清晰。:例文采用三段式;用第一人稱來敘述講成語故事活動;因為活動已經舉辦,所以時態(tài)采用一般過去時;對參加活動的過程描寫完整且條理清晰。以及狀語從句等;然后緊扣要點,動筆寫作,在寫作過程中,要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡,必要時可適當運用表示轉折、因果、并列、比較等關系的連詞,使文章過渡平穩(wěn),自然流暢;最后,要仔細檢查有無單詞拼寫錯誤