【正文】 more and more popular nowadays .I also have a smartphone .I usually use it to send text messages, play games,watch videos, listen to music and learn English .It is very useful and convenient. In fact,the smartphone makes my life colorful. However ,every coin has two I spend too much time playing games on the smartphone and get bad results in exams. So I think we students should use our smartphones properly and don’t use them too much .We should pay more attention to our studies.【解析】【詳解】這是一篇給材料作文，要求根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示，寫一篇英語短文，談一談你對智能手機的看法。學生除了要把所給要點提示都表達出來外，還要進行適當拓展，使文章內(nèi)容充實。文章是按照時間的順序，先介紹了家鄉(xiāng)過去的面貌，這一部分使用了過去時態(tài)，謂語動詞都變成了過去式，形式準確。Changes my hometownMy hometown has changed a lot over the years.In the past, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】My hometown has changed a lot over the years.In the past, my hometown was very poor and the streets were very narrow. Houses were small and old. Rubbish was everywhere. Few people would like to e to my hometown. Now the government takes measures to improve the pollution and the city bees cleaner and cleaner. The houses are big and bright. Many people have moved into new apartments. More and more people have their own cars and live a fortable life. The new airport has been in use for two years. There are thousands of tourists from all over the country every hope my hometown is being more and more beautiful.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以The Changes in My Hometown為題，介紹一下自己的家鄉(xiāng)這些年來發(fā)生的變化。過去生活條件差，道路狹窄，房屋破舊?！驹斀狻渴紫龋谝痪湓捴苯狱c明作者的觀點，大明是犯錯了的。6． 誠信是中華民族的傳統(tǒng)美德，也是社會主義核心價值觀內(nèi)容之一。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如I39。開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。開頭表明自己的看法，接下來陳述自己的理由，最后介紹自己的建議。 2. 陳述自己的理由。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。而感嘆句How time flies!，倒裝句only when we develop interest in studying English can we learn it spoken English when municating with ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達多樣化，是本文的亮點。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。開頭介紹了今年端午節(jié)慶祝時間，接下來介紹端午節(jié)的由來以及慶?；顒樱詈髿g迎大家一起體驗這個傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日。 advice. More importantly,let her live like a lovely girl；let herhave more friends and social activities；and let her make mistakes of her own as the teenagers often do.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，對學生家長的博客進行回復。有人認為學校應(yīng)當開設(shè)傳統(tǒng)文化課（set up traditional culture classes），但也有人認為沒有必要。此處because of， in one’s opinion, give up, know about, last but not least, set up, all in all, call on等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。d like to choose several good books and read them carefully. This can help me open my mind and learn more about the world. I also think it39。d like to choose several good books and read them carefully./ Second, health is the most important./Third, it39。因此，Lingling很生氣，并且不愿接受Daming的道歉?！军c睛】文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，符合邏輯，先表明自己觀點，然后闡述事情，提出自己的觀點和建議。生活：住房寬敞明亮；許多人搬進了新公寓。這兩個地方需要學生們展開想象，合理發(fā)揮，注意要與文章的其他部分能夠很好的結(jié)合起來，內(nèi)容也要統(tǒng)一，符合題目要求，合情合理。整篇文章內(nèi)容充實、完整，敘述清晰、條理，結(jié)構(gòu)合理。文章條理分明，三個要點提示都已表達清楚，并進行了適當拓展，所給單詞也都全部用上。在寫作時，注意連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性，要層次清楚，要點分明，中心突出。 不同意：1．很臟，容易使學生生病。（2）To do voluntary labor is a good chance for them to learn how to do difficult work. 做義務(wù)勞動是他們學習如何做困難工作的好機會。 生詞提示：respect尊重【答案】A strong argument has taken place among students since our school made students do voluntary labor.Some students think it is a good way of education. Now most families have only one child. They never do hard work. To do voluntary labor is a good chance for them to learn how to do difficult work. It can also help them understand and respect the cleaners.But others have different points.