【正文】 you down!Wele to Anhui! I’m looking forward to seeing you here!Yours, Li Hua【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們以李華的身份給自己的筆友Dave寫信，邀請(qǐng)他來(lái)你的家鄉(xiāng)—安徽一游，題目中列出了文章的提綱，審題可知，短文應(yīng)從以下幾個(gè)內(nèi)容敘述：首先介紹家鄉(xiāng)的位置；然后介紹來(lái)這里最好的時(shí)候；接下來(lái)是介紹家鄉(xiāng)的景點(diǎn)和文化，并給出建議。短文先對(duì)Dave發(fā)出邀請(qǐng)，然后具體介紹了家鄉(xiāng)的位置、景點(diǎn)、文化等，并提出了建議。點(diǎn)睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。8．書面表達(dá)為了配合“足球進(jìn)校園”活動(dòng)，你們班開(kāi)展了一次主題班會(huì)。寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文語(yǔ)言精煉，像第二自然段的Football has a very long history. It is liked by people all over the world. The World Cup takes place every four years. it helps develop team spirit. What’s more, playing football is good for our health. 等等句子，簡(jiǎn)潔，但是句意表達(dá)清楚；同時(shí)，本文用了被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)、動(dòng)名詞作主語(yǔ)、不定式作表語(yǔ)等等語(yǔ)法形式，使表達(dá)生動(dòng)；用了first, second等使得短文層次清楚。用了because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句，增加了文章的亮點(diǎn)。時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)。用“wear + 某種衣服”來(lái)介紹某人的穿戴。時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。題目給出了標(biāo)題及寫作要點(diǎn)。寫作亮點(diǎn)：短文用了一些短語(yǔ)和句式，如：e to an end結(jié)束；on the way在途中；get close to nature親近大自然；volunteer to do something自愿做某事；help sb to do sth幫助某人做某事；take part in sth參加活動(dòng)。 寫作要求： 詞左右，開(kāi)頭部分已給出，但不計(jì)入規(guī)定字?jǐn)?shù)。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫。語(yǔ)法規(guī)范、準(zhǔn)確。在文章中點(diǎn)綴幾個(gè)并列句、復(fù)合句或復(fù)雜句式，調(diào)整文章節(jié)奏，提升文章檔次。請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫一篇約100詞的短文。【點(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求邀請(qǐng)Dave來(lái)自己的家鄉(xiāng)旅游，并介紹了家鄉(xiāng)的景點(diǎn)和文化。你想請(qǐng)他來(lái)你的家鄉(xiāng)一安徴一游,請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示用英文給他寫一封電子郵件。短文有以下幾個(gè)特點(diǎn)：首先文章內(nèi)容完整，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰。審題可知，這篇短文應(yīng)主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)，注意根據(jù)表達(dá)需要使用正確時(shí)態(tài)，并注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的正確形式。班主任決定在下周舉辦一場(chǎng)“My Life At School” 主題 班會(huì) , 邀請(qǐng)全班同學(xué)參加。、短語(yǔ)、句型。注意：1. 詞數(shù)。文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)，例如thank you for doing，I’d like to do，introduce sb. to，all of you，at home，do some washing，at a fixed time，have a chat，play chess，do exercise，deal with，a great help，in the future等。m going to graduate from junior high school. As your senior, I have some suggestions to the young.As old saying goes, all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. To begin with, you should arrange both your study and life properly.Moreover, you should get along well with others. To have more friends, not enemies.Last but not least, you could be active in school team work. Ability is as important as your study, you can also enjoy your colorful school life as wellI hope these suggestions could make your junior schoollife more wonderful.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如be going to，graduate from，to begin with，both…and，get along well with others，be active in，as important as，as well等?！军c(diǎn)睛】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練。提示：（校園干凈而美麗，活動(dòng)非富多彩）；老師（傳授知識(shí)，教會(huì)做人,經(jīng)常鼓勵(lì)）；同學(xué)（和睦相處，互相學(xué)習(xí)，共同進(jìn)步）。 。2．“揚(yáng)帆起航新學(xué)期，學(xué)姐學(xué)長(zhǎng)提建議”?！军c(diǎn)睛】書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開(kāi)思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語(yǔ)知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力?？梢苑秩螌?。運(yùn)用自然過(guò)渡法和自然銜接法來(lái)是文章更為地道、通順、純正。不開(kāi)心的事情； 。寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意：文章中應(yīng)包括表格中的所有信息，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)；第三部分的內(nèi)容中還需要自己發(fā)揮想象力進(jìn)行補(bǔ)充，注意應(yīng)合情合理，與上文很好地銜接。其次短文中使用了正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，語(yǔ)法規(guī)范，用詞準(zhǔn)確，注意了動(dòng)詞正確形式的變化。短文應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的正確形式。全文敘述清晰，層次清楚，主次分明?！敬鸢浮縊ne day Lin Tao and Meimei were playing in the garden. They found that a young tree needed watering and it was going to die. So they decided to do something for the young tree. First, Meimei kept the tree straight and pushed the earth hard down with her foot. Then Lin Tao knocked a board into the earth. It said, “Please take care of trees.” After that, they quickly got water and watered it carefully. Both of them were working hard. Their teacher, Miss Li, spoke highly of them.Trees are good for the environment. We should protect them.【解析】這是一篇看圖作文，要求我們仔細(xì)觀察圖片，弄清楚里面發(fā)生的事情，用英語(yǔ)將這些內(nèi)容完整地?cái)⑹龀鰜?lái)，并簡(jiǎn)單陳述自己從中學(xué)到的東西。首先短文內(nèi)容完整，符合圖片所傳達(dá)的信息，表述準(zhǔn)確。請(qǐng)你以足球迷的身份，根據(jù)下列表格中的要點(diǎn)提示，用英語(yǔ)向同學(xué)們介紹足球這項(xiàng)運(yùn)動(dòng)并談?wù)勛约旱膲?mèng)想。9．同學(xué)們，初中生活即將結(jié)束，本次考試后，盼望已久的假期就要到來(lái)！請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，制定出度假計(jì)劃，可以結(jié)合自