【正文】 own toy gun. One day, it was my birthday. I asked for it when my father came back. My family was poor then and my father didn’t promise me. From then, father worked harder and came back more lately. A week later, father put a box to me. A black toy gun in it! I was moved with tears. In order to get it, father worked late and hurt himself. He died a month later.Now I hope I can be a soldier and own a real gun to protect my country and family. I will remember my father’s love forever. Every time I miss him, I’ll take out the toy gun and say “Thank you, my dear father!【解析】寫(xiě)作分析：這篇作文需要就自己最喜歡的物品展開(kāi)描述，要求是進(jìn)行描述，并談?wù)勀闶侨绾蔚玫剿模约八嬖诘囊饬x。提示詞語(yǔ)： Chinese idioms, story, collect, share, learn from, acient提示問(wèn)題： ● What did you do during the activity of Telling Chinese idioms story?● What did you learn from the activity?● What do you think of it?【答案】The activity of “Telling Chinese idioms story” was held in our school last week.In order to take part in this activity, I collected lots of Chinese idiom stories in advance. Many students, including me, actively shared the Chinese idiom stories in the activity. After each story, the teacher explained the meaning of idioms and how to use it correctly. We learned a lot from our teacher. I did lots of reading in the process of preparation. My reading ability has improved greatly. What’s more, I realized the richness of Chinese acient culture. I really had a good time on the activity.【解析】【詳解】：這是一篇提綱類書(shū)面表達(dá)，只給了一些要點(diǎn)提示，但都不很明確。BritainAustraliaTimeJuly 1 July 14TimeAugust 15 August 24Activitiesvisit the Buckingham Palace （白金漢宮） visit the British Museum （大英博物館）watch football matches…Activitiesvisit the Sydney Opera Housetravel around the Gold Coast （黃金海岸）have fun with kangaroos and koalas…Attentionchangeable weatherAttentionwinterCost20,000 yuanCost16,000 yuan要求：1. 所寫(xiě)內(nèi)容必須包括某一國(guó)家的所有信息及選擇的理由； 2. 結(jié)合游玩國(guó)家的情況，自擬希望可以安排的活動(dòng)，并提出12點(diǎn)出游的注意事項(xiàng)；3. 文章不少于90詞，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；4. 語(yǔ)義通順、意思連貫、條理清楚、書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；5. 不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。同時(shí)要注意語(yǔ)言的表述應(yīng)該符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫(xiě)太長(zhǎng)的復(fù)合句；盡量選取簡(jiǎn)單的易拼寫(xiě)的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。短文應(yīng)包括所選觀點(diǎn)中的要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。文章首先說(shuō)明不理解掃雪機(jī)式父母的原因，接下來(lái)說(shuō)明自己的觀點(diǎn)，并闡述自己觀點(diǎn)的原因。havebe參考詞匯：尊重respect短文首句：I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life.【答案】I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life.Most students believe it’s necessary to study hard. After all, study plays a key role in their life. They also agree they should respect their parents, who look after them every day. Besides, they’re ready to serve the society and in their opinion it’s really meaningful. What’s more, they think each teenager is supposed to make a good plan for future.From my point of view, we need to make some good friends so that we can learn from each other. Also, we must be active and exercise more to keep healthy because it’s important to a successful life.【解析】試題分析：英語(yǔ)教育網(wǎng)站開(kāi)展主題為“How can a teenager have a successful life?”的討論，采訪了一些同學(xué)參與討論，寫(xiě)出他們的觀點(diǎn)及自己的觀點(diǎn)。請(qǐng)據(jù)上經(jīng)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文參與討論，并闡述你的觀點(diǎn)。case在這樣的情況下；這句話意為：在這樣的情況下，他們認(rèn)為孩子會(huì)更加輕松擁有成功的人生。think在解答寫(xiě)作這類試題時(shí)，要根據(jù)短文的中心思想考慮如何開(kāi)頭、展開(kāi)和結(jié)尾，將主要句型、關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)草草記下，形成提綱，然后再動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作。父母控制一切，孩子沒(méi)有自由。首先認(rèn)真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作。旅行社提供了兩個(gè)國(guó)家供你選擇游玩。近期各校都在開(kāi)展學(xué)習(xí)中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化活動(dòng)。要求：1. 請(qǐng)?jiān)陬}目空白處填上你心愛(ài)物品的名字；2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。同時(shí)注意表達(dá)的準(zhǔn)確性，尤其是表格中的第五項(xiàng)和第六項(xiàng)內(nèi)容。一例）。為了實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的夢(mèng)想，正在為此作出努力。此處according to, in memory of, a kind of, on the day, wele to do sth, all over the world等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。此處would like to, enjoy doing sth, learn from, take part in, such as, look after, allow sb to do sth, let sb do sth, look forward to 等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。m glad you would like to be a volunteer. Now let me answer your questions.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________