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own toy gun. One day, it was my birthday. I asked for it when my father came back. My family was poor then and my father didn’t promise me. From then, father worked harder and came back more lately. A week later, father put a box to me. A black toy gun in it! I was moved with tears. In order to get it, father worked late and hurt himself. He died a month later.Now I hope I can be a soldier and own a real gun to protect my country and family. I will remember my father’s love forever. Every time I miss him, I’ll take out the toy gun and say “Thank you, my dear father!【解析】寫作分析:這篇作文需要就自己最喜歡的物品展開描述,要求是進行描述,并談?wù)勀闶侨绾蔚玫剿模约八嬖诘囊饬x。提示詞語: Chinese idioms, story, collect, share, learn from, acient提示問題: ● What did you do during the activity of Telling Chinese idioms story?● What did you learn from the activity?● What do you think of it?【答案】The activity of “Telling Chinese idioms story” was held in our school last week.In order to take part in this activity, I collected lots of Chinese idiom stories in advance. Many students, including me, actively shared the Chinese idiom stories in the activity. After each story, the teacher explained the meaning of idioms and how to use it correctly. We learned a lot from our teacher. I did lots of reading in the process of preparation. My reading ability has improved greatly. What’s more, I realized the richness of Chinese acient culture. I really had a good time on the activity.【解析】【詳解】:這是一篇提綱類書面表達,只給了一些要點提示,但都不很明確。BritainAustraliaTimeJuly 1 July 14TimeAugust 15 August 24Activitiesvisit the Buckingham Palace (白金漢宮) visit the British Museum (大英博物館)watch football matches…Activitiesvisit the Sydney Opera Housetravel around the Gold Coast (黃金海岸)have fun with kangaroos and koalas…Attentionchangeable weatherAttentionwinterCost20,000 yuanCost16,000 yuan要求:1. 所寫內(nèi)容必須包括某一國家的所有信息及選擇的理由; 2. 結(jié)合游玩國家的情況,自擬希望可以安排的活動,并提出12點出游的注意事項;3. 文章不少于90詞,開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù);4. 語義通順、意思連貫、條理清楚、書寫規(guī)范;5. 不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。同時要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu),造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達習(xí)慣;盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,最好不要寫太長的復(fù)合句;盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞,確保正確率;詞匯、句式要豐富多樣,可以為文章增色添彩。短文應(yīng)包括所選觀點中的要點,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。文章首先說明不理解掃雪機式父母的原因,接下來說明自己的觀點,并闡述自己觀點的原因。havebe參考詞匯:尊重respect短文首句:I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life.【答案】I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life.Most students believe it’s necessary to study hard. After all, study plays a key role in their life. They also agree they should respect their parents, who look after them every day. Besides, they’re ready to serve the society and in their opinion it’s really meaningful. What’s more, they think each teenager is supposed to make a good plan for future.From my point of view, we need to make some good friends so that we can learn from each other. Also, we must be active and exercise more to keep healthy because it’s important to a successful life.【解析】試題分析:英語教育網(wǎng)站開展主題為“How can a teenager have a successful life?”的討論,采訪了一些同學(xué)參與討論,寫出他們的觀點及自己的觀點。請據(jù)上經(jīng)用英語寫一篇短文參與討論,并闡述你的觀點。case在這樣的情況下;這句話意為:在這樣的情況下,他們認(rèn)為孩子會更加輕松擁有成功的人生。think在解答寫作這類試題時,要根據(jù)短文的中心思想考慮如何開頭、展開和結(jié)尾,將主要句型、關(guān)鍵詞語草草記下,形成提綱,然后再動筆寫作。父母控制一切,孩子沒有自由。首先認(rèn)真審題,看清題目中的要求和要點;然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容,列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達;然后緊扣要點,動筆寫作。旅行社提供了兩個國家供你選擇游玩。近期各校都在開展學(xué)習(xí)中國傳統(tǒng)文化活動。要求:1. 請在題目空白處填上你心愛物品的名字;2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱。同時注意表達的準(zhǔn)確性,尤其是表格中的第五項和第六項內(nèi)容。一例)。為了實現(xiàn)自己的夢想,正在為此作出努力。此處according to, in memory of, a kind of, on the day, wele to do sth, all over the world等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。此處would like to, enjoy doing sth, learn from, take part in, such as, look after, allow sb to do sth, let sb do sth, look forward to 等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。m glad you would like to be a volunteer. Now let me answer your questions.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________