【正文】 d. Their teacher, Miss Li, spoke highly of that, speak highly of等等。語句之間注意使用恰當?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫。要求：。提示：1）What’s the benefit （好處） of outdoor activities? （12 opinions）2）Which is your favourite outdoor activity? How and why? （12 examples）3）What do we need to pay attention to when we do outdoor activities? （At least 1 suggestion）要求：1）表達清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；2）必須包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求適當發(fā)揮；3）詞數(shù)：100詞左右，開頭已給出，不計入詞數(shù)；4）不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名等。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如take place，in our hometown，in the past，used to be，go to do，on foot，by bike，better and better，more and more等。短文有如下幾個優(yōu)點：首先短文內(nèi)容完整，包含了題目中要求的所有信息，且層次清晰，文章分成了四段，每一段的中心話題也很明確。審題可知，文章中應主要包括以下幾個內(nèi)容：首先介紹同學們普遍感到壓力這種現(xiàn)象；然后講述自己過去曾面對的壓力；最后介紹自己如何成功緩解壓力。4．書面表達初中即將畢業(yè)，同學們都感到壓力很大。s more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people in need./ All in all, we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves and Zibo city more ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使語言表達多樣化，是本文的最大亮點?！弊詣?chuàng)建文明城市文明鄉(xiāng)村以來,淄博人民萬眾一心,眾 志成城,讓人點贊的行為隨處可見。As time goes by, there are many different kinds of munication methods now. As for me,【答案】As time goes by, there are many different kinds of munication methods now. As for me, I prefer to chat with others by mobile phone, but sometimes I chat by munication software, such as WeChat and .Mobile phones bring great convenience to people, but people can only hear the sound by phones. By using net software, we can easily see the people we talk to on the Internet. However, sometimes we concern more about mobile phones instead of the people around.In my opinion, we should pay more attention to the face to face munication and try not to waste too much time on mobile phones.【解析】【分析】這是一篇給材料作文，談談我對現(xiàn)代通訊工具的使用及看法。開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。2．書面表達“小手拉大手,同做文明人。而to protect our environment, we plant flowers and trees./ What39。增強邏輯關系，增加上下文意思連貫，句子通順，行文連貫。Less pressure makes better life. Thank you.【解析】【詳解】這篇作文要求我們針對現(xiàn)在同學們普遍感到壓力大這種現(xiàn)象，以Less Pressure Makes Life Better為題，談談自己的看法，和同學們分享一下自己的經(jīng)驗。【點睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，談了自己對同學們普遍感到壓力大這種現(xiàn)象的看法，并分享了自己的經(jīng)歷。conditions）差5生活越來越好，環(huán)境（environment）越來越舒適．6你的感想…（寫兩到三句）Changes in Our HometownIn the past ten years，great changes have taken place in our hometown． 【答案】Changes in Our HometownIn the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown. In the past, there used to be old houses. The river was very dirty. The roads were narrow and the living conditions were terrible. People were not rich. They went to work on foot or by bike. But now, there are many tall buildings in our hometown. We can see the clean river and the clear water . Even we can see fish in the water. There are many wide and clean roads. Our life is better and better The environment around us is more and more fortable. People usually go to work by bus or by car.I am glad to see these great changes in my hometown. But I think it’s still important to remember the past. It tells that we should cherish the present life.【解析】【詳解】亮點說明：這篇習作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達流暢。為了倡導中學生接近大自然，某中學生英文報舉辦了一次征文活動，請你根據(jù)以下問題，用英語寫一篇短文參加征文。請用英語寫一篇約100詞的短文。在文章中點綴幾個并列句、復合句或復雜句式，調(diào)整文章節(jié)奏，提升文章檔次。語法規(guī)范、準確。：短語：in order to，take part in，lots of，learn from，in the process of，What’s more，have a good time。It is+adj.（for sb.） to do sth. （對某人來說）做某事是怎樣的。like？2．Whyfromlike __________________________．【答案】例文Of all the courses, I like sports best because I am interested in playing basketball. I can make a lot of friends when I play basketb