【正文】 由此也凸顯了對歷年真題分析的重要意義。 bring “a green campus” to its full play, effective measures should be “綠色校園”，必須采取有效措施。本次作文常見的卷面拼寫錯誤如下表：正確拼寫 詞性及詞義 錯誤的拼寫focus focuseeffect effection /affectenvironment envirment/invironmentburden burdon solve slove serious serous true turesociety soceitytheory thery總之，考生在構(gòu)思和寫作過程中要盡可能做到思路完整，恰如其分地選擇詞匯?！径嘧兊木涫健糠段闹虚L句、短句、簡單句、復雜句交叉使用。profound長遠的。范文點評范文以“綠色校園”開篇，保證了文章切題。參考范文Creating a Green CampusRecently, with the idea of making and maintaining “a green earth” being the focus of the society, “green campus” has bee a more and more popular concept in universities or colleges, which, undoubtedly, will bring us an everlasting benefit to both our campus and our concept of “green campus” does not only mean a green environment but also refers to an environmental sense in people’s plays a crucial role in educating the young generation and the consciousness of “green campus” will definitely produce a profound effect on students’ various environmental protection activities after their ’s more, the young generation is under the burden of severe environmental pollution and there are many problems waiting for them to make “green campus” e true, firstly, it is necessary to work out effective principles for the development of sustainable and recyclable , it calls for people’s awareness of the serious pollution around us and actual action to reduce the but not least, it is necessary to strengthen the ties between campus and society, so as to ensure that “green campus” can work smoothly with the coeffort of the whole 近來，隨著建設并保持“綠色地球”的觀念成為社會關(guān)注的焦點，“綠色校園”也成為校園里流行的話題。因為很多考生對于“綠色校園”所表達的內(nèi)涵感覺比較生僻。s was very exciting you could provide the position for me as I39。除此之外，學生還要在作文中多采用閃光點，這樣就會使作文在基本分數(shù)上有所提升，有所突破。但表現(xiàn)出兩個出人意料：一是體裁，二是題材。對于體裁來說，本次四級作文屬于正反對比論證類的文體。對于題材，本次四級作文的話題是關(guān)于人們對于春節(jié)晚會的不同看法，屬于社會生活類話題，一反常態(tài)，沒有再次考查校園類話題。m a student who just graduate from college I must say sorry for your believing in could not be able to take this I have passed the examination to graduate I have mentioned to you at the interview that I have attended the graduation exam half a year that time, I don39。假如對“綠色校園”這一主題感到難以把握，考生可以從作文提綱入手進行分析以獲取對“綠色校園”這一概念的相關(guān)信息。這無疑會給我們的校園和社會帶來長遠的利益。第一段開門見山，強調(diào)當今環(huán)保理念下構(gòu)建“綠色校園”的長遠意義。sustainable可持續(xù)的。不同句型之間的轉(zhuǎn)換，能讓閱卷老師更好地了解考生對句子結(jié)構(gòu)的掌握運用，從而獲得高分。畢竟，無錯表達才是四級語言表達合格的核心。 construction is of vital importance not only to the physical development of students but to their mental health as ，而且對他們的心理健康也很重要。更多地立足真題，總結(jié)規(guī)律，切實提高自己語言能力，始終是四級作文備考的根本。從關(guān)注白色污染到關(guān)注博物館免費開放，再到綠色校園構(gòu)建，四級作文命題重點在側(cè)重校園類話題的同時開始向與大學生生活有關(guān)的話題轉(zhuǎn)移。 construction of “a green campus” will greatly stimulate students to take part invarious environmental protection “綠色校園”將會極大激勵學生參與環(huán)境保護。最后，應盡量避免單詞拼寫錯誤。call for要求。concept概念。最后但同樣重要的是，有必要加強學校和社會的聯(lián)系以便在全社會共同努力下使“綠色校園”順利實施。一般分成三個自然段，大概十句話，基本的分布為首段、末段合起來五句或六句，中間段五句或四句，做到結(jié)構(gòu)清楚，重點突出，就可以了。Above is my introduction to the Great any of you have questions, please feel free to ask me at any time.第三篇：英語四級作文真題Part Ⅰ Writing審題謀篇本次四級作文主題為“綠色校園”，這是一個看似簡單普通的話題，寫起來卻不是那么容易。 visit will disturb the normal always get into teaching buildings, libraries and so will make noise and throw rubbish , some tourists trample grass to take photos, and sculpture on trees to leave will affect the environment of the pus university is a holy place for study, not for It should not be open.【題目5】Part (30 minutes)Directions:For this are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to a pany declining a job should write at Least 150 words following the outline given below:，并表達對公司的良好祝愿.【范文一】Dear ,Thank you very much for giving me so much time for last week39。所以除了模板之外，考生還要在基本表達上狠下功夫，只有在平時多操練，在考場上才游刃有余。 need, the uping performance should invite some big names including super stars from Hongkong and are all eagerly anticipating this unforgettable evening show.【點評】本次四級考試作文總體上來說并不是很難。比較出人意料，又回到了老的考查模式。但是對于當代大學生來說，與大學生有關(guān)的社會話題也是需要關(guān)注的，這也說明考試方向的變化：校園類話題與社會熱點話題同等重要,這一點對于未來考四級的學生的作文備考的方向有的指導意義。t know the now I received the acceptance letter from the I couldn39。We all know that elective course can make a free space for everyone to show their strong points, develop their imaginations, creations and personal term our school would offer a range of elective courses which you can choose according to your own areas of always read all course information and analysis which one is suitable for us semester, I took an course about psychological health as my elective , it is a mon phenomenon that people go to have some psychological consultations, including students in always face great pressure from study and depressed for a long time, I doubt if I am physically I choose it as my eclective course of this the course, my mental state improved and foremost, I tried to build up a healthy , I realized that we need to find different ways to relax ourselves when we face severe , we should be to the electives All the universities offer various electives for students to may make different choices due to different as far as I am concerned, Fashion and Image Design course is worth studying for each , a good appearance may help us make a better impression in social way we are dressed helps us to preserve a sense of our own value and , Fashion adds spice to life with its rich color, variety, and world will be a dull place to live in if we always wear clothes of the same style and the third, also the most important, being welldressed is of psychological dress properly can enhance our selfconfidence in appearance, which will lead to confidence in our success in ’s the reason why I choose this confident people are the most charming people, I believe that Fashion and Image Design will give you an unusual Nowadays, there usually exists a wide selection of electives for college students to choose , students have quite different plans for their future so they always end up learning courses based on their own students may choose to learn a certain course in order to obtain an extra certificate for thei