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s condition A. differs from ours B. in that China has the largest population in the world. (A不同于B在于)③While it may be true that basketball and volleyball share certain features, the excitement each arouses in the spectators is not the same.(…是不相同的)①It seems safe to say that the advantages of marriage outweigh the disadvantages of divorce.(利大于弊)②Perhaps nothing can rival the pleasure from reading. (…是無與倫比的)③There could be no doubt that jobhopping has its drawbacks as well as merits.(既有優(yōu)點(diǎn)也有缺點(diǎn))④Men A. may be superior to women B. in physical affairs. Yet, there is no difference in intelligence.(A優(yōu)于B.⑤People39。so, then, therefore, thus, hence, consequently, as a result, accordingly, for this reason, as a consequence, on that account, it follows that等。s reforms have brought China a lot of benefits and have changed Chinese people39。t deny this positive trend.(2)建議法針對文章前面的分析,提出相對應(yīng)的號召或解決方案,表示對將來的期待或鼓動大家采取相應(yīng)的行動。對于表格式作文,常從描述、分析表格入手。 and while we are reading, we should be able to reject the poisonous content in a book, for it will poison our minds.So, eat sensibly and read sensibly to give yourself a strong body and a healthy mind.本文比較了吃飯與讀書的異同。(5)分類法分類法是根據(jù)不同的類別來討論,這可以使很復(fù)雜的內(nèi)容變得層次清晰,論述更全面。如:The Beijing subway is to adopt international signs.(主題句) The Chinese characters originally used for east, west, south and north are to be replaced by the letters A, B,C. and D. The subway operator explained that the four Chinese characters indicating directions no longer meet the needs of passengers, given the diversity of subway stations and increases in the number of entrances and exits.(因) Therefore, universal signs used worldwide will be adopted.(果)文章分析了北京地鐵采用國際化標(biāo)志的原因,為一因一果的形式。如:Before a stop sign was put up, there were one hundred and twenty accidents there in a year. After a stop sign was put up, there were only forty accidents in a year. Having the stop sign there decreased the number of accidents immediately.文章用時間上的對比來論證了豎標(biāo)牌的作用。re rather busy than dangerous。后按時間順序,先描寫1983年以前吃大鍋飯的情形,又說改革開放后生活水平的提高。主題句位于段末,既可以點(diǎn)題,也可以總結(jié)上文,給讀者留下深刻的印象。如:From the health point of view we are living in a marvelous age. We are immunized from birth against many of the dangerous diseases. A large number of once fatal illnesses can now be cured by modern drugs and surgery. It is almost certain that one day remedies will be found for the most stubborn remaining diseases. The expectation of life has increased enormously.段首主題句清晰地點(diǎn)出本段的中心思想,后面從對疾病的免疫、治療,及對疾病的攻克三個方面說明健康醫(yī)療狀況良好。改為:Clothes play a critical part in the conclusions we reach by providing clues to who people are。中心詞說明討論的主題(topic)是什么,限定詞是把主題具體化,它限定討論的內(nèi)容,范圍和展開方式等。它要求考生在正確理解題意的基礎(chǔ)上,根據(jù)提綱去選擇素材。這種圖表不僅要注意同一事物的變化趨勢,也要注意不同事物之間的差距及變化。④寫作。③柱狀,它用來表示幾種事物的變化情況及相互關(guān)系。要求考生對圖表中的相關(guān)數(shù)據(jù)進(jìn)行描述、分析和評論,并得出合乎邏輯的結(jié)論??忌⒁庾约旱淖魑闹行氖欠衽c主題句緊密連接,例子是否直接支持主題,號召是否呼應(yīng)了主題和例子,等等。由于這些寫作要求類似于提綱,圖畫式作文也可以當(dāng)做三段式的提綱作文。如2009年考題,我們看到了網(wǎng)絡(luò)既拉近了人們的距離也在人們之間豎起了隔膜。很多考生寫到了愛心的比較上,哪里要多給一些愛心,哪里要少給一些愛心,這就是偏題。然后,從作文的題目中理解命題者命題的主要意圖。從命題者的角度來說,這是為了更好地考查考生的寫作能力,如:理解、推斷和書面組織。因此考生平時應(yīng)關(guān)注社會性的問題,加深思考深度,并且閱讀英文報(bào)紙,積累相關(guān)詞匯。比如2003年的溫室里的花和2002年的中國與國際的交流。文章長度基本符合要求。文章長度符合要求。內(nèi)容切題,包括題中所列三個方面的內(nèi)容。(3)用詞正確,句式有變化,語言比較規(guī)范。因此,審題是短文寫作成敗的關(guān)鍵。英語寫作主要考查考生運(yùn)用英語的綜合能力,其中包括用英語組織篇章段落的能力、英語的語句表達(dá)能力以及語法的綜合運(yùn)用能力。所謂內(nèi)容切題是指所寫的短文切合題意,即正確理解題目的意思。此外,還要根據(jù)題目要求,圍繞中心提出論點(diǎn),擺出論據(jù),使短文層次分明,合乎邏輯。長度是指短文的字?jǐn)?shù)。內(nèi)容切題,包括題中所列三個方面的內(nèi)容。(4)8~5分。二、寫作B部分材料的選擇(一)選擇材料的特點(diǎn)縱觀歷年試卷,寫作的題目多集中在社會倫理、人生哲理、學(xué)校教育、人際關(guān)系交往、娛樂方式、健康和生活方式等方面。比如,有關(guān)人生哲理的2008年“合作的重要性”,2007年的“樂觀心態(tài)是成功的關(guān)鍵”,2004年的“終點(diǎn)又是新的起點(diǎn)”。這種寫作的難點(diǎn)在于將說明或描寫與議論有機(jī)地結(jié)合起來,形成一個銜接自然的文章。而“寫作要求”往往是針對布局謀篇的,同時寫作要求也影響語言的分配。另一方面是世界對中國文化的了解與接受。如果說題目與文字提供了中心的骨,那么圖畫就提供了中心的肉。不僅歷年的考查內(nèi)容有限,考查內(nèi)容的個數(shù)也很相似,一般來說是考查3個考點(diǎn)。句子寫完后,也可自問一下是否用了分詞結(jié)構(gòu),不定式,感嘆句等多種句式。如:Waller, Texas, is a small town for all other forms of civilization. There is no movie theater, no bowling alley, and certainly no mall. This place doesnt even have a WalMart. Residents of Waller have all heard the saying: “There are only two things for kids to do in Waller, and one of them is drinking.” This may seem humorous at first, but, unfortunately, there is some truth to it.描述是為一定中心服務(wù)的。它的寫作誤區(qū)是報(bào)流水賬,對數(shù)據(jù)面面俱到,卻不能指出圖表所反映的中心,也不能利用數(shù)據(jù)進(jìn)行有力的論證。圖表作文的寫作步驟:①分析圖表及說明性文字。只要指出不同單位之間的比較,描述如何增減,增減幅度如何,反映出什么問題,就可以了。它主要考查的內(nèi)容為:說明主題,分析原因或解釋做法。s living standard has improved a lot. In some areas, however, there are still many people living below the poverty line. They have difficulties for the very basics like food and clothes, let alone getting good education. What can we do to help these less developed areas in our country? I think we can do the following things.First of all, the government and our society must pay more attention to these less developed areas. The government should spend more money on the basic construction projects in these areas instead of spending it on cultural and artistic projects in cities. It should also encourage some private enterprises and panies to donate to these poor areas.Secondly, transportation is very important in less developed areas. We should help them build more railways and more roads so that the local people can benefit from the convenient transportation. It can also promote their munication with developed areas.Finally, technology is necessary in developing economy in these areas. Poor farmers should be taught technology and new skills and should have easier access to money in the bank, such as getting loans to start businesses.All in all, so long as we continue our efforts to help these less developed areas, these areas will shake off poverty sooner or later.再如:Directions:Write an article to an English newspaper discussing laidoff workers and reemployment in China. In your article you should(1) describe briefly the present situation of unemployment,(2) analyze the causes of it,(3) give advice for reemployment.You should write about 200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.范文:There is an increasing number of workers, not only the middleaged but also the young who are laid off from their jobs. Some laidoffs thus bee povertystricken and can hardly support their