【正文】 t adjust to the weather and life ,as time went by,I found myself quite happy when I saw the students I was teaching made great order to teach them,I had to keep on learning as a result,my English improved a ,I made friends with some of my are still keeping in touch by letter now.In a word,not only did I help those in need,but also I myself learn a lot that I have another chance to do volunteer work,I am ready to go.【解析】寫作分析：這是一篇給定標(biāo)題的材料作文，需要逐條完成要點問題的回答，描述一次自己讓別人開心快樂的經(jīng)歷，是一篇記敘文，首先要讀懂5個問題，其次要用恰當(dāng)?shù)恼Z言和銜接手段把這五個問題的回答聯(lián)系在一起，變成一篇短文，同時也要注意在描述過去的故事的時候要正確運(yùn)用過去時態(tài)。語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，語言準(zhǔn)確，語意連貫，表達(dá)清楚，具有邏輯性。你打算邀請外教 Peter參加。假如你是李華，請你為?？⒄Z園地“自信助我成長”專欄寫一篇短文，談?wù)勛孕诺闹匾?，分享一次使你更加自信的?jīng)歷，并說說我們?nèi)绾胃幼孕拧?、校名等相關(guān)信息。在描述得到的經(jīng)歷的時候不落俗套，講到了自己的家庭那時比較困難，父親是通過努力工作為我賺錢買槍的，寫作是富有感情的，也通過這段經(jīng)歷為這把玩具槍賦予了一定的意義。恰當(dāng)?shù)闹V語也為文章增色不少，例如用到了“Practice makes perfect”熟能生巧這個諺語。m glad to give a report about my ideas on daily homework. I think it39。寫作亮點：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練、要點齊全。注意過渡性語言的使用。2. 詞數(shù)80詞左右，短文的開頭已給出（不計入總詞數(shù)）。同學(xué)們該如何管理自己的錢，讓自己的錢用得更有意義？這是一篇給材料作文，本題所給材料比較詳細(xì)，寫作中注意將所給內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，不能逐字翻譯。【點睛】本文首先開篇功能句Thank you for your ，運(yùn)用多種連接詞，比如because，Besides，To realize my dream, 等使文章連貫性強(qiáng)，長短句結(jié)合，讀起來朗朗上口，不失為一篇佳作。請認(rèn)真閱讀下面的郵件, 根據(jù)信中的內(nèi)容和你的實際情況給他寫封回信。然后解釋為什么喜歡該工作，因為可以把自己的知識分享給孩子們，并且喜歡學(xué)校的環(huán)境。內(nèi)容包括如下：1. 你的壓歲錢的來源和用途；2. 對合理使用壓歲錢的建議（至少 3 點）；3. 呼吁大家節(jié)約用錢，把自己的壓歲錢用在最需要、最有意義的地方。3．人們對于學(xué)生網(wǎng)上交友持不同意見。文章要有層次、流暢。It’s spring now. Many people like to go out for some activities. I think it’s great to get close to nature. 【答案】It’s spring now. Many people like to go out for some activities. I think it’s a good way to get close to nature.When we are outdoors and in the natural world, we can not only breathe fresh air and enjoy the beautiful scene, but also relax ourselves for the ing study or work.There are many different ways we can get out into the natural world, such as hiking, cycling, camping and climbing. Cycling is my favourite. I join a cycling club, and often go out with other members. While cycling, we can forget our worries and have fun together. Also, we can learn to be a part of a team and help each other.Whatever you do, remember to stay safe. When you’re outside, it’s better to be with your parents or friends.【解析】試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)以“outdoor activities”為話題，結(jié)合所給的寫作材料，寫一篇報刊征文稿。YesNoHelp us understand what we have learned；Practice makes prefect；...Take up too much time；Make us less interested in studying；...Your opinion：要求：1．80詞以上。寫作過程中要注意邏輯準(zhǔn)確，注意正確使用連詞，借助實例、實際經(jīng)驗來佐證自己的觀點。A（n） _________ I have__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________