【正文】 整篇作文意思連貫，語言流暢，層次分明。westress,作者按照題目要求把表格中的內(nèi)容完整的表達出來，并加上了自己的看法。在題目中給出了一張表格，需要用正確的英語將表格中的內(nèi)容表達出來。18．（【答案】As we all know, China has been developing extremely fast in different aspects of our life. There are also many places being more and more morden in Ezhou. Our hometown is one of those places which have changed a lot. The followings are the changes that I can show all of you .First of all, The roads in our hometown have been broadened and they are more safer than ever before,which I think is the one of the most meaningful things for our local people. What39。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作亮點：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，開頭兩句很自然地過渡到正文上來。另外，可以用上一些句型、短語，較高級的語言，這樣會使文章更出色。 Why do you want to thank him/her?cook, 文中已給出內(nèi)容不計入總詞數(shù)。要求完整敘述圖畫內(nèi)容。t play dangerous games.Thirdly, we should eat some healthy foods, such as vegetables, fruits, and so on. They are able to help us maintain a healthy body.Finally, a good sleep can also assure us a healthy body. We should sleep seven to eight hours a day to maintain adequate sleep. If we can learn to treasure and protect ourselves, I believe we can have a healthy body and a better life.【解析】【詳解】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如how to do，first of all，obey the traffic rules，pay attention to，such as，and so on，be able to，learn to do等。同時Why not learn to smile? / Smiling to ourselves can cheer us up and bring back our confidence./ It will help us to get closer to each other and bring us ，使本文內(nèi)容豐富，條理清晰，表達流暢，是短文的亮點。江蘇中考模擬）書面表達學校英語社團正在舉辦英語征文比賽，請你根據(jù)下表所列的內(nèi)容要點，用英語以“Learn to Smile”為題寫一篇短文，參加比賽。【答案】I39。根據(jù)事情發(fā)展順序，從先到后交代事情的經(jīng)過，我做了什么，為什么引以為傲。要求： 1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱；2. 詞數(shù)80左右。要求從三個方面去完成寫作：1. 手機的正面作用；2. 手機給人們帶來的煩惱；3. 如何防止成為“手機控”。8．（某英文網(wǎng)站正在開展以“Going Green”為主題的征文活動?！驹斀狻?，用第一人稱寫初中生活中自己堅持做的一件事，根據(jù)提示，描寫“What did you do?用一般過去時，描寫How do you feel?用一般現(xiàn)在時。生活中想要做成任何一件事情，都需要持之以恒的精神。而非謂語動詞結(jié)構(gòu)The students have their own plans about how to spend a meaningful summer vacation./ Reading books can make people smart and develop believe that reading can increase ，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達多樣化，是本文的亮點。你們班的外教David對此很感興趣。本文所給材料比較詳細，考生要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達出來。江蘇中考模擬）假設(shè)你是Beth,前段時間曾向英語?？端鸵黄}為My English Teacher Miss Zhang的短詩。作文的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。3．（2. 要求語句通順、意思連貫、符合情境；3. 詞數(shù)在90個左右，感謝信的首尾已在答題卡上給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；4. 文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等?？忌Y(jié)合著四個方面及所給信息，要做到信息全面，行文連貫。天津中考模擬）你馬上就要初中畢業(yè)了，恩師難忘，請你根據(jù)下面的提示，向大家介紹你的一位老師（Ms Wang）。I’ll graduate from my middle school. I’ve met many good teachers since I came to this school. Here I’m going to share my ________ teacher, Ms Wang with you.【答案】I’ll graduate from my middle school. I’ve met many good teachers since I came to this school. Here I’m going to share my favorite and unforgettable teacher Ms. Wang with you. She is our English teacher about 30 years old. She is of medium height with long straight hair. She is strict with us in our study, but she can get on well with us after class. She often tells jokes in her often helps poor students with their homework in her free time and she is always patient and creative. In my opinion, Ms Wang is the best teacher who I have met. And I will want to be a teacher like her in the future.【解析】【分析】本篇書面表達要求考生介紹自己最喜歡的老師。Hi,I’m David, the editor of YOUTH. We all know the exchange students are going back to the US soon. We would like to give them some traditional Chinese things as gifts, such as Chinese paintings, silk, tea …Today I would like to collect some ideas. In your article, you should:216。 show your reasons why you remend them。內(nèi)容包括：1. 請你簡單敘述一次與別人發(fā)生沖突的經(jīng)歷；2. 你認為該如何正確處理日常生活中發(fā)生的沖突（至少兩點建議）；3. 呼吁大家友好相處。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確表達意思的能力。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dear Editorial Office,I am writing to remend as The Most Popular Teacher．She is Miss Zhang.She is my English teacher． She is in her forties． Her small round glasses make her look smart． She often works to high standards and is willing to work extra hours． She is kind and helpful， too． She always helps us with our study． She loves jogging， so she looks healthy． To my surprise， she has donated blood many times since 2001． She has also decided to donate her body for medical research after her death． I really love her and I want to be a teacher like her in the future． I think Miss Zhang is the most suitable person to be the Most Popular Teacher．I hope that you agree with me． Yours sincerely，Beth,【解析】【詳解】本文是一篇給材料作文?！军c睛】點睛：首先認真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達；然后緊扣要點，動筆寫作，在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，必要時可適當運用表示轉(zhuǎn)折、因果、并列、比較等關(guān)系的連詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細檢查有無單詞拼寫錯誤、標點符號誤用等，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。m writing to tell you something about our discussion today.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes!YoursLi Hua【答案】Dear DavidI39。6．（s important for us to keep trying to achieve our love running and I have kept running for three years.When I was in Grade 7，I was not good at sports and running was always my often failed in my running order to catch up with my classmates，I began to practice running every day after ，I was so tired that I really wanted t