【正文】 ck通過(guò)Email詢問(wèn)你的暑假安排。【答案】One possible version：As we can see from the picture，two people，father and son，are talking to each other．The boy, standing on the ground, is looking up at his father, slightly scared, while his father, seated high on a big Chinese character “fu”, meaning “father” , is shouting to his son．Such a situation seems fairly mon in our talking to each other, father and son are not in equal simply tell their sons what to do rather than listen patiently．Therefore, sons will have few chances to share their own ideas or open up to their fathers．They often look up to their fathers with respect, fearing that they might not live up to fathers’ hope our parents will listen to us more instead of just giving us orders.【解析】略 【題型】書(shū)面表達(dá) 【難度】一般第二篇：2011高考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)之寫(xiě)作常用諺語(yǔ)失敗是成功之母。A fall into the pit, a gain in your ，長(zhǎng)一智。All time is no time when it is 。An idle youth, a needy ，老大徒傷悲。Diligence is the mother of 。Every man is the master of his own 。He alone is poor who does not possess ，才是貧窮。Honesty is the best 。t aim high you will never hit ，難攀高峰。Improve your time and your time will improve ，時(shí)間才會(huì)珍惜你。In life39。Labour is often the father of 。Never neglect an opportunity for ，切莫等閑錯(cuò)過(guò)。No sooner said than 。Nothing is impossible(or difficult)to the man who will ，只怕不努力。Overdone is worse than 。Selttrust is the essence of 。Success grows out of struggles to overe 。Virtue is a jewel of great 。You cannot judge a tree by its 。學(xué)生作文主要從內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)、語(yǔ)言使用效果、結(jié)構(gòu)和連貫性、格式和語(yǔ)域及與目標(biāo)讀者的交流五個(gè)方面進(jìn)行評(píng)價(jià)。現(xiàn)在，不少學(xué)生對(duì)英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)不予或不夠重視。用順審準(zhǔn)題義，明確情景，看清要求。為此，應(yīng)注意使用and, so, then, at the same time, on the one hand, on the other hand, first, second,at last, what39。m afraid, I think等表示過(guò)度及連接的詞匯，使之有較強(qiáng)的感情色彩。1）He wouldn’t ∧ able to work out the math problem.（遺漏處加be）2）It isn’t said that they ∧ often careless in class.（遺漏處加are）（3）時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤。（4）語(yǔ)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤。39。如：1）Study hard, are because they know is the Hope project give their chance to go to school.（錯(cuò)）→They study hard because they know it is the Hope project that gives them a chance to go to school.（正）2）Wele you e back to our school to visit.（錯(cuò)）→You’re wele back to visit our school.（正）另外，不重視掌握單詞，寫(xiě)作時(shí)碰到生詞難句就委婉地去解釋，用模糊定義，語(yǔ)言生澀難懂，文意混亂，表達(dá)不清。簡(jiǎn)明扼要，表達(dá)清楚，是關(guān)鍵所在。如：1）He studies very hard and kind.（錯(cuò)）→He studies very hard and he is very kind.（正）2）He doesn39。t know what to do and how to do it.（正）另外，考試是根據(jù)內(nèi)容和表達(dá)給分的，要點(diǎn)齊全，是直接因素。格式。常識(shí)性。整潔文章寫(xiě)好后，應(yīng)認(rèn)真修改，不忙于提前交卷，避免大小寫(xiě)及標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)錯(cuò)誤，謄寫(xiě)應(yīng)盡可能書(shū)寫(xiě)工整，布局美觀。（提示：雨水、河水、井水??）（提示：人口增加，工業(yè)用水增加，污染??）？ Global Shortage of Fresh Water One possible version: Global Shortage of Fresh WaterMany people believe that the world’s supply of fresh water will never be used think that fresh water es from such a variety of sources that it is always sufficient for an opinion leads to a shocking waste of a matter of fact, the earth is short of fresh ,with the rapid growth of the world’s population ,the rising demand for water by industry ,and the serious pollution of our surroundings ,the world is facing the danger of running out of fresh ,in some big cities ,fresh water cannot meet the daily ,to find new ways to save water is an urgent ,we should pass strict laws to control any waste of ,scientists must work even harder to purify sea water and polluted water ,and try to find substitutes to reduce the use of fresh 有關(guān)環(huán)境保護(hù)的英語(yǔ)作文：水資源是有限的人們總以為淡水是取之不盡的，實(shí)際上淡水資源是很有限的。所有的動(dòng)植物都需要水。水，正如你所了解的，有固態(tài)、液態(tài)和氣態(tài)。The Importance of WaterAs we all know, plants and animals need do the people39。t live in them any the same time, thc waste water does great harm to people39。因此，許多地方缺水。環(huán)境日英語(yǔ)作文：關(guān)于河水污染的感想根據(jù)下列提示寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于河水污染的感想。，河水會(huì)變干凈。但當(dāng)我看到沿著城區(qū)流過(guò)的河流時(shí)，我感到很惋惜，想了很多。我們急切呼吁采取措施改變這種狀況。但同時(shí)，我也注意到我們城市的水污染變得越來(lái)越嚴(yán)重了。沒(méi)有水人類將無(wú)法生存。也就是說(shuō)，開(kāi)頭很好，也必然要有一個(gè)精彩的結(jié)尾，讓讀者眼前一亮，這樣，你就可以拿高分了！比如下面的例子：Obviously（此為過(guò)渡短語(yǔ)）, we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for “顯而見(jiàn)之”，但說(shuō)無(wú)妨，就當(dāng)讀者的眼光太淺罷了！更多過(guò)渡短語(yǔ)：to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus 更多句型：Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that…2． 結(jié)尾萬(wàn)能公式二：如此建議如果說(shuō)“如此結(jié)論”是結(jié)尾最沒(méi)用的廢話，那么“如此建議”應(yīng)該是最有價(jià)值的廢話了，因?yàn)檫@里雖然也是廢話，但是卻用了一個(gè)很經(jīng)典的虛擬語(yǔ)氣的句型。：社區(qū) munity 第二節(jié)：一、評(píng)分原則，按5個(gè)檔次給分。二、內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：下周六上午8：00 至 11：00：采摘蘋(píng)果：辦公室，下周四下午5：00前：帶帽子、手套【參考范文】 Dear neighbors, We are very happy announce that our munity is going to organize an activity for all the munity Saturday, we going to pick apples in a village 20 kilometers away from our town, and all are will meet at 8:00 am at the gate, where a blue bus will be outdoor activity will last 3 hours, and we’ll be back at about 11 o’ you are interested, please sign up at the office before 5:00 pm next Thursday so that we will make necessary suggest that you bring with you a hat and a pair of are looking forward to your joining Office 【解析】 本題命制穩(wěn)健，是中學(xué)教學(xué)中最為常見(jiàn)的提綱式作文。理思路：調(diào)整要點(diǎn)，講清本次活動(dòng)的安排。重點(diǎn)放在要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)全了嗎？時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)、動(dòng)詞的數(shù)、單詞拼寫(xiě)對(duì)了嗎？標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)、大小寫(xiě)用對(duì)了嗎？檢查完后再抄寫(xiě)在試卷上，注意卷面的整潔。這本身就是一種便利。；；。但這并不就說(shuō)明該卷乏善可陳。浙江卷前幾年基本上是選擇疑問(wèn)句式的標(biāo)題作文。09年，除了北京繼續(xù)考了敘事外，浙江也出現(xiàn)了敘事性質(zhì)的文體要求。現(xiàn)請(qǐng)你用英文給該網(wǎng)站發(fā)送一封電子郵件，向其推薦話題。在寫(xiě)作中應(yīng)注意如下幾點(diǎn)：“我們應(yīng)該感恩”。就話題而言，近四年都與外事活動(dòng)或外語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)相關(guān)。總的說(shuō)來(lái)，重慶卷一直比較謹(jǐn)慎，命題基本上沒(méi)有超出全國(guó)卷I的范式。I want to register to attend a course bout gardening，because I have liked flowers、grasses etc since I was a little child。What39。學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)注意如下幾點(diǎn)：，從四科中選取自己最有把握和有話可說(shuō)學(xué)科，這是寫(xiě)作的關(guān)鍵，過(guò)渡要自然；，要把握實(shí)用性。09年的Guided Writing屬于混合性質(zhì)：陳說(shuō)+議論?！究傇u(píng)】2009年高考英語(yǔ)全國(guó)卷地方卷共19套，短文寫(xiě)作共20篇（上海卷和廣東卷各2篇，寧強(qiáng)化訓(xùn)練1（1分）假設(shè)你是你校京劇愛(ài)好者協(xié)會(huì)的成員，在一次同英國(guó)中學(xué)生代表團(tuán)的聯(lián)歡活動(dòng)中，你協(xié)會(huì)將出一個(gè)京劇節(jié)目。4．下面演出開(kāi)始，希望朋友們喜歡。1（1分）李華父親的朋友陳偉是在美國(guó)居住多年的華裔。3．學(xué)校很美，有許多花草樹(shù)木，兩座教學(xué)大樓，一座宿舍樓。參考詞匯：選修課：elective體育館：gym宿舍樓：dormitory building1（1分）寫(xiě)信向友人介紹作家魯迅。2．他的小說(shuō)被譯成多種文字，并被制成電影，如《阿Q正傳》、《祝?！愤@兩部影片深刻地揭露了舊社會(huì)。參考詞匯：創(chuàng)始人：Founder中國(guó)文學(xué)：Chinese Literature阿Q正傳：The True Story of AH Q祝福：The New Year’s Sacrifice1（1分）提示：為引進(jìn)外資，進(jìn)一步加快你家鄉(xiāng)A城改革開(kāi)放。2．解放前是一個(gè)小漁村，以漁業(yè)為主，沒(méi)有工業(yè)，只有幾所小學(xué)。已有三千人從該校畢業(yè)。告訴Peter每天晚上你都在家，請(qǐng)他給你打個(gè)電話告訴你他是否來(lái)參加生日晚會(huì)，并表達(dá)你盼望見(jiàn)到他的心情。2．吃驚于家鄉(xiāng)的巨大變化。4．我表示羨慕他們，我對(duì)父親說(shuō)，將來(lái)大學(xué)畢業(yè)要回老家來(lái)，父親也表示說(shuō)他一退休就來(lái)。以下是張紅的簡(jiǎn)歷。在過(guò)去三年中一直是本校學(xué)生報(bào)編輯之一，學(xué)習(xí)成績(jī)?cè)诎嗌蟽?yōu)秀。參考詞匯：職業(yè)學(xué)校：vocational school專業(yè)：major（1分）給朋友小林的一封信，談?wù)労偕?。不得不回絕親戚朋友的邀請(qǐng)，只在除夕時(shí)打電話問(wèn)