【正文】 d theory in simple suddenly occurred to me that position writing was so easy and only did the top studentsdisplayed their talents but also we underachievers did a good , no sooner had Mr Jiang cited Francis Bacon——“reading makes a full man； confidence a ready man； and writing an exact man”than I found the last lesson was not a little disappointed at the bell1What an unforgettable lesson it is!So far the lesson has been deeprooted in my mind! back the past, there are numerous memorable moments emerging in my memory, which makes me understand the value of life.//While I was growing up, we led a poor , my mom gave me a lot of affections and night, she sat me on her lap and spoke the words that would change my life: “ Nancy, you are certain to be a great person and you can do anything in life if you work hard enough to make it.”When the great depression struck, Mom lost her she didn’t give up and she showed great enthusiasm in pursuing a new skill in order to be qualified for the new six months’ calculating training, my mom eventually got her present left a deep impression on me that everything would be possible if efforts were made, so is in my study, I experienced a lot of failures and surprisingly, mom was one of my strongest my mother’s words deeply rooted in my soul, I never doubted that I would succeed in the end.//People often say that gold and silver are the most valuable things in the I say that to be the daughter of my mom is more precious than everything else, because she gave me confidence and confidence gave me you may not have started out life in the best if you have confidence in yourself and you can find a task in life worth working, for nothing can stop you.(顧菁)寫人高三（5）Looking back the past, I found many touching moments emerging in my memory which makes me understand the value of my life, there is a woman whom I admired felt grateful to her because not only did she light up a love of Chinese but also she aroused me a sense of optimism towards failure..She is the headteacher in my junior school, .//She showed great enthusiasm in purposing the new class was filled with knowledge apart from textbooks, which attracted each student to be buried in the example, she was willing to spend the whole class in discussing what had happened in society recently instead of teaching us the way to writing addition, what impressed me most was her attitude towards the score we got in the speaking, teachers will lose temper once their students’ score are on the contrast to that, never scolded us for a poor would try to find where we had made progress and analyzed where we were still the influence of her, I have developed a character that never be elated by success for disturbed by spite of the fact that I have graduated from my junior school，I always can‘t help gaze at the graduation photo hanging on my only has we developed a relationship of teacher and students, but also a relationship of lifelong friends.(董辰凡)第三篇：難忘的一件事優(yōu)秀作文難忘的一件事田程輝我的腦海中有無數(shù)難忘的事，可那一件卻不同，它猶如書本中最吸引人人的一頁，也仿佛是天空中變化莫測的白云，更像沙灘上最美麗的貝殼。姥姥就迅速地清理了一下，把壞了的葡萄清理出來。剪了差不多一箱，我就累得不行了。而大人則在一旁摘葡萄，一串兒又一串兒，一箱又一箱，還有說有笑的，我和姥爺便沉浸在這歡樂中，雖然只收走24箱，可我們依然很高興。我迫不及待地過去，突然腳下一滑，“砰”我臉朝地地摔了個稀巴爛，小腿被劃開了一條口子，正汩汩地流淌著鮮血?！捌渌俗粤?xí)。老師拿著手帕的一角，輕輕地擦干，那方白帕此時仿佛可愛的精靈，在我的腿上翩翩起舞，讓我有片刻的失神。她微微頷首，把手中的帕翻個身，把干凈的一面貼到我腿上并綁好，染紅的白手絹像一只彩色的蝴蝶棲息在我腿上，帶給我一絲柔情愜意。千言萬語，說不盡對您的贊美；詩詞歌賦，贊不盡對您的崇敬；加減乘除，算不完對您的感激！日月星辰可以變，天地山河可以變，但唯一不變的是您的身影，最后我還是情不自禁地想說“老師，謝謝您！”。了解寫一件事要選材真實，內(nèi)容具體，能夠體現(xiàn)文章中心。教學(xué)準備：教師準備：范文一篇。今天程老師可是要給大家上一堂作文課哦，說心里話，你們怕寫作文嗎？作文真的很難嗎？那同學(xué)們覺得我們平時每天用嘴說話難嗎？其實作文也就是用筆說話，用筆把你想說的話寫下來，有句話大家聽過沒有：說出去的話，潑出去的水，話說出去了就再也收不回來了，可我們寫下來的話卻可以經(jīng)過多次的修改，這樣看來寫作文是不是比用嘴說話還要簡單還要好？所以這節(jié)作文課你們還怕嗎？那你們做好上課的準備了嗎？師：喜歡玩游戲嗎？那我們先放松一下，一起來玩?zhèn)€猜測游戲好嗎？咱們就地取材，就猜猜此時老師此時的心情怎么樣？在猜測之前，我有個要求，必須說清楚你為什么這樣猜。二、開拓思路，點撥話題。師啟發(fā)思考：每個人都有一雙眼睛，告訴你們一個秘密，題目也有眼睛，你們信嗎？題目的關(guān)鍵詞叫題眼，抓住了題眼，就抓住了文章的寫作重點。孩子們，現(xiàn)在讓我們一起來開啟記憶的大門，喚醒塵封的記憶，課前老師讓大家自己回憶難忘的事，你們搜索到了嗎？現(xiàn)在就在學(xué)習(xí)小組內(nèi)把你最難忘的一件事跟伙伴交流一下。全班交流，采訪學(xué)生。師：聽同學(xué)們說了這么多難忘的事，我的心也癢癢了，老師也有一件難忘的事，你們想聽嗎？汶川大地震知道吧？不僅老師難忘，同學(xué)們難忘，全國人民都難忘，所以老師寫了一篇有關(guān)汶川地震的作文，下面發(fā)下去并讀給大家聽，聽的過程中可以拿筆把你覺得寫得好的地方劃上波浪線，聽完后請你們當小老師來評一評老師這篇作文寫得怎么樣，好嗎？師讀范文。為什么感人？其實老師主要是抓住了以上幾方面來寫的。五、自由表達，落